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By : RossWrock

From Firepixi3 on November 12, 2004
Well well well, if this cirtainly doesn't take the cake in reminding me of my own high school games of truth or dare! I'm unabashedly enjoying this fic, and look forward to where you'll take it next!

In response to your comment to another person's... review. This may have been written to "turn on a guy" from your point of view, but don't you think we get off on this kind of stuff too? I could be completely straight or completely a lesbian, and I'd still be turned on!

Too bad petrificus isn't possible out here in muggle society... I'm sure I could find a fun way to use it!

Keep up the fun stuff, Ross - it's quite entertain

~Paige
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From ANON - Morrison on November 10, 2004
Chapter 5 (Harry's Hard-on) gave me a hard-on, lol. Please don't leave us hanging for a whole week, I really want to read about Ginnys dare!
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From ANON - lorett on November 09, 2004
Ross!

Obviously written by a male... I cracked up at your response - one dick is enough! hehehe. You no likie to share!

If I were a man in that situation, I wouldn't want to share er. r. But then again, I don't like to share my MAN....

In regard to the girl on girl, it's not a biggie to me. My husband has long since gotten me past my blusing of women grinding and macking on each other...LOL. (Rolling eyes) He does LOVE girl on girl and happily applaudes it.

I didn't find anything demeaning about the story thus far. I do find it very well written and stimulating. But, here's the caviot - I WANT TO READ SEX BABY!

Harry having sex and having fun with all the girls. I don't mind him having multiple partners, just more women's perspectives to imagine from! (cheeky grin)

Personally, I don't see Ginny as being attracted to women, but that's just me. I always see her as strictly a guy girl...more importantly, usually Harry is the apple of her eye.

But, I digress.

What I didn't like about the chapter? eh...a little too much of the bump and grinding on poor Harry. He needs to get into the action too.

And, regarding Hermione - Take it from a woman, who has had a very attractive man as her best friend all during high school and beyond...I don't CARE how prim and proper you are (which I was)...If you have a HOT guy in your bed and you're a horney teenage girl - FRIEND OR NOT - you're going to have a response to him. Especially, I think, if he's a friend. Women LOVE being turned on by a guy's intellect, by their sensitivity. We feed on sharing their emotions and finding out what makes them tick.

Harry to me would be an ultimate turn on if I were Hermoine. First he's powerful as well as vulnerable - lethal combination for girls. He's fiercely protective of her and Ginny for that matter. He would die for them - another HUGE turn on. She knows what makes him tick....Did I forget to mention the Green Eyes and Black Hair - oh yeah and he's athletic.... She'd do him. The alchol would just serve to open the feelings she would normally have hidden under the layers of friendship.

Just my humble opinion. Being a girl - I know....

Hurry up and write more. By the way, is there a way to get email updates for when your next chapter is up?

Please let me know.

Thanks, looking forward to next chapter. Also - you didn't mention what other stories you are writing. I asked in my last review.

Cheers,

Lorett

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From ANON - HPotter12 on November 08, 2004
CHAPTER 5 WAS JUST AWESOME! It was definitely the best chapter yet, but it would have been better if Hermione got in on the action too. For the Ginny dare coming up in the next chapter I hope that Lavender and Hermione get some more action (Parvati too). I don't think I can wait another week for an update so I hope you can update really soon!
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From ANON - Dee on November 08, 2004
WOOOOOOOOO HOOOOOOOOO!!
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From ANON - HG on November 08, 2004
Wonderful chapter. I just had to read it again before I posted. I did so enjoy the fact that Harry lay helpless and was at their mercy. I look forward to mroe

Update soon

HG
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From ANON - crumpet04 on November 08, 2004
Hey, I love your fic. It's awesome, and I can't wait for the next chapter. Wow is all I can say.
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From ANON - amniarix on November 08, 2004
OOOoooohhhhh La La ! What a fic. Sexy badness all round. And what great fun it is, I can see why you're enjoying writing it so much. In fact I can't think why you bother keeping your other stuff PG. Clearly smut is your forte.

