Click Here!

Reviews for The Best Revenge

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - KELLI on December 30, 2005
    This has to be the 20th time I've reread this fic and I love it more every time. I really do wish that you could continue the story somehow-perhaps a chance meeting years later after Hermione has a few men under her belt? The dialogue is so perfect (especially Lucius) I can actually hear Jason Isaacs' slick delivery. And I perfectly agree with your final note-It is completely impossible for Lucius to be anything other than a Complete Sex God! -Sigh-I just wish he were mine!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Ana on December 23, 2005
    Your dialogue and plot development are exceptional at best. I thoroughly enjoyed this one-shot. My congratulations to a great author. If you ever write anything else, please do contact me. I will always be a willing audience.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - GothicTemptress on December 08, 2005
    "Thousands, I suspect. Most end tragically. Avoid those."

    How true...what a lovely way for your readers to spend an evening. I truly enjoyed reading this, and wish you'd continue this somehow. Does she get to utilize these new skills, and with whom? I can use my imagination, but you do a sublime job of it, and I'd love to know what YOU think. ;)

    Fabulously done...love love loved it!!!

    Becca

    Report Review

  • From ANON - Herm on November 14, 2005
    I must say that I dumbfounded and extremely impressed. First of all, your writing skills in general are fantastic - not to mention your obvious gift for writing HG/LM. It is, by far, the best one I have ever had the privelage of reading. Although this may seem rash, I do have to seriously encourage you to write something and try to have it published. You deliver a natural flow with sophisticated language and managed to merry the two perfectly. Please don't stop writing... I'll definatly always read. Thanks for a fantastic story!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - dee on November 12, 2005
    excellent story, but i would've liked to see more of harry and ginny
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Katelynxm on November 01, 2005
    that was awesome, beautiful and sad. i know im going to be particularly cruel to my harry plushie for the next couple of days. This story was so wonderfully written, and i loved you hermione and snape characterizations, and lucius was like a artistocrat-;) I loved how he tried to hit dobby with the book, and i love hermione's conversation with harry. And when she talked with ron, i almost cried. The ending was sad, unexpected and profound, the kind that leaves you thinking and hoping long after youve done read the story.
    Very very well done..

    -xm
    Report Review

  • From ANON - lemonade on October 25, 2005
    I like this! I normally don't enjoy pig-Harry in fictions, but I didn't mind this at all. It's funny how Lucius' "lie" for Hermione was more truth than not in the end. I think a sequel would be interesting, if you think you could push one out. Maybe she could piss Harry off even more and end up with Severus!! Harry could then be the boy-who-had-a-stroke. ;D Anyway, I truly enjoyed, even without the fluffy love at the end.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Leda on October 22, 2005
    I can't believe that I haven't stumbled on this before. Is there more, a sequel maybe? Please, please write more!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Maria on October 11, 2005
    Very well done, love the dialogue.
    Report Review

  • From ShilohDarke on October 10, 2005
    Very well written. I love the interaction between the two... also I wonder in my evil way if perhaps this story could be used as an opening for Severus to make any desires for Hermione known. Hint, Hint!
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Jewel on October 07, 2005
    Very nice bit of Lucius/Hermione fiction! It doesn't have that much smut, but it more then makes up for that in heart, well done :) I particularily enjoyed the last line
    Report Review

  • From ANON - Bambu on October 04, 2005
    This is not the first time I've read this fic, I must've stumbled over it in the lj lists somewhere before. But I wanted to tell you just how much I've enjoyed it. It's clever, sly and gorgeous, and I'm just referring to Lucius. Your Hermione is a beautiful blend of capability and insecurity, and I love the change in her. I also happen to thoroughly enjoy your Snape -- he's snarky and commanding, and the banter between the two Slytherins is really delicious.

    However, among the several witty lines, this is probably my favorite: "Subtlety isn't always the wisest approach, Mr. Malfoy. Sometimes, it's best to simply club a snake over the head and have done with it." Each time I read it, I laugh. She might be direct, but she's effective.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - tig on October 04, 2005
    this is good!! very good!! enjoyed it a lot. u have ensured the progress of the story to be precise and logical and it is a pleasure reading it. the ending is appropriate. ^^
    Report Review

  • From ANON - DB2020 on October 03, 2005
    HOLY HELL! That was amazing! I am so awestruck, that I now find myself stumbling for the best praises I could give. That story was so great, and your writing was...was... so, so great. I loved it... I couldn't stop reading. The plot, the characters, the way everything flowed so wonderfully. I'm a total fan... I wish there were more hg/lm fics out there, done with such grace. ^_^ I'm totally content.
    Report Review

  • From ANON - firewall on October 02, 2005
    It was a wonderful story. I loved the Slytherin in Lucius bringing out the Lioness in Hermione. Well done.
    Report Review

T.O.S. | Content Guidelines | DMCA Info | F.A.Q. | Facebook | Tumblr | Abuse | Support | Contact | Donate

Click Here!