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  • From ANON - Anon on April 12, 2005
    Speed bumps? Speed bumps?

    ROFLMAO.
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  • From ANON - catpower on April 12, 2005
    What a fun story this is! Enjoyed the interior decoration. Enjoyed the sex even more! Keep writing, PLEASE. The girls' party was funny - Any other man would be glad to find all those cute girlies on his bed - but not our Sev.

    Some shocking places for sex: the Slytherin common room; Filch's appartment; a threesome with the giant squid; the quidditch pitch stands (during a game, of course); the Room of Requirement (which would provide for both their fantasies); the Griffindor dining table (I think Sev would like that); Anywhere Peeves is but please, not Dumbledore's office - some places are sacred.
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  • From ANON - paperbacksniper on April 12, 2005
    Oooh... somewhere different... not his classroom... everyone has them "making love" in his classroom...

    How about the Headmaster's Office? Harry Potter's four-poster bed? Or in the Great Hall? The possibilites are endless...

    I'm enjoying this... keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Ashley on April 11, 2005
    I had been following this story on FF.net and then suddenly you stopped posting new chapters. I had thought the story had died, but imagine my delight in finding it here! Update soon, alright? I love this story!
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  • From ANON - anon no more on April 11, 2005
    A Potter portrait in Snapes quarters. Fantastic! A lude Hermione? Why not! Very funny and erotic.
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on April 11, 2005
    Atrocious i hope, and by i hope i mean you must be kidding me, ginny and luciuos i hope to god you don;t do that. First sick ughhh and well that is really eveil. update soon i mean sooner any way good story i like the development
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  • From ANON - mysticsong1978 on April 11, 2005
    You rock!!

    Hmm..... the potions classroom is probably too cliche . . . the Gryffindor common room? The Quidditch stands? She could watch from his lap .. see how quiet and experssionless she can keep her face?
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  • From ANON - Metoo2 on April 11, 2005
    You should have them have sex in the great hall late at night as one of Snape's greatest fanitsies. lol it would be so funny. anyway, i love your story it was hillariouse and very well written i look forward to the next update.
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  • From ANON - wakhiza on April 11, 2005
    First and foremost, I am LOVING this story. Please, please, please, if you have an ounce of feeling for your fellow (wo)man in you, continue to write and update OFTEN!!!

    Second, I was thrilled to see Snape toss Hermione into the lake. She has been behaving like a royal bee-yatch for way too long. I love that you have kept the characters IN character (a first, really, most stories have them both turning to mushy idiots in no time!). This is the first fic that I have read that has taken a realistic approach to how Rowling's characters would really react if thrown together in such a way. Hermione's level of waspish bitch-dom has been really hard to digest, though. While I have no trouble believing that she would fight this situation on every level and with every fiber of her being, I am also rather stunned at her rather un-characteristic childishness and vindictiveness. this is the first time I have ever felt more for Snape than Hermione! Perhaps that is your point, though? To point out just how young she really is to be dealing with all of this, and how Snape is as much (if not more!) of a victim than she is? Anyway, I was laughing hard when he threw them all into the lake. Snape reclaiming his testicles was overdue (but worth the wait!). I think perhaps Hermioned needs to give at least a moment's thought to the fact that, a) Snape was forced into this, just like she was, b) when he did have a chance to back out, he CHOSE to be bound to her FOREVER, rather than let her end up with Lucius, and c) were it not for Snape's choice to make that sacrifice, she could so easily have ended up re-living Pansy's nightmare over and over again, every night for the rest of her life.

    Again, I am so LOVING your story, I LOVED Snape getting a little of his own back, loved seeing Hermione knocked down a peg, loved the (at least) physical congress they were able to reach, love the development of Luna's character and the unraveling of the whole mystery. Keep it up!!!
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  • From ANON - Dark Schoolgirl Fantasies on April 10, 2005
    Oh...my...god... I love this story! This is just so great. I need you to update. Please before I lose my mind thinking about what might happen next. I love the fact that you had Hermoine trying to seduce Lupin. Sheer brilliance. I would have tried to ^_~ Keep writing. I'm lovin' it.
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  • From ANON - 1296768304( tris) on March 28, 2005
    ok i think that they will paint it gold and red. that would so piss him off!!! :D i LOVE the story so far. Snape and Herminione are perfect for each other i mena they are both stubborn right? love it

    huggles~ Tris
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  • From ANON - DarkangelXina on March 22, 2005
    Well to answer your question....The houseelves could decorate the intire room in Gryffinfor colours and change the furniture. But what would realy make him mad...THE HOUSEELVES GETTING RIDE OF HIS OLD BLACK WARDROBE AND REPLACING IT WITH A COLOURFULL ONE!!!!!
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  • From ANON - guestness on March 18, 2005
    Oo! Omg, I love this chapter! A great follow up. ^^
    >< Hee hee. How about the bright colors of Gryffindor, overly done and dramatic. >O Maybe have the place smell girly, lol
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  • From ANON - catpower on March 18, 2005
    I am so loving this story - Hermione's first time made perfect sense to me, given Snape's lack of experience.

    I think Snape would specially hate a pink bedroom with furry cushions and cuddly toys - but maybe that's too obvious. How about a kinky black-tiled bathroom with some sort of bat motif going on? He would also hate the griffindor colours. I know - how about a large cuddly toy griffin, wearing griffindor quidditch robes and a small flying toy bat. There could also be a lot of non-wizard photos of Hermione's family everywhere - especially on what was his desk.

    Snape would also loathe it if Hermione binned most of his clothes and filled his wardrobe with trendy muggle clothing and trainers. TeeHee.
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  • From ANON - littleoldlady on March 17, 2005
    excellent, I laughed all the way through! keep up the good work.
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