As you appear to be happy to take requests can Harry please give Hermione an orgasm while she is still mostly fully dressed and even better yet a little reluctant. It's all about the chase, just aquieseing (need spell check) is so boring.The way you have kept Hermione restrained is great, a nice counter-point to the other three lovely ladies. I await your next chapters with great interest.
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From ANON - lorett on November 06, 2004
Ok Ross!

Holy cow! I didn't even realize you were a guy until I got to the last chapter! KUDOS to you for writing a ff - and a good one at that! I don't read many of them that are written by men. PLEASE don't stop writing this story - I love it.

I love the idea of being in a big bed, in a sealed room with Harry...although I much prefer Draco, but I digress. The other girls are optional, but it definitely makes things MUCH more interesting...Although I think it would be more perfect if it had been both Draco AND Harry in there....Now THERE'S every girls fantasy...

Anyway, great job. Like the story, too early for intimate details...you keep going, maybe you'll get some....(evil grin)

Please email me when you have your next chapter posted.

Good job! I just LOVE smut with a plot....Well, I really just love smut, but the plot is always a plus!

By the way, what are your other stories and where are they posted.

Cheers,

Lorett
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From ANON - ceceng on November 05, 2004
GRIN - brilliant chapter! Please continue as you have done so far.
The part with Harry's exposed woody and the sudden downhill reaction reminds me of a situation from my own life. I was sketching and painting croquis (I'm a painter) - using a male model. And he was ... well you get the picture - so to speak. LOL! Anyway, I have never had to erase and reconstruct a certain part of a drawing as many times as I did at that particular occasion. Very educational - and I was soooo innocent in those days (giggles). And that's just one of the flashbacks I get from reading your story (aaaah, sweet pervy memories).
Can't wait to read the next part. Keep up the good work, young man. ;-)

Ceceng
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From ANON - Muddgutts on November 05, 2004
Good chapter there. I'm happy you updated I was checking back like twice a day waiting for it. If this story continues to get really erotic I may have to do an illustration for it. I've done a few H/Hr sex scenes already and one nice H/Hr/T one. I'm mainly a H/Hr shipper, but this stories had peaked my interest too much. So I'm requesting a scene of H/Hr/G so I have a reason to draw smut for it. ^__^
here is a like to some of my past NC-17 artwork:
http://www.boomspeed.com/muddgutts/HPHGX.jpg
http://www.boomspeed.com/muddgutts/behind.jpg
http://www.boomspeed.com/muddgutts/lovetrails.jpg
http://img.photobucket.com/albums/v335/muddgutts/artwork_hp/H_HR_T.jpg
http://www.boomspeed.com/muddgutts/ontop.gif

So I hope these pic inspire you, and I'll work on a piece for your story ok.

Muddgutts
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From ANON - Annie on November 05, 2004
Please, just don't let Harry shag Hermione. I so love this story but I don't like the two of them 2gether ;o)
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From ANON - K on November 05, 2004
GREAT story I cant wait to read more. please dont keep us waiting long. Keep on writting your awesome.
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From ANON - Anonymous on November 05, 2004
Hmmm... I'll have to write down one of the better one's and get back to you on that one. How about the first time I got lap dance from a tall built, lass named 'Siren?' That one was atrue story though.

Hermione's take was excellent. Although not nearly as good as Lavender and Parvati's dare. Harry getting any action anytime soon? After all, I am a 'chick.'
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From ANON - Natasha on November 05, 2004
OHH... How very exciting!! Lovin' the story so far! I thought is was very 'H O T' when Hermione did her 'truth' and the two girls played it out for her! Very arousing. What a great situation to be in!! LOL I'd really like to see Hermione and Ginny experiment! (Although I'm really a Harry/Ginny Fan). I have to say, I am curious about girl on girl situations..(shh...) And as always terrific writing! Poor Harry, such a terrible week, he deserves a break! OK. Hope to see a post soon but don't rush. Anticipation is high!!

Aloha,
Aurora
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