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By : Padfoot

From reetinkerbell on October 15, 2004
I do the same thing, not posting till I'm done. usually that's because I change stuff as I go along, and then I might have to go back and change something and yeah..

and god I loved this chapter. draco was so totally in character, at least the character I've pictured him as, and hermione? oh, poor thing. never having had an orgasm. well, good thing draco's there to fix that problem. and draco feels guilty? oh boy, can't wait for more and I am so happy that you've already written the chapter (I'm assuming since I doubt the next chapter is the last one) since I don't want to have to wait long...what? I'm very eager to see where this goes next. ::grins::

love it.

Ree
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From ANON - semperputus on October 15, 2004
Amazing bloody amazing it just gets better Draco with Guilt what's the guy to do. Sad to find oit only five more chapters to go.
Can't wait for next chapter.
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From ANON - aku_neko on October 15, 2004
dear lord. you've no idea how many times i've laughed and gasped while reading this story. Dear jeebus, poor kids! wow, to have one's ear licked by snape: good yet bad. you've a very fantastic imagination as well as a marvelous ability to write. The mixture of comedy and sensuality that you've infused is perfect. Simple phrases and words make the story come alive. I have to admit that i was disappointed when i found that there were only 9 chapters as of yet.

anywhos, major kudos!!

=^o^=
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From ANON - genrou on October 15, 2004
" She was getting quite tired of constantly casting smell-repelling charms on herself, so Malfoy wouldn
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From ANON - NightSiren on October 14, 2004
There's a whole book on quirkyalones. I felt quite the same way when I chanced upon the book. And English isn't your first language and you write such wonderful stories? Amazing. Anyway, this chapter was very cute, hot boy on boy action and all (actually that was REALLY enjoyable). Just, even though Draco wasn't going to be a Veela in like, an hour after that bath, wouldn't he still be able to smell Hermione's arousal, or whatever it was that he could smell, like when Luna walked by Harry? Or he was he not a Veela then? No, wait, he had curly hair... so I guess he was. Could he smell it before when she was attracted to him? Oh, and she didn't even look at his bunny tail (of course, if I was bathing Draco, who was sporting a massive erection, I don't think I'd look at the bunny tail either). Side note: Veela's have bunny tails? I missed that in one oose ose HP books. Does that mean Fleur has a bunny tail? Hmm...
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From reetinkerbell on October 14, 2004
you're really on a roll here. have you already written all the chapters before posting? anyway, loved the chapter.
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From ANON - Maya on October 14, 2004
Bloody Hell! This is so fucking good and so hilarious. Please update soon! Love it!
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From ANON - J on October 14, 2004
asg
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From ANON - semperputus on October 14, 2004
What an amazing chapter I loved it.
What is Draco going to do when he finds out Hermione broke her promise if they fall out please make it quick I don't think I can stand a long seperation. Draco with curls not sure if I agree with that but thanks again for updating so regually keep it up
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From ANON - Laura on October 14, 2004
I love this story... hermione is going to come up witha polyjuice plan towithwith draco i just know it. then draco will decide he actually likes her once his mating period is over... :)
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From ANON - jeannette on October 14, 2004
i liked the bunny tail, and the puppy thing.i happen to think that a harry /draco pairing would be really hot. personally i like draco/ginny pairings, but i think hermione could heat things up for him or them.
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From reetinkerbell on October 14, 2004
I missed the update announcement and I got to read 3 chapters at once. YAY!!. I love it. I can't tell you how much and although I'm a dramione shipper, I am enjoying the draco/harry action - fake and real. I love hermione in this one as she's herself and yet she's yours you know. she's real, with real issues and thoughts. I like that. "jumping draco in the Great Hall" - priceless. and the polyjuice potion move? brilliant.

can't wait for more.

Ree
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From ANON - jaffa75 on October 14, 2004
okay this story just cracks me up. You put such a great slant on the hermione/draco relationship. I just love it, and now Hermione is developing some feelings for draco that just great. There are so many things that i enjoy about this fic and will be looking forward to the coming chapters. I love the fact that you have been posting so frequently, it's a real treat for us readers.
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From ANON - genrou on October 13, 2004
so it was polyjuice. i was trying to find the line that threw me off the sent when i got a whif of it but couldnt find it. should have known potter wouldnt look beyond himself or say something witty enough like "im being a pushover" .
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From ANON - NightSiren on October 13, 2004
I DO feel quite clever. And there was a typo that made me laugh really hard for no reason whatsoever. I think it was, you typed "yaw" instead of "jaw". I have no way to explain WHY I found that so funny, but it did make me laugh. Oh, and bed-head Draco? So cute. Hermione sounds like a quirkyalone. Quirkyalones (in case you don't know) are romantics who resist the tyranny of coupledom. Whether by birth (womb quilonelones) or through life experience (born-again quirkyalones), they are independent-thinking people who would prefer to be open to finding that magical click (and the myriad possibilities that life has to offer) rather than exist in a stifling or unsatisfying romantic relationship. I'm a quirkyalone/quirkyslut so I can safely say that Hermione woul wel well within her bounds as a quirkyalone to fall for Draco. Because they're just so cute, and their wit and sex life would be satisfying. Unless you decide to pull a Hemingway and make Draco and his play-boy bunny tail impotent.
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