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Reviews for Baby Serena

By : moonstonemystyk
  • From ANON - Grimm on October 14, 2015
    Why are they his guardians til hes 18 the wizard coming of age is 17 so why does he need legal guardians for an extra year, makes no sense....
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  • From ANON - rowenasheir on July 14, 2015
    When will you being completing this story?
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  • From horsesrules on October 25, 2013
    write more its good
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  • From Sullen-Faythe on December 08, 2012
    This is good there was a few typos that caused me trouble but other than that I enjoyed reading.
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  • From dominique1 on December 07, 2010
    i must say i like that pet was awitch and dudleys his son and albus should die loooking forward to more
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  • From Phyrephreak2008 on March 06, 2010
    please please please update i love this story
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  • From msremus119 on February 17, 2010
    I love where this is going. Does Dudley actually go to Hogwarts now? What year? Are Sev, Siri and Remus ever going to be bonded? Are Draco and Harry going to bond eventually? What's up with Petunia?
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  • From Kalendral9 on March 18, 2009
    Any more? is this the end? It is good, with there was more... K
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  • From animearts on January 21, 2008
    I really like you story. I was wondering if you are going to finish this story.
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  • From leeannpitbull on January 30, 2007
    Is this the end of the story, or will there be more. I hope there is more. Dumbledore needs to have his ass kicked. This story rocks!
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  • From ANON - rosa on August 09, 2006
    I love the story and hope you update soon.
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  • From ANON - JJ on January 17, 2006
    I originally didn't read this one because the summary made me think that Harry and Dudley had sex and made a baby. Now I've read it and I'm glad I did!!! A very original story for me!!! When will they learn that Voldy is actually Dumbledore? I don't care, I just hope Wormtail isn't acting as McGonagal! He can be that awful divination teacher, or Filch. I love the Sirius/Severus/Remus triangle! And if Dudley is so powerful as a new wizard, what will happen with Serena? Are you going to have her be the ultimate end to Voldy? That would be soooooo cool!
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  • From ANON - joanna on January 12, 2006
    hi , i just read your story and i really really love it
    i hope you do a other one
    i can't waith to see what's
    going to have been next time
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  • From ANON - angeloffire83 on January 11, 2006
    wow, i thought this story was a good new twist to fanfiction! Though, I must say it jumps fast, and you should consider a beta to help in your spelling/grammar. I would wring Dumbie's neck I would! I think you should give us a floor map of how many rooms and where everyone is staying in the house...well maybe not if they will be attending Hoggies soon...let me say, I hope that Dumbie loses his HeadMaster Position and its taken over by someone close to the group but not from the group itself...should they trust minerva? I hope so. Does this mean duddles will get a new girly? such as ginny? or is he to be gay also and get with bill from the sounds of things? What about the werewolf? does dudley not have that passed on? or is it a recessive gene only coming out when totally pissed off like the Hulk? lol... SS/RL/SB always a good pairing. Petunia should talk to her sisters/james portrait sometime. Molly should go with them, perhaps become Madam Pomfreys assistant? Or head of the house elves? lol...you know molly loves a kitchen or to mend a boo boo....lmao... So....give us a bit about Hermione, she's sort of just sitting in the background at the moment and so is Ron, whenever doing a story with harry, must keep the trio strong in a story, they are bestbuds after all...well I could go into more stuff but its late. If you can, send me answers to my email : S_MOON_83 at hotmail[dot]com
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  • From ANON - angel on January 10, 2006
    please please please please update soon i would love to read more this is a great story ....in till next time later for now

    angel
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