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Reviews for Improper use of Potions

By : PinkCorsair
  • From ANON - ... on February 13, 2005
    Well i like it! This is really great writing. I'd like some more please.
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  • From SphinxFantasy on February 12, 2005
    Very interesting... yesh. I like the cliffhangers and sub-plots you have going on. I must admit I also enjoy the cunning of Bellatrix, leading Wormtail on for her own devices is exactly what I would do. I think its comical that Wormtail is now the *proud* owner of Snape's forsaken arm. Go figure. I'm sure Severus wouldn't be thrilled if he knew where it was. Anyways, great job, and I look forward to finding out what that beam was for!
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  • From ANON - verbatim on February 09, 2005
    Yay! thankyou for updating! i love this story, cant wait for the next chapter. oh gods.... Snape wouldn't happen to be sleeping haning from that pole in the bedroom like a true greasy bat of the dungeons would he? :) looking forward to finding out.
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  • From ANON - Eddie on February 08, 2005
    Now that is a proper H/S smut story...love the threesome. the whole story was totally hot. update very soon! love eddie the Black Maru
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  • From ANON - cryingoddess on December 13, 2004
    did u noe ur funni? rofL, nice stori, continue asap :)
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  • From ANON - percs on November 19, 2004
    Great story. Loving the drama but loving the humor even more. This last chapter was particularly good though I was a bit disappointed we didn't get the details of the "long night". I also enjoyed the shower bit which was both hot and amusing. There is a sign in the employee restroom at work that declares in big bold letters "Proper hygiene is important!" and now I can't help but grin every time I see it. Update soon!
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  • From ANON - hermione's bitch on November 18, 2004
    *Drools* Girl on girl action?! My kind of story. Seriously, I like Snape/Hermione fanfics with a inventive plot and this has that!
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  • From ANON - Anna Mae on November 18, 2004
    Oh my gosh, the part where Parvati announces that Neville turned her and Hermione gay was hilarious. It made me laugh untill I had tears in my eyes. I was only sorry the chapter ended when it did. Loving the story. Please update really soon.
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  • From ANON - sarah j. on November 17, 2004
    BWHAHAHAHA! So hilarious! I AM a lesbian in real life (as opposed to fake life?) and although being gay isn't quite as switchable as you've portrayed it, it was still hella funny. Especially since it could all be blamed on poor Neville. Loved this chapter. Please update as soon a humanly possible. ^_^
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  • From ANON - cdkobasiuk on November 17, 2004
    Keep those girls working hard!

    Interesting backstory in this chapter.

    cdk
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  • From ANON - AnyuBoo on November 11, 2004
    Just discovered your story during a lazy search through adult fanfic. It's great! Can't wait to read more and find out what happens next. (I've always been a bnapenape fan.) Keep up the great work...I'll be watching eagerly for updates. :)
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  • From ANON - Gardengrrl13 on November 08, 2004
    What a Cliffy!!! Dammit! This is really good! I hope you update soon!!! As in Really soon... like tomorrow...
    I like how you kept Snape in Character, very believeable... although I hope he can regrow the rest of his arm...
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  • From on October 20, 2004
    ...wow...

    This is such a great story! After Snape just kind of disappears I figured I'd lose interest, but you proved me wrong. ^_^ This is really interesting and I can't wait till you update again! You are such a wonderful author...truly you are and I love how you write Severus and Hermione. I really hope you update again soon...both this and "The Power of the Quill' on Fanfiction.net (incidently, Jes Jessica White on FF.net).

    I'm going to read both until you have them fiinished...I promise you that.

    ~CR
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  • From ANON - lilly on October 18, 2004
    another great story. but please let their be a happy ending. i love happy endings. please continue and update soon.
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  • From ANON - daygonna on October 17, 2004
    great story u have going on here. im liking some of the plot, just not when herm and snape are "getting it on" with other people. Is this going to be a one of those 40 chapter storys or something simple thats less than 10? looking forward to your updates
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