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Reviews for Ron's Sister Wears Matching...

By : beau
  • From Pegleg-TinStar on August 04, 2020

    I do like the stream of consciousness style of writing used here.  It’s definitely not my favorite style, but it’s totally appropriate here.  As always on this site, the piece needs some edits for misspelled, chopped up, merged, and mangled words.  Yes, Beau, finish it.  Harry & Gin deserve a good shag, and you do seem to know how to build up the sexual tension.  Well done.


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  • From insatiable06 on December 24, 2008
    This is an interesting story although it is hard to interpret who is saying what and there are numerous spelling errors and it
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  • From Isake on August 21, 2007
    Hmmm...This is good without a plot...its a good way to keep the story going, with just discriptions...I like it! Do write more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2005
    you should definately write more... WOW
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  • From ANON - ~Kat~ on July 29, 2005
    Why add plot to perfectly good smut?!?!?! good fic! please continue...
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  • From Loubie on March 04, 2005
    I love the way you've written Harry's really broken (lack of) thought processes. You have a couple of typos in the text so you might want to consider asking someone to beta for you. You should definately write more though, this is good:)
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  • From PlanetPluto on October 23, 2004
    Definitely continue! It doesn't have to be plot. Just more smut, another chapter. :D
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  • From ANON - Atropos on October 20, 2004
    Yes you should write more! I've never read anything with this style before. I love it!!
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  • From ANON - carmelina on October 20, 2004
    yes. plz write more
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