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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

By : oldwolf
  • From ANON - FenrisWolf on March 27, 2005
    Well, is Hermione going to ask for the spell or retain free will once she climbs into Harry's bed? Inquiring, pervy minds want to know!
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  • From sasqch on March 27, 2005
    another fine installment

    i envy harry's alarm clock :-)

    so, snape is to teach dada, but who would teach potions? i would think that harry might be able to recommend one of his thralls if any were competent enough in the course, such as cissy. although the idea of the rest of the school's reaction to seeing potter and snape in the dada class could be quite interesting given their animosity is very public indeed. harry's determination to take only the courses necessary for his survival and winning is a nice touch of maturity, which obviously pleased hermione. said maturity was also on display with the discussion with both snape and dumbledore regarding the upcoming school year and the up-side to the visit to the alley.

    i thought tonks' plan to go under the table at the alley was a nice touch of humor as was the fate of the aurors.

    three questions remain from this chapter:
    1 - what's harry's plan to help remus?
    2 - harry says he needs to learn to apparate. i thought that under the spells, he gains the knowledge of his thralls, such as the killer recipe for eggs in the last chapter. so shouldn't he have picked up the basics needed for apparation?
    3 - when is hermione going to succumb to her carnal needs? this is the second time that just being in the same room with harry has forced her to masturbate. i cannot see harry turning down another offer of a sex partner, even at the cost of exhaustion.

    chris
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on March 26, 2005
    I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you had Tonks wake Harry up. And I liked where Harry punched Snape in the nose.
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  • From ANON - Shadow Wolf on March 22, 2005
    Nice job, looking forward to the next one.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 21, 2005
    Is Hermione now part of Hary's Harem?

    I noticed the wording when you talked about Bellatrix and Cissa moving tonks at the very least, used the word new sisters... plural... also, even though harry pointed his wand at tonks, the first time he casted the spell he gained control over two females (both of whom were engaging in some form of sexual gratification)... in the last chapter, Hermione was pleasuring herself when harry said the spell...

    Im just curious...

    Keep up the good work... update soon...
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  • From ANON - Elizabeth Spiegel on March 20, 2005
    WOW

    A-FUCKING-MAZINE

    SPLENDIND

    EXCELLETNLY WRITTEN

    VERY DESCRIPTIVE.....

    I THOUROUGHLY ENJOYED READING WHAT YOU HAVE SO FAR, CAN'T WAIT TO READ MORE!!!
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on March 19, 2005
    I liked how you had Harry make Tonks first time with them special.
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on March 19, 2005
    Very glad to see this updated so quickly.

    Very good, hot, interesting part. I see Ginny and Luna won't be joining the group.
    Ah, well, four should be more than enough, anyway. (Um, you *are* going to stop
    at four girls in the harem, right?)

    Looking forward to more. Soon, please.
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  • From ANON - wes on March 19, 2005
    great chapter but shouldent his house elfs be doing the cooking and all that i mean he has to who are fanatical to him any way post again soon it drives me nuts waiting
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  • From sasqch on March 19, 2005
    another fine chapter. the characterization in this chapter truly shines. you have the grangers being introduced to the concept of their daughter's new condition, as well as hermione's reaction to tonks's request. both are true to the characters you've made. one scene that was really well done was harry's emotional break-down in the granger's house when thinking about his lost family. it was subtle and not too ham-handed, yet it was poinent enough to get the point across. i also liked the playfulness of hermione's parents -- quite a departure from the rest of the adults in the story.

    and now tonks is a thrall -- interesting. i wonder how this new-found knowledge from his three thralls will help harry once he begins to consciously access it. one question though, since hermione is bound to harry, and not as a thrall, what does that mean? i mean i realize she must remain in close proximity with harry, but can she gain some of the knowledge that harry now has?

    anyway, i am eagerly awaiting the next chapter in this fun story

    chris
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  • From ANON - chaos on March 16, 2005
    iv read fics for 6 hours a day for a year and a half and yours is one of the best iv ever read pleas keep writeing
    i think id go insane if you didnt finsh this story
    humbly
    chaos
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  • From ANON - Robbie Byrd on March 13, 2005
    I liked how you added Tonks & Hermione to Harry's Harem.
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  • From ANON - alkeria7089 on March 13, 2005
    Hi, love your story.

    I like that Tonks is joining in, but I think it is a bit too brief at Tonks explanation why she has to had the spell cast on her. Same at Harry showing concern for Hermione in the hospital wing.

    Can I request an over the knee spanking scene for Hermione? Not the heavy punishment type, but nice and playfull.

    Keep up the good work.

    Thanks.

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  • From ANON - Shadow_Wolf on March 12, 2005
    Great story(I would put it in my favorites, but my account isn't working) I hope you contenue to make great fics.
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  • From ANON - jeannehaymar on March 12, 2005
    I must say that when I saw the initial pairing I was very very dubious about the story. There is so much crap out there that I was wondering where you were going with that. I didn't expect a story of such quality, on par with The spoils of war by Aerie22.

    It's really fun and exciting to read. The character are well described and now that you have included Tonks and Hermione (which are my prefered Harry ships) in the equation, I couldn't get happier. Especially since you have opened the door to an even larger pride. I can't wait to see Ron's reaction to these new developments... and the other's has well. Oh and Draco when he gets back to Hogwarts... I mean, he should have convinced that he had an hallucination... so the final realization should make for a, interesting read.

    About this last chapter, I was surprised that Harry didn't discuss Tonks proposal with Dumbledore.

    One point about Hermione's reaction :
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