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Reviews for Scarlet Pain

By : AsheCrow
  • From ANON - Danaan on February 04, 2005
    Like how the characters are being developed. Keep up the outstanding work.
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  • From ANON - aewnaur on February 04, 2005
    wow.. another powerful chapter.. don't worry about the formatting thing .. i just copy paste the story to my notepad and read it fine.. i wouldn't angst over it.. just consentrate on the story.. it is amazing.. i just loved harry's line.. .. .. i trust you with my life .. just don't know if i trust you with me.. .. .. there is so much truth in that statement.. i feel that way about several people in my life.. .. and draco is surprisingly acurate with his saying that harry needs someone to save.. oh i should just say that i love this whole story.. lol.. from the characterization of snape to the breaking and rebuilding of harry and draco.. .. .. thank you for the update notice.. be good and write more.. hope life is treating you good.. more soon please.. and all that jazz.. lol..
    aewnaur
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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin on January 31, 2005
    ^^ Great chapter. I like the fact that your not making Harry rush into trusting Sev with problems. Seems more realistic this way,I think. ^^
    Update soon! ^^
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  • From ANON - mirestelfea on January 29, 2005
    Very well done, i am enjoying this story very much. It flows well and does keep ones interest the whole way through. I do hope that you plan on continuing with this as it would be a shame not to. I have seen a few really good ones never finished and it is a tragidy, i would hate to see the same thing happen to this one, so please hopefully there will be more chapters.
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  • From ANON - annie on January 23, 2005
    fantabulous fic

    if you could, would you email me to let me know when it's been updated?? =)
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  • From ANON - Ru-Shin on January 21, 2005
    Very good so far. ^^ I'm enjoying it very muchlies. ^^ I hope you update soon! I want to see how Harry's detention with Snape goes. ^__^
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  • From ANON - Kayla on January 19, 2005
    Great story! Love it, hope you post soon.
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  • From ANON - aewnaur on January 07, 2005
    Thank You for letting me know about the update!! I am so addicted to this story!! it is one of the only reasons i still come to this site anymore.. i hope bastard snape gets his head out of his butt soon.. lol.. i know what is going on with him but still.. lol. it doesn't make it any easier to take.. lol.. i like the draco snape interactions as much as the harry draco ones.. but of course my fav is when snape is trying to figure harry out.. sometimes the man is spot on and onthers he is just clueless.. lol.. i love this story and hope the next part comes soon.. thanks again.. aewnaur
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  • From ANON - Sara on January 06, 2005
    Hey! This was really good, and I really enjoy the little banters between Draco and Harry. But please, if Snape becomes even more of a bastard I may cry, or resort to throwing things! Interesting use of ghosts, too, at first i thought that the *two* were his parents, which would have been even stranger, but anyway. This is a really good story, loving Ron and Mione (actually being caring friends, how rare is that? :) )though the recent formatting is annoying, but I'm desperately awaiting the next installment! x x x
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  • From ANON - Read300300 on January 03, 2005
    Thank you for e-mailing me about your update! It was very much appreciated. I like this chapter a lot; it really made me think. I really can't wait to see what happens in the last detention of the week, seeing as how all of the other detentions were very intriguing. I really loved how in the one of the detentions Snape completely threw Harry for a loop whenever he let go after Harry asked. That whole scene was amazing. It was filled with conflicting emotions of such depth that I was really concerned for my sanity at the end of it. You know it had to have been good if it threatens my whole veiw on the world! I really loved that scene because it completely screwed around with my head for days after I read it; I kept thinking and dwelling on how it was possible to write such emotions in that manner, and I came up blank. What really messed with my mind was that at the end, after Snape let go, Harry realized that he missed the contact. It really showed how love-starved he is if he misses being touched by someone that he was terrified of at the time. The emotional clarity shone through in the way that you phrased it.

    *realizes that she just went off into a tangent about something irrelevant to the chapter* Whoops! Well.... *coughs* back to this chapter. I liked the conversation between Harry and Draco, especially at the end when Harry asked to see Draco's arms. It reminded me of something that my friends have done, especially since Harry had an ulterior motive. That definitely rang of truth!

    Overall, this chapter (and story) is incredible. I really, truly love it!
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  • From ANON - Winter Raven on January 03, 2005
    Ah, cliffhangers!! Update soon I'm dying to know what's going to happen between Harry and Snape at the last detention. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Sarah on December 26, 2004
    I love this story!!! I mean, I LOVE this story! Your writing is sooo amazing! I would love it if you could e-mail me when you update and include a link to the new chappie. I would be very appreciative!
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  • From AkumaKawa on December 22, 2004
    Coolsa.
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  • From ANON - aewnaur on December 21, 2004
    oh please update soon.. i so want to see harry in his next detention with snape .. not to mention the occulmency lessons.. great story i am simply addicted.. aewnaur
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  • From ANON - eyes0nme19 on December 11, 2004
    I love your story...!! keep up the good work :)
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