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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

By : oldwolf
  • From ANON - James on July 11, 2005
    You REALLY need to update this. this is one of the best stories I have ever read on any fan fiction site. There is a ton of sex but you have added a plot as well without subtracting from the overall erotic presence this story has. I will be eagerly awaiting updates on this story in the future.

    James
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  • From ANON - lilywood on July 08, 2005
    This is a strange story. There is still a missing chapter after Chapter One. I find everyones dialogue and characters very stiff.
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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on July 08, 2005
    i loved this story from the get go so pls pls pls contibue to write it don't stop as i like this story alot
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  • From ANON - Molly-Fan on July 08, 2005
    yeehaa finally Molly gets a part in your story :)
    I hope Harry will join Tonks and Molly
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  • From on July 07, 2005
    Good chapter but I was a little disappointed with no Harry and his slaves as they are my favorite

    I hope Harry starts becoming more forceful with Bella and has Narcissa go down on him in there common room and all that his slaves asked for

    What happened to Narcissa & Bella asking for the more extreme sex slave spells the sex book kind of fell of the map

    I like that you mentioned Harry reading the white magic book but could do with some more details about what he is learning

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  • From sasqch on July 06, 2005
    Okay, this chapter is certainly of a different pacing than the last few. Not a lot of character development, but quite a bit of "action".

    The group's easy acceptance of Millicent and Pansy may seem odd compared to their apparent opposition to Cho, but truly, the cases are completely different. Cho is wanting to become enthralled; Harry was determined to make her face the facts of what was involved with such a life-altering decision. With the two Slytherins, they are already in a life-or-death situation. Either Harry (and Ron) claims them, or Voldemort does. So the morality of the act is not "Is this an enslavement" but "Is this going to prevent a life of pain and suffering". I do wonder, though, given both Hermione's and Ginny's apparent acceptance of a dominant role, whether either one will be wanting to take out their years of frustration on the two new thralls. It would appear that Millicent is closer to Bella in character in that she desires the discipline, but we really do not know what drives Pansy, other than survival instinct.

    I must say I found the actions of the residents of the first night a little odd: there are two new people in the house. Rather than try to adapt with each other or any other bonding attempts, everybody fractures off onto their own. Yes, I understand Ron and Luna taking Millicent off; they are going to become her Master and Mistress -- they are doing the proper actions. However, all of the members of Harry's group (Hermione as Mistress and the Thralls) all walk off. If Pansy were to become a "sister" in thrall-dom, wouldn't it have been more believable that all members of the house were there together? And during the actual spell-casting, the previous time (with Tonks) the other two thralls were in the room and were actually involved in the action. Yet in this event, Harry is alone with Pansy. It just seemed contrary to the story so far -- the thralls *needing* to be with their master, Hermione *needing* to be in physical contact with Harry. Yet, here they are, during a seriously emotional point, staying as far away as possible.

    As for the future, it seems that Neville will soon have his life turned up-side down, if Ginny gets her way. Neville being so noble is very believable in character as is Ginny being so forward. She is the youngest in a large (and apparently active) family, whereas Neville was raised by his Grandmother. We also still are awaiting Harry's prank/revenge on Dumbledore for revealing the prophecy to Tonks.

    I must ask: was the warning about not casting the slave spell will Luna was in contact with Millicent foreshadowing? I hope to God not. If any of the three "free" women in the Potter camp were to become even accidentally enslaved, it would have a very horrendous effect. The story would suffer (in my opinion) and more importantly, the characters effected/responsible would be destroyed by guilt and self-loathing. I just hope that it was a plot point to allow Luna to be involved in the preliminaries of the activities but not the actual spell casting, and nothing more than that.

    Chris
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 04, 2005
    Good story but I would like to see more of Cho.
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on July 01, 2005
    I liked how you had the girls go through the ceremony. And the mystery of what Molly's fantasy that Ginny sais she would try to make true.
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  • From ANON - FenrisWolf on June 30, 2005
    First off, let me say I have absolutely no quibbles or qualms about any act committed between two consenting adults. Whether I personally find an idea intriguing is irrelevant, it's up to each person to choose what they do or do not enjoy.

    That being said, I have to admit to beginning to lose interest in this story. Why? Because kink is kink and alternative lifestyles are such if they are an alternative. So far, everyone who has the chance is cheerfully either ramming or taking it up the ass, and the entire wizarding world is into BDSM. If it keeps up, it'll end up about as interesting as Saturday Night Duty Sex in the obligatory Missionary position. About the only two who aren't going at it are Albus and Minerva, and that's probably next.

    Try and add some variety to their fun and games. The bonding between Harry and Pansy would have been far more powerful if, in counterpoint to her Slytherin reputation, she had requested tender, face-to-face lovemaking without the dominance games of sodomy. Submission isn't always about the physical. At any rate, keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Kitty on June 30, 2005
    YAY new chapter, can't believe Pansy though....it's just.....A VERY ODD THOUGHT.

    But it was good...It was great..........IT WAS SPECTACULAR!!!!!

    NOW.....I must be nice....more would be great though....

    *hint hint*

    Anyway can't wait, hope the next chapter is soon.
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on June 30, 2005
    HOT! Also, very good, and very interesting.

    I wonder a little if Moldyshorts knew how P & M would
    react to the near certainty of becoming DEs, and was
    hoping that they'd 'further' corrupt Harry.

    I wonder if Molly called Arthur 'Harry', or if its something
    more twisted.

    Thank you for posting.

    More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - wes on June 30, 2005
    wow great chapter I cant wait for the next but I still wonder if his thralls can get pregnant what is it that molly has a fantasy about that Ginny can help with is Harry going to be more proactive in sex like telling cissa to suck him off or have Tonks change or something or take Bella vary roughly I would really like to read all of those things and when will cho become a thrall
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  • From ANON - Drake Smythe on June 30, 2005
    Nice chapter. I do, however, which that more of the story go back to Harry and his exploits, or at the very least some of his bedroom exploits with his harem and Hermione. Keep up the good work. We're still waiting for Hermione's backdoor scene, so that might make a good addition soon.
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  • From ANON - gryffindors on June 29, 2005
    hey look man something happened, i don't know what but i can't access my old mail anymore, so if you can add my new one to your mail i'll be grateful, it's golden_gryffin
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  • From ANON - John Wilburn on June 28, 2005
    Oldwolf,
    I really like your story so far. The idea of Pansy Parkinson having a glamor on her is also in Jeconais story "White Knight, Grey Queen".

    John
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