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Reviews for The Best Revenge

By : scatteredlogic
  • From ANON - JTBJAB on October 02, 2005
    That was hilarious! Although I would have liked to have seen Hermione go back to Harry for one last bit of revenge - show him what she can do now - then still say it is over!!!

    This was well written - well done!
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  • From ANON - Rolly on October 02, 2005
    Excellent fic! You might consider putting it in the Lucius/hermione section so other fans can find it easily. I would have never come across this story if it hadn't been recently edited and thus pushed to the top.
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  • From ANON - Melantha Nocturne on May 13, 2005
    Are you going to continue? Either way is wonderful, but I greatly enjoy your Lucius. Mmm....
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  • From ANON - smallsparrow on December 27, 2004
    i just read ur story and i love it. sure it is complete? i would love to read additional chapters. this plot has so much potential. maybe u can change ur mind and write a little more about lucius and hermione and even servus? i would die for it.
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  • From ANON - LaRoseNoire on October 25, 2004
    YOU'RE BACK...and in MY fandom! I cannot tell you how happy it made me to see your story. Of course, reading it made me even happ In In character characters, arch dialogue and an actually believeable premise for LM/HG intimacy, all well written and beautifully paced. Absolutely delicious. And with that ending, I can pretend that Severus finally woke up and realized that HG was worth a second look and then...

    I do hope there will be more fortcoming, soon, in whatever fandom you choose to dabble in next.
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  • From ANON - paig on October 24, 2004
    Hi. Just wanted to let you know that I absolutely loved this story. Not only did it sound well planned, you paced it well, and your style of writing kept the reader (me) reading. There's potential to rewrite it as multichapter if you want to make it smuttier (it is adultfanfic), or to write a sequal. You also wrote the characters well. When I get my own up, this story will definately be on my Recommended Reading list. I haven't read anything else by you yet, but if you have other that I like, I promise to put you on my Favourite Authors list.
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  • From ANON - mimi on October 23, 2004
    All I can say is this was outstanding! I wish this was a series.
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  • From ANON - Armadillo on October 22, 2004
    really a very nice ficlet
    liked the idea and the style of him using her using him (especially her NOT being girly-squeamish...)
    please do continue !
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  • From ANON - scifichick774 on October 22, 2004
    That was amazing. I think you wrote Hermione and Lucius both in character and I could picture every conversation between them happening. Well done.
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  • From ANON - SWKAY on October 22, 2004
    I loved it... This woukd be a great story to continue. You would not even need to put them together again. Maybe a reaction out of one Ginvera Weasley and Harry Potter about the new Hermione. I will say this again I loved it.
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  • From ANON - AureliaFlint on October 22, 2004
    I have to say that I loved this fic. It was so good! Lucius, in particular, was deliciously in character. I actually laughed aloud when I read these parts:

    "Don't think of it as accepting my help," she said wryly. "Think of it as taking advantage of me."

    He pursed his lips thoughtfully and then nodded once before taking her hand.

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    At any rate, that selfsame honour now demanded that he admit he might owe her a small debt.

    Finally, he decided that he would give her the information about Potter and then offer to assist her in obtaining revenge. It occurred to him that she might consider herself too noble for such a petty thing as retribution, but he abandoned that thought quickly. She was a woman. She would want vengeance.

    Furthermore, he was still so bored. With the proper orchestration, this could prove to be very amusing, indeed.
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    He smiled. "Perhaps we'll work on your threats, as well. You still lack subtlety."

    Well done!

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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on October 22, 2004
    That was so good...I'ed like to see the story continue. Wouldn't it be interesting if Lucius can't forget her, and Hermione can't forget him....so they accidentally run into each other repeatedly.....and so on and so on.
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