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Reviews for Chance Around

By : JessicaFazio
  • From luvhp on November 13, 2007
    Yeah, beautiful story! Glad they are back together.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on November 25, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 29, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Narcissa Black on April 17, 2005
    Bloody hell, you cannot just leave it there. It's wrong.
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  • From ANON - ApriL on November 06, 2004
    aww, just read the story and it's great. update soon please
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  • From ANON - Anidel on October 15, 2004
    Your story is by no means horrible, though if I were you I would work a bit more on character developement and plot, trying very hard to stay away from fan fiction cliches. Other than that, I have several suggestions for you. The name is "Hermione" not "Hermoine"; you really should leave a full line of space for easier reading between your paragraphs; and I'd recommend that you get a beta to check for spelling and/or grammatical errors. It's always a sign that something needs serious editing when you misspell one of the major characters' names. This said, I certainly don't mean to discourage you from continue to write and post; keep working and you'll learn to avoid errors like those discussed above.
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  • From ANON - Raffy on October 13, 2004
    Good start! You
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