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By : oldwolf
  • From ANON - kelvin on June 03, 2005
    woot! go cho! now that she has passed the test what else will harry make her do?
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  • From ANON - quickstyles on June 03, 2005
    wow, harry is being a complete dick about this, i think u made him seem to dark and evil about this whole situation, but it wasnt all that bad, but when she is finally a thrall, i hope u dont put her through to much more crap, this was already 10 times worse than any of the others punishments, keep up to good work, hope fuly next chapt wont be as dark.
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  • From ANON - wes on June 03, 2005
    wow harry is a sick sob in your fic still it was interesting
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  • From ANON - ryan on June 03, 2005
    LIKE YOUR STORY ALOT I ALSO WANT TO LET YOU KNOW THAT THERE IS A CHUNK OF CHAPTER ONE MISSING HOPE YOU WILL REPOST IT I CANT WIAT FOR THE NERT CHAPTER
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  • From sasqch on June 02, 2005
    A very interesting installment. I found the ping-pong dialogue between Remus and harry snapping back to Hermione and Ginny a little difficult to follow at first, but I was able to eventually figure out the flow. It was very amusing to see the two being taken to task at the very same time from two separate angles. Especially while Hermione was still trying to recover from whatever her parents had revealed during their closed-door session. I guess she kind of forgot that her parents would be having sex still, huh?

    The acceleration of Ron's and Luna's relationship is a nice touch. Given what has happened previously, Ron is obviously maturing, if slowly. Of course the discovery of the "play-room" in the last chapter may have forced his hand. I really liked how this couple is growing; most of the development is off-screen, but the effects are still seen.

    As to the meat of the story, you referred to it as Dark!Harry. I think I would disagree with that statement. Yes, he is not all fluff and light, but he is not evil, which is what I associate with Dark!Harry. He is overly mean to Cho (good). But that is to be expected; she broke his heart last year. She was his first crush and she pretty much used him to connect with Cedric's ghost. She continued to belittle and insult Hermione, and of course she is the one who brought the traitor Marietta into the DA. So I can easily see Harry wanting a bit of pay-back or petty revenge while testing her resolve. I mean she is really once again using Harry. This time she is offering up her future in order to be there when Harry takes down Voldemort. But she wants to be there for Cedric's memory. And no matter how dark Harry was acting, he still arranged for Cho's tests to be a bit more private than necessary. It was not a Hogsmeade weekend, and Cissa made sure that no students approached them as they traversed the castle itself.

    I was happily surprised at Hermione's involvement in the second test. I have been awaiting her participation in Cho's debasement ever since Cissa pointed out to Hermione that Cho would be beneath her in the hierarchy. But for Hermione to participate in a sex act in the hallowed grounds of a library? That does seem a bit odd :-)

    The third test is the only really odd part. If only because as the reader we are surprised with the concept that Harry has warned his retainers about each of them using Cho. And again, Tonks is a secret, yet she is involved. Yes, Cho is lasting, but she still could have chickened out. If she did, Tonks' status would have become public (as would have the level of Hermione's involvement). And I cannot see Dumbledore allowing Harry to memory charm Cho if she did change her mind.

    Anyway, this was a fun, if a bit darker in tone chapter. The events fit the characterizations and growth of the interaction. I again eagerly await the next thrilling installment

    Chris
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on June 02, 2005
    I liked the test you had Harry put Cho through.
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on June 02, 2005
    Very, very, very HOT!

    Disturbing and interesting, too.

    Thank you for writing so fast.

    More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - TheRaven on June 01, 2005
    I really like this story. I can't wait to see where you go with it.
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  • From sasqch on June 01, 2005
    Okay I admit it -- I am not a fan of Cho, but the way you are setting the board has got me intrigued.

    Firstly, I like how Draco still does not learn. Hermione is going to kick his ass in any fair fight. I like how Snape decided to shake up the class with pulling the names out of a hat only to have his plans go to hell with the very first draw. The concept of a random pairing does beg the question: what would happen if Harry were to face off with Hermione in the class? Would either pull their punches? I mean it would not be like Harry taking on Neville seeing as Harry and Hermione are beginning a very serious relationship.

    Harry's enforced punishment of Hermione was a necessary eye-opener of Harry. I think the boy has finally realized that she is a sexual creature and that he is attracted to her and her to him. His response to finding out about the plug was quite humorous. I do wonder when Harry will acknowledge the fact that his thralls have been calling Hermione "Mistress". He does not seem to notice this fact; and it is important -- they do not call anybody else this title so he should pick up its significance.

    Cho's interview was interesting in two major points: the first was Harry's response. He seems to be overly antagonistic to her. I wonder why? It seems his response is a bit extreme for what they went through as a couple the previous year. The second point, and the more telling one, was Hermione. She is accepting of Cho's request. This is an obvious surprise to Harry, only because he has not had the same conversation with Narcissa. Hermione is looking for a bit of payback and being able to put herself over the "pretty" seeker. Although I was caught off-guard that no questions were asked about Hermione being involved in the interview process. Tonks had to be hidden since her status is a secret, yet Cho accepted Hermione sitting in on the meeting and actually casting the deciding opinion.

    Anyway, it will be interesting to see the next few chapters. The next big showdown of course will be the meeting with the Grangers and the explanation of the acceleration of Harry's and Hermione's relationship. And after that, we can look forward to Cho's initiation and her treatment at the hands of her new master and mistress.

    Chris
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  • From ANON - alkeria7089 on June 01, 2005
    Nicely done between Harry and Hermione, I like it.

    One thing, I found it a little annoying Harry pass out so many times. Is there a reason for this?

    Looking forward to see what Harry would do to Cho, then I'll really can't wait to see what HERMIONE will do to her. ;)

    Thanks for the little spanking scene.

    God Speed!!! :D
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  • From ANON - spikeprop on June 01, 2005
    are any of Harry's Thralls going to end up pregnant? They aren't using birth control and their screwing like rabbits. Just a thought. And how would Hermione handle the Thralls bearing Harry's first children?
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  • From ANON - kelvin on June 01, 2005
    i cant wait to see what this test is. i hope its something kinky or humulating (sp) to Cho. not that i like to see cho in such a position but you fic made me do it :P
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  • From ANON - Zero on June 01, 2005
    I'm looking forward to see whether Cho passes the test. Awesome!

    Write more!
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  • From ANON - wes on June 01, 2005
    More chapters quick i cant wait to know what happens next
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on May 31, 2005
    I liked how you had Harry punish Hermione. After knocked Draco senseless in their duel.

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