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Reviews for The Power of the Quill

By : PinkCorsair
  • From ANON - Regizz_99 on December 27, 2004
    good chappy dude, I say you have Malfoy go with Crabbe, Goyle and a couple other goons, i don't really care, and I say you show off how powerful Harry has become, have him and maybe Ron, or just Harry, kick there asses.
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  • From ANON - scary miss mary on December 27, 2004
    I have no idea how the hell you've managed to pull this off, but I'm impressed! Your themes range from extreme black humour to explicit violence, and yet, amazingly, it works. I like the idea of the totalitarian Ministry - it's a development of the control displayed in OotP. In some parts I found the pace a bit slow moving; ie, the conversation between Harry & Flint then Harry & Narcissa. I can't wait to read more. Could you email me when you next update? I'd like to keep track of this.

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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on December 27, 2004
    i think you should kill all three of those pricks off in one swoop by pansey kind of the eye for an eye deal
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  • From ANON - NobisSolumNon on December 27, 2004
    Great chapter! I want more Hermione/Snape action! Just one question though: Will Severus and Hermione fall in love? *sniffs* it would be so... so... Beautiful!
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  • From ANON - destiny black on December 27, 2004
    thank you so much!i ca'nt wait to see these 2 get married.and pansy. the conversation with ginny was perfect.keep it up, ok.
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on December 24, 2004
    ROFLMFAO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That is just too hilarious!! Hermione seeing Dumbledore from behind in his office I got the most amazing mental picture and It Damn near killed me I was laughing so hard. I loved the part about finding something to gouge her eyes out with. I am loving this fic. Jaimie
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  • From ANON - illnevertell on December 24, 2004
    OMG!!! Pansy Parkinsons true heritage was absolutely BRILLIANT!!!! A true jaw dropper that made me litterally scream and then proceed to have a fit of hysterical laughter!!! I had the greatest mental image of her actually ending up face down in a bowl of oatmeal and that made me even more hysterical. I absolutely LOVED the whole food fight and the fact that the staff were letting it go on until they started throwing hexes. I could picture Draco Malfoy standing there wide eyed dripping in all kinds of gross food when Dumbledore finally put an end to it. The whole Narcissa Black thing really threw me for a loop!!! That came out of nowhere and was a FABULOUS twist. The Weasley twins experiencing that little psychic connection to the mayhem at the school was a very clever touch. *Kudos* This is a great fic so far!
    Jaimie
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  • From ANON - June on December 24, 2004
    Ch 16 - Draco, Crabbe, and Goyle are ENOUGH for the Burrow - most of the time, it'll just be Pansy and Mrs Weasley there, with Mr Weasley there at night. (Bill is in Egypt, Charlie in Romania, Percy not talking to family, twins at their shop, Ron and Ginny in school.) I wish Hermione was at least a little bit more sympathetic to Severus - yes, he's always had to pay for sex, but why does she get angry at him for that? What does she want him to do - pay HER for sex too? It's not his fault that being a spy and Death Eater puts a cramp in his romantic life. BTW, very unique touch, to have Hagrid and McGonagall be Snape's godparents. I'm still waiting for the Dursleys to get payback for taking Harry's money! Thanks for the chapter.
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  • From ANON - krenazz on December 09, 2004
    dude when the nex chappy comin?
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  • From ANON - Amanda on December 02, 2004
    I have to say i have read HP fan fiction for at least four years now and the cannon of course and i just have to tell you i love your combination of humor seriousness and plot line, ive read other marrage law stories and they sucked, also any non pwp hermione/snape stroies were very unrealistic yours is more like how they both would react to the situation, you are up with the good authors like cassandra clarie's draco domandies serise. awsome fanfic
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  • From ANON - Algerezz5673 on December 02, 2004
    lol miny malfoy
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  • From ANON - Reggiz_99 on November 30, 2004
    I like what that guy Jimmy, lol original name, said above, it would be neat to have Narcissa move to hogwarts, also let's see some smut!
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  • From ANON - Abi on November 29, 2004
    I loved this newest addition to the story. the story is very good, and I look forwrd to the next chapter. Please udate soon.
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  • From ANON - Leslie on November 29, 2004
    Brilliant! I actually cried at one point, and laughed in many others. please post soon
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  • From ANON - Jimmy on November 28, 2004
    Dude love the story, I think that Harry should find a way to get his $$ back, and kick some dursley ass. Also I think it would be cool if for some reason Narcissa has to move outta the Black estate and lives in HOgwarts in that new wing you talked about in an earlier chapter, cuz I think him going to the Black Manor every weekend isn't very feasable. Plus I wouldn't mind a little less story went towards the Snape/Hermoine couple and a little more story was written on the other couples like Ron's and Harry's.

    Anyways I really like the story overall thought, keep on writing it!

    oh yea and I love the new spell's you've invented.

    later,

    Jimmy
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