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Reviews for Beg for me

By : PartyInMyPants
  • From hot_stuff11 on April 27, 2013
    I liked it. I agree that any enraged comments are ridiculous, since you clearly have it marked appropriately. Very hot story, although the spelling errors, especially "new" instead of "knew", are distracting.
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  • From mamabear52 on November 23, 2007
    Yes, please do add more chapters. You said at first only a One shot then you might add just another one. So how many are we to expect ? This is a great story, don't stop there, but PLEASE DO HURRY WITH THE REST !!
    We are starving for more!
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  • From ElementalDemonessSorceress on August 09, 2007
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2006
    i liked it tho i think i would have prefferred it without Lucius but thats just my personal prefference, it was still well written though.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 22, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - 0HSNAPtheresa on June 29, 2006
    amazing. i just love sexual torture. :]
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  • From ANON - drool on January 03, 2006
    Ohh... He is so sexy, Dark snape is so sexy!!
    I wish he will make me beg, because I know I will do a good job!
    Keep up the good work, and looking forward to read all of your other stories!
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  • From ANON - Krissy Tina on January 03, 2006
    Its a very good story :) very...ermm...original i would say hehehee. Dont see how it would offend anyone.... dont like, dont read :D hahaha. Im proud of u hunni keep it up :D xxxx
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  • From ANON - moi on December 31, 2005
    I wish you knew the difference between "new" and "knew" and "no" and "know." I'm half-surprised you did not resort to "u" for "you" and "4" for "for."
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  • From ANON - Dylan on December 30, 2005
    I liked it. For only two hours work, that was some chapter.
    Great job.
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  • From Applekissis on December 30, 2005
    MORE....Pleaaseeee More!!!!
    lol
    Nice,well not nice,but good, story
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  • From ANON - candyguru on December 30, 2005
    Its very good! Although, I've never had a guys cum tastes like milk and honey ^_~
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  • From on December 30, 2005
    And for wahtever reason, AFF didn't log me in as my penname though I had logged in... so yeah, just so you know I'm not some random critic, I'm the above "anon" poster. :)
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 30, 2005
    My only problem with this fic are the spelling and grammar errors. Instead of "knew" and "know," you had a tendency to use "new" and "no" or "now."

    Other than that, I think this was a very interesting fic. Lucius and Severus were slightly OOC, but I think we, as fanfiction authors, always need to take a character and alter their personality even in the slightest to make them fit our needs (or Hermione's, in this case).
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  • From Angie30 on December 30, 2005
    *Fans face* That was really hot, I just found this story today and I'm glad I did. I've been in a mood so this perked me right up. :) Please continue.
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