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By : AlectoPerdita
  • From ANON - Sparkleh on August 06, 2005
    I meant to say earlier... that it was apparent Abraham was a vampire from the first time you described him. XD At least for me! Evil Bram Stroker... writing that long book with all the boring in betweens. It all fits though:3

    I'd say the biggest clue was pale skin and overly red lips... that always irked me about Dracula. His lips. Apart from him what's happening to Shavonne was another flashing red light! Sudden sickness, steadily progressing... blah blah. Two "insect bites" on her neck.

    But I
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  • From ANON - Moi on August 06, 2005
    I must confess, I usually dodge vampire fics. Just don't get into it. However, it's refreshing to have a vampire who is not Snape, and I confess I am hooked! I like the village setting, the Muggles nearby, the imperious aunt and her children! It's all good!
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  • From ANON - SilverPhoenix on July 31, 2005
    i havent been in a reviewing mood for the last month so this is the second one ive done in July (yays lucky you!!!)...its 4am and i just wanted to say that i really love this fic so far...like theres only 8 chapters and its already one of my fav Snarry fics, and thats saying something as i read on avarge about 2-10 fics a day(depending on how many chapters) well i better get to bed, but i hope you update soon i cant wait :) *big hugs* (sorry its so short but im kinda depressed and not in the mood to do a long review tonight)
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  • From ANON - BelledonnaSnape on July 30, 2005
    This story is emersed in a seductive darkness that wrappes around the reader and pulls them in. I love the dialogue and inter actions between your charecters you make this story very believable.It is a completely original story....PLEASE....PLEASE....PLEASE..update soo...
    ~BelledonnaSnape
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  • From ANON - Missi on July 30, 2005
    I started reading this fic today, and I really like it. To be perfectly honest (because I always am) I didn't think that I would, but I was bored and decided to give it a try. I'm glad I did, and can't wait to see how it ends. I'm glad you didn't rip it apart and redo it after HBP came out-it couldn't possibly be as good then. Please update soon, and thank you for writing it in the first place.
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 22, 2005
    Ooh wow, very well written chapter. Loved the lust between Harry and Sev in the lab, and the sneaky Sev that snuck into Harry's room. Gosh I hope he finds out Harry's true identity soon.

    Absolutley love this! Amazing fic! *Gives you a few tins of lemon drops and cookies for the lovely chapter* - Jessica
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  • From ANON - annie on July 21, 2005
    wow, i really like this fic a lot!!! keep up the good work!
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  • From foxracerchick129 on July 15, 2005
    This fic is excellent! Such great descriptions and everything goes into great depth. I love it! I truly hope that Severus figures out who 'Cedric' really is soon though. Should play out to be very interesting . Ooh and Remus, i knew .. well not knew but hoped that from the second Harry pounced on him that that was who it was. Lovely Remus, hopefully Harry and Sev will be able to complete the potion and save him.

    Truly lovely fic! *loads of lemon drops and chocolate chip cookies to persuade you to update soon
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  • From ANON - Morgan LeFay on April 28, 2005
    Fantastic!!! I'm in withdrawal already for the rest of it!!!
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  • From ANON - Colene Creevey on April 05, 2005
    Ooh, I like this. When will we get more? I really hope this isn't an abandoned fic. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Bonebiddy on March 07, 2005
    Whooo hoooo! New chapter! A good one as well. Poor Remus! It was good to see him in the story, but ouch! He he he. Plus the plot thickens... Dark creatures, vampires, Snape...Oh, my! I look forward to your next post. Please make it soon--RL permitting of course. The suspence may in fact kill me!

    BB
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  • From ANON - Hyouden on January 29, 2005
    oOo!! Hehehe, it was pretty funny when Siobhan referred to Severus' treating everyone as beastly. *chuckles* update this soon! I love this story and can't wait to see what happens if and when Severus finds out that Cedric is Harry!
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  • From ANON - Jan on January 28, 2005
    Got me hooked. You have come up with some wonderful characters. The aunt and the cousins are all very interesting. I am surprised Snape hasn't picked up on some of "Cedric's" muttered comments, yet, but that would take all the fun out of it! My observation is that "Abraham" had been feeding off the little girl, thus she was ill with something that could not be determined. I also caught the reference to Remus...which leads to the question of how did he survive? And how will "Cedric"/Harry react upon seeing him again. Also I picked up on the bat thingy staring in the window at our hero and then Abrahm appears....hmmmm....You have created a very intriguing story line!

    This has been a lot of fun to read...and I am looking forward to your updates....Keep it comin'!
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  • From ANON - Bonebiddy on January 28, 2005
    Wow! This story kicks ass! I loved how you started it with Harry hunting down the werewolf. Totally hooked me and gave me plenty of insight into what kind of life Harry is now living post-war. The Snapes are fantastic! I can't wait until Draco and Remus show up...a wonderful shock for Harry. The Vampire guy is sexy and scary. I love that Harry is not so powerful that he can easily get away from him. Your Snape sounds dead on! Your discriptions of the area of the castle and the village of Snape are great. I can't think of a more wonderful location then N. Yorkshire for dark castles, murder, magical animal attacks out on the wind swept and marshy land, stormy nights and hot romance to bloom. Basically this has all the makings of a wonderful mystery and romance! I was also glad to read that you plan to update this story often. I'm feeling pretty antsy for the next chapter.

    Keep up the excellent work and I hope school and real life let you get some more chapters up soon.

    Thanks,
    BB
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  • From ANON - caroline on January 28, 2005
    Aw, its good that you're being so thorough with your research but part of me really really wants to know what happens!!
    Great stuff though, keep up the good work!!
    Caroline
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