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Reviews for Harry Potter and the Sisters Black

By : oldwolf
  • From ANON - Ducky on July 26, 2005
    You've got to be kidding me. The whole incest thing with the Blacks was a lil' over board but was cool since they're all hot and all, but you really could have done this without his aunt suckin' him off. That had no foundation, except you put that lil crack that he fantasized about his "skinny, horsed face aunt who was horrible to him for many years"

    Honestly, how is that a turn on? Jeez. Well if writing about people getting blowed by their aunts gets you off, who am I to say thats its weird?
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  • From ANON - ducky on July 26, 2005
    Harry really is an oddball in this. Normally, like in the book and such, to make a main character they would take one attribute and greatly emphasize it to make that character's "character" stick. Hermione has the role of nerdy/bossy. Harry is always blunt/simple minded. ECT.

    But in here he's a whirlwind of friggin things. To raging furious at his thralls, to weeping on them, comforting THEM, blushes far to easily even though he's done the horizontal pokey numerious times.. its a bit annoying but funny. Its like he's a skitso. Hahah!
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  • From ANON - staryblue on July 26, 2005
    Explain how a simple witches oath turns Mione into a slave? Gimmi some anzwerz!
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  • From ANON - ducky on July 26, 2005
    I dont understand why no one wants to actually critique you. Everything is like nothing but praise. For one, Hermione to just STAND there and watch while Harry proceeds to spank Bella was really awkward if not stupid. I doubt would be anyone *unless they're kinky as hell* that would just watch that and not say anything. I know how everyone seems to be a Herm/harry fanatic especially after book 5, from one stinkin kiss, but really now?

    Why would snape be really affected by what he saw in Harry's childhood? With all the ocl sessions from before, he must have seen everything already I always believed Snape was just that much of an ass and didn't say anything about it, even going as far as to compete with him by just LEAVING the stupid pensive when he knows Harry is coming. C'mon, that was pretty lame if you stop to think about it.

    Anyway, its still a cool story even if some things are just.. crappily done, but thank you for fighting the damn slash/yaoi/shonen ai crap going around adultfan. Those bug me terribly.
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  • From ANON - ducky on July 25, 2005
    The whole time I kept thinking "he had a fantasy about his AUNT?" i WAS LIKE.. ew... she was always described as this skinny, long necked, horsed face woman who's treated him like crap for most of his life and he had a fantasy about her? Jeez. You sure did make Harry a friggin' weirdo.
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  • From ANON - staryblue on July 25, 2005
    Erg... What happened in chapter 1? It get cut off and then like a cliffhanger but then in chapter two it jumps to vernon yelling? and Jeez.. Reading this was a pain. I had the same stupid formating problem on my fics where the sentences are all distorted so you have to move across the screen with the scroll. Very annoying.

    Bella lickin Narc's bum was DAMN hot.
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  • From ANON - Ducky on July 25, 2005
    Is just me, or is chapter one cut off and then chapter two just bugs off to something different? What the hell happened in between 1 and 2?
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 25, 2005
    Good stuff. Just a little thing I saw in chapter 23: You translated
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  • From ANON - harryhollow on July 25, 2005
    Oh, please update soon! I need to read more, more, more.....*drool* e-mail me please whenever you get the chance to update!!
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  • From on July 24, 2005
    It would appear Harry is beginning to take his role seriously. I wonder if Bella will voice her objections over public displays.
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  • From ANON - Spike of Doom on July 23, 2005
    Its good and amusing to read.... tho a few minor things like the lemons are unique but too short.. and its a bit much th D/s .... Is everybody in the wolrd into it for you ??? lol
    still i like the characters you chose for harrys Harem makes for nice mental images..
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 23, 2005
    Eh, I'm not much for the Ron and Neville scenes.
    I just like the Harry/Allthegirls scenes =)
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  • From ANON - Prince Charon on July 22, 2005
    Very hot, very good, very interesting.

    Thank you for continueing this.

    More soon, please.
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  • From sasqch on July 22, 2005
    Great chapter -- Character development and story advancement, What more could one ask for? Oh, yeah, we also had some "action" as well.

    I like the interchange between Dumbledore and Harry. it really shows the growth of the two. With Dumbledore being confused as to what he had done to incur Harry
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  • From ANON - kelvin on July 22, 2005
    LOL, Gold buttplugs?!? that screams Austin powers and goldmember. Will you be showing us all the features of the buttplug? It would be cool if it could suddenly grow into a penis not unlike a strap-on. or it could grow into a dildo and enter the other hole as well. It could also have flashing lights.

    Why not have the buttplug also squirt something into the ass on command. could be water, honey or.... whatever.

    Great story
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