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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

By : oldwolf
  • From ANON - Prince Charon on May 09, 2005
    Very, very hot, and interesting.

    Good plot, cool characterizations.

    More soon, please.
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  • From ANON - Zero on May 06, 2005
    great!


    "... look like a blond-bimbo
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  • From sasqch on May 04, 2005
    so harry's punishment of narcissa is extremely public? i can see where that would be very humiliating. i like how harry knew that bella was trying to use the situation to her advantage, so harry ended up adding her to the punishment rolls.

    using tonks's abilities to vent any frustrations over harry's upbringing was.. interesting. personally, i hope he has gotten that need out of his system. although, i have to wonder why he did not pick up on hermione's actions during tonks's demonstration, nor his thrall's obvious knowledge of her needs/wants when she decided to go along with them for narcissa's punishment. i was afraid that you were going to stretch out hermione's confrontation with her emotions regarding harry for another chapter. so i was surprised that she approached harry immediately following the day's actions. it was an interesting change that harry slept with hermione rather than cocooned by his thralls. although his confusion upon waking, with the lack of early morning memory, was perfect. i liked his panic and yet i thought his response to hermione's kiss on the cheek to be fairly telling.

    as to the foreshadowing -- with voldemort hoping that the sisters black will be able to pervert harry over to the dark side, i would almost be afraid for harry. he has never been one to seek attention, yet now, in order to help the fight against voldemort and support snape's spying, he will have to publicly debase women he has come to care for (it would appear). i assume that the public punishments would only include the sisters black -- does voldemort (or anybody else) know that tonks has been made a thrall as well?

    anyway, i have been enjoying this story very much, so thank you for the updates

    chris
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Spiegel on May 04, 2005
    LMFAO *falls over laughing* loved the ending of the new chapter, loved it loved it loved it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

    oh I can't wait for more.


    it may not be perfect, but nothing is....but it's damned close and to anyone that says other wise...."go to hell, or abi in malam rem!"

    Trying patiently to await your next chapter.
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  • From ANON - wes on May 04, 2005
    great chapter cant wait for the next
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  • From Asher on April 28, 2005
    O.k. I am intrigued, when do you plan on updating, I wouldn't mind an email when you do update, or I can just hunt down your profile, either works, anyway keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - CJ on April 24, 2005
    Good Chapter and thanks for updating so quickly lately.

    Seems a bit rushed as you made a couple of simple mistakes that could
    have caught by a reread.

    When they are at the table for breakfast and discussing their plans for
    the day you clearly indicate Hermione is their and then she
    mysteriously went off to visit her parents with Remus. She portkeyed
    off without even saying goodbye? Also I thought she was supposed to
    remain in close proximity to Harry until she had been checked again by
    Poppy. I understand you probably wrote it like that because she would
    have disagreed with the strip club but it is a plot inconsistincy.

    The other mistake is Harry decided they would take a bus and then
    called a taxi.

    On other topics isn't is about time they return to Hogwarts for
    Hermiones chekup?

    What is being done about Harry Notice-me Not cloak idea?

    Why does Harry have a problem with incest with his aunt but never seems
    bothered by The sisters black getting it on?

    Harry's life seems to be eventful he keeps making plans to do or learn
    something and then gets interrupted(like apparation).

    What is Tonks punishment going to be(nothing to harsh I hope, i see her
    as sort of his favorite because she willingly gave herself to him) and when is
    harry going to get it on with Hermione?


    Update soon!

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  • From TheDarkBeginning on April 20, 2005
    *giggles hysterically* that was......funny..........and................HOT!

    Um........I think....you should update ASAP......um...........please?

    I'm officially addicted to the story now......so yeah.......that's all.
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on April 19, 2005
    I liked how you had Bella be spanked while Harry watched.
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Spiegel on April 18, 2005
    And I thought I was bad...but that actually really good, I can't wait to read more, I'll be trying to wait patiently for more and no matter what anyone else says....I love your story, period. So if for no one else then keep typing for me please.
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on April 17, 2005
    Very interesting, and hot. The bit with Petunia was gross, but the rest of it was cool.

    More (without H/Petunia, I hope) soon, please.
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  • From ANON - wes on April 15, 2005
    LMFAO Nice ending what brought it on any way great chapter i cant wait for the next
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  • From ANON - Nony on April 15, 2005
    Well, it's decent, overall. Could do without Hermione, but whatever. You've got the right idea with Tonks, Bella and Narcissa though, so props on that. I think you need more build-up on the sex scenes though. More detail. It's so bland and expected. "Narcissa took her master's member in her mouth. Rubbing her tongue all over the swollen organ she eagerly awaits the impeding load. Harry couldn't hold back and shot into her mouth. She shared the spunk with her sister." I mean, yeah, that's smut and all, but there's nothing special about it. I figure, if you're going to have every guy's fantasy of being woken up by a blowjob by two (or three) beautiful women, at least make it a bit more... eloquent. Put some feeling into the writing.
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  • From ANON - goldgriffin on April 15, 2005
    I like your story so far with Harry and his girls but I can't see Harry alowing others to touch them and that is the only thing I hate about your story. Please don't let anything happen with bella and dudley and don't have Harry give his girls to any one ever PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on April 15, 2005
    I liked how you had Hermione tal to Tonks what was bothering her. And how you had Petunia show Harry how grateful she was to him.
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