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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

By : oldwolf
  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on May 20, 2005
    I liked how you have Harry trying to help Neville get over what happened to his parents. By letting him & Ginny punish Bellatrix themselves.
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  • From sasqch on May 17, 2005
    an interesting idea to have the sisters tell their story. i would have thought that harry would have liked to have kept his involvement with the thralls a bit more "low-key". i mean, i cannot see skeeter not play up the angle that the sisters are now the property of the boy-who-lived. although draco's reaction was quite humorous.

    i like the pace of hermione's and harry's developing relationship. it is quite believable and within the characteristics you have created for the two. i like how tonks has taken it upon herself to make sure that the pair does not get bogged down and stagnate into a holding pattern. i also like the subtle touch of tonks's visit to the children's playground. it would appear that her earlier comment about harry giving the black family future heirs is still in her mind.

    as to the upcoming school year, i think that you plan on a lot of grief for harry and company. i mean the whole school will have read about the history of the sisters by now. so will he be ridiculed for having to enslave women to get their attention? add to the mix that one of them is draco's mom, and it gets even uglier. and of course dumbledore just made it a bit more complex by hiring belle as the new potions instructor. now that won't be a conflict of interest, will it?

    i do have to wonder about the housing situation: i know that dumbledore explained that the sisters will be allowed to live with harry, but he did not know about tonks being added to the group. nor the new complication of hermione and her need to be with harry. also, ron's jealousy might reoccur, seeing as harry will be allowed to live with his sex partners, whereas ron won't. and of course, the last ron heard, harry had not as of yet recruited tonks and hermione into his harem.

    ought to be an interesting few chapters coming up next.

    chris
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  • From ANON - alkeria7089 on May 17, 2005
    Greate Chapters!!!

    I love all the Hermione actions.

    Please keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Drake on May 16, 2005
    I really love your story. I do however feel that it is sad that more people don't review. I have read the story since the beggining, and I noticed today that you have less than a hundred reviews, which is sad considering the amount of hits you have for the story. I really love the way that the story is being developed in. Keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - Zero on May 16, 2005
    Excellent! Like how this is progressing. For a moment, I wished Harry had tried bed Rita! lol

    Write more.
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  • From Asher on May 15, 2005
    YES! Thank you for updating today! Excellent chapter again, I look forward to reading more, and soon I hope....and Dark appreciated it too, but I can see she's already reviewed....THANK AGAIN!


    WIND
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  • From TheDarkBeginning on May 15, 2005
    YAY! you updated! And thank you for the email about it, I wouldn't have thought to check until tomorrow!!


    THANKS!!!!!!!

    Now, more please!
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  • From ANON - Mark H on May 15, 2005
    I've really enjoyed your story though there is one thing that is puzzling me. Hermione. Her interactions just don't seem quite right and i can't quite put my finger on what is wrong.

    I know you're not aiming to be cannon or anything - but there is just something with her character that seems odd to what you are making her out to be. In that, it just doesn't seem to gel together. i know this feedback is a bit odd, but it just is sticking in my mind, if you know what i mean.

    Other than that - i am really liking it.

    More please.
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on May 15, 2005
    I enjoyed reading how you had Draco realize who was having sex with his Mother in the Alley. And how you had Hermione be Sodomized by Tonks.
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on May 13, 2005
    Very, very hot, good, and interesting.

    Hermione's decision, while curious, does fit.

    More soon, please.
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  • From sasqch on May 13, 2005
    another intriguing installment.

    so basically, most of narcissa's outstanding problems are wiped away with lucius' suicide by auror. she no longer needs to worry about him trying to regain control over her, and if she cared at all about draco (hopefully not), he is taken care of since he inherits everything. obviously it is the lack of sorrow on her part and harry's complete lack of interest that triggered dumbledore's concern over harry becoming dark. no matter how "real" the display in the alley, snape could not have convinced dumbledore to test harry unless he had started wonder himself.

    speaking of the public displays, i loved the fact that once again draco runs across his mother being sexually used. this time in a public setting, and by cloaked strangers. his response is fairly hilarious. i do wonder, since the next scheduled displays will occur during the school year, what will draco do then? i mean his mother must be recognizable to at least some of his classmates. and will the demonstrations always "star" narcissa? or will bella take center-stage? the reason i ask is, if they are trying to fake out voldemort, he knows that bella wouldn't necessarily mind the public humiliation.

    as to the other members of the cast, i loved the interaction and development of tonks and hermione. tonks needs to show the world her devotion to her master, yet cannot. so she instead gets a tattoo. and she makes sure it is one that is guaranteed to make her master uncomfortable. i wonder why? hermione is definitely a person who would need to research every aspect of something. her discussion over the theory of apparation was a perfect touch. therefore her deal with tonks to practice her technique prior to asking harry was completely in character. as was their bedside conversation the next morning. i also like how the three thralls have started referring to hermione as their mistress. with their feedback link to their master, that tells the reader harry's actual feelings towards hermione, without slowing the story down.

    i truly love this story because there is a true character development and interaction. the characters grow and adapt, yet remain true

    chris
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 13, 2005
    Wonderful story. I'm usually too lazy to review what I read, but the scen with Draco in chapter 14 was just too funny to not remark on. Please continue this story as it's one of the bright spots of my day if i see it has been updated.
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  • From ANON - Zero on May 13, 2005
    Great work! I'm beginning to wonder what will happen at Hogwarts. The possibilities...

    Write more!
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  • From ANON - elizabeth S. on May 13, 2005
    YAY!

    you finally updated!!!!

    *does happy dance*

    yayayayayayayyayayayayayayayayayayayay!!!!!

    can't wait til the next chapter.....

    please type quickly!
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on May 12, 2005
    I liked how you had Draco passed out when he saw what was happening to his Mother.
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