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From sasqch on June 25, 2005
A very intriguing chapter. We finally have some insight into Ginny
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From ANON - Kitty on June 23, 2005
...Pansy..........wow....a pretty Pansy....That is odd....but now I am even more curious as to what the Hell happens next.....so, please post the next soon....My kitty curiosity is getting the better of me...and you know what they say curiosity did to the cat....

Kitty
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From ANON - Prince Charon on June 23, 2005
Thank you for the update.

Very good, hot, interesting part.

More soon, please.
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From ANON - Kelvin on June 23, 2005
PLease put more Cho. It seem like everyone in the whole wizarding universe like to play bdsm games.

I like how before you have more action on different aspects on the bdsm relationships in the story, it seem recently the story focus on introducing more characters into the storyline instead.

I hope you bring different toys in, such as nipple clamps and other bondage equipment (single sleeve, harness, (penis) gags etc.
please keep up the good work and looking forward to the next update.

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From ANON - Quickstyles on June 23, 2005
good chapter, im glad u didnt get into to much detail on bella's punishment. as i still cant imagine neville as anything other than that pudgy kid who sucked at magic in the first and second years, the thought of him buggering bella was in my opinion, disgusting. along with the fact that he can get ginny, but the whole ginny thing is ure choice. other than that, good chapter, nice suspense ending there, cant wait till u update, keep up the good work.
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From ANON - wes on June 23, 2005
more more we must have more cant wait why the cliff hanger want to know what happens now now now i am still wandering can harrys thails get preg
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From ANON - Robbie Byrd on June 23, 2005
I enjoyed how you described what Neville & Ginny were doing to Bella.
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From ANON - Nymphe on June 23, 2005
Nice cliffhanger...is it a trap I wonder? I hope they can come up with another solution or poor Harry will end up owning a good portion of the older Slytherin females. Will Ron be strong enough to cast the spell? Will Harry's prostate hold up?
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From ANON - wes on June 21, 2005
oh also did i mis somthing tonks pregnant is that someones hopeful thinking or do i need to re-read
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From ANON - wes on June 21, 2005
To the author update soon we have been waiting impatiently and what happened to the slave curse book and them wanting to be more attached or whatever now that Harry is changing or what not will he reconsider no he has had his eyes opened a little more also is he going to learn to Apparate soon and will he become an Animagus or whatever oh and I cant wait to see Hermione as a what was it oh ya true lady

To the other readers
ok because I read the reviews of others just because someone calls someone else master doesn
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From ANON - Zero on June 20, 2005
Excellent! The Ron-Luna stuff was great! Wonder who else will get to enjoy themselves inside Harry's qarters.

Write more!
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From sasqch on June 19, 2005
GAH -- that would be a bit disturbing. I mean, no matter how open minded you are, getting a photograph (even if it wasn't a wizarding type) of one's mother display her affection for a butt-plug would be more earth-shattering than finding out that Sirius enjoyed being a dominant partner. Yes, he never knew his parents and he is still discovering that a more active sex life does not equate deviancy, but his reaction in comparison to his earlier eruptions seems to be way too subdued. I could chalk it up to being in shock. But, if so, his comment about leaving the picture as a gift to Ron is really odd. And if his reaction is subdued because of an overload, that would mean he will have to face his real feelings regarding his idolized image of his parents' relationship with the newly discovered facts soon.

Outside of this plot point, I liked how the thralls are worried about Harry not taking command. I found it interesting that Tonks pushed Harry over the edge to the point that he started to spank her, yet she did not listen to what he was saying at the time. Hermione reinforced what Harry was saying at that point -- Harry is really not good at planning; he is good at reacting to situations. I truly liked the fact that the thralls are keyed into Harry's mind and emotions, yet it was Hermione who was the one to actually understand him.

The showcasing of Luna and Ron and their blossoming relationship was an interesting change. I found it interesting that even though Luna may be the submissive partner in name, the couple truly are a partnership. She makes some of the decisions for the pair (as seen by the manipulations of Millicent and to arrange the "punishment") and Ron truly loves and cares for her. I found it endearing to see the pair exploring their boundaries and knowing that they would not betray the trust each has in the others control.

As to the future chapters, now that Harry has been given an idea of what his thralls are needing, I expect we will see more pseudo-public scenes with Narcissa. Perhaps to the point of truly being public? Although, with Harry being such a private individual, I cannot really accept him doing so at this point. Tonks will try and get Harry to do more role playing -- but I wonder what roles would be played first? And will Harry be able to learn to give pain to Bella, or will he have to delegate that job in the beginning?

I also would expect to see a little into Ginny and Neville and their situation. They are bonding nicely, I would assume. But they have been faced with the planned punishment of Bella; did that affect them at all.

As for Hermione: obviously Remus' comment regarding Lily's need to have control taken away from her and given to her partner (James) was an allegory for Hermione and her earlier out-of-character referral to Harry as "Master". Unfortunately, if you do take her character this way, my opinion is that it would be a big mistake. My feelings for this are based on two points. The first is the stereotype of a control personality needs or wants to be controlled at some point in their life, usually in a sexual situation. I have never come across this situation outside of stories. I know quite a few people who fall into this category and none of them feel the desire to be a submissive in a relationship. Secondly, and more importantly to this story, Harry NEEDS an equal. Right now, Harry is surrounded by thralls and retainers. These people by definition MUST follow his every whim and desire. For a person so afraid of becoming "dark" that is a very bad thing. Hermione is the only person who has shown any insight to his true inner personality (as seen in this chapter for example). The minute that she would act the slightest bit submissive to Harry, he would have to suspect any and all advice from her. Harry would never know if she is giving advice that is needed or what she thinks he "wants" to hear.

So far this story has avoided becoming completely cliched. I hope it continues to do so

Chris
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From ANON - Nymphe on June 18, 2005
Damn! This story is crazy man...I cannot stop reading and laughing so very hard at poor Harry and his "court." So when is Tonks going to tell Harry she is pregnant? Will Cho become a slave? Will Harry become a true Master? So many questions and I hope they get answered as this wild tale unfolds.

Heck, I want to know what happens years after Voldemort is defeated...
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From ANON - Prince Charon on June 17, 2005
Very, very hot, interesting part.

Millicent surprised me, but somehow, James and Lily didn't.

Where's Cho during all this?

More soon, please.
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From ANON - Quickstyles on June 17, 2005
wow, long chapter, but only more great writing to admire and read so thats good. i dont like how harry only plays a major role half the chapter, especially in one so long. i see you are shifting views to ron's/luna's in teh second half, though i do not dislike this change, i still say harry would be more interesting that ron, seeing as how we know so much about harry already, to start on another character so much will blur focus. otherwise great writing. cant wait to see tonks fantasies (i cant spell) get played out. and the surprise will keep me awake at night pondering as to what it might be. i want to see luna get in trouble again though, and answer to harry this time. harsher punishment sounds fun to me.

ps. i thought milliecent bulstrode was ugly in the movies, wasnt she? not sure if i remember her correctly, please someone reply to me if she is hot or not, i cant form a clear character image of her while i read.
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