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Reviews for The Snake and The Lioness

By : FrenchMaidenForLucius
  • From lckarlsson on December 22, 2004
    Hey there!

    Sorry for not reviewing before now.

    I really enjoyed this chapter! The sex-part was good :o)

    Looking forward to the next part of the journey.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on December 18, 2004
    Hey there!

    I'm so happy that she didn't just give in right away ;o) Another great chapter! Looking forward to their trip.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on December 10, 2004
    Glad to see Lucius is changing his mind!

    I'm not sure that I would forgive him right away, if I was Adrienne, though... but hey... I wouldn't be sitting by the window waiting for his letters either. I would be too angry with him to do that.

    Let's see what he'll do, and how Adrienne reacts. It would be nice to see some begging ;o) But whatever you write, I'll be waiting for your next chapter.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on December 05, 2004
    Ohhh! I feel so sorry for Adrienne! He'd better come to his senses soon!

    A good chapter!

    And happy birthday!

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on November 26, 2004
    Ahhh! I just knew that he was going to turn her away!!

    He'd better change his mind though! Or he'll regret it I'm sure.

    And she's very brave that she had the nerve to tell him. He should respect her for that; she could have just chosen to keep it a secret and hope that he wouldn't find out about it.

    So you actually let your brother write you last chapter?? Wow! I would never even show my stories to my brother!!

    I'm sorry if you had to keep your brother from reading my review because it would hurt his feelings. I thought the whole thing with Lucius in the closet was a good idea though. I just thought it would have been better if Adrienne didn't know that he was in the closet.

    Looking forward to your next chapter.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on November 20, 2004
    Hey there!

    Finally a new chapter! Ahh! I thought that Chris was going to say something about her spying on Lucius, while he was hiding in the closet!

    I liked the way she described her feelings, though, I must tell you, I too thought it was a little bit too much information for her brother. Especially since he demanded it from her like that. It would have worked better if she told a girlfriend about it - free-willingly - and if she didn't know that Lucius was listening; I don't think it's realistic that she would forget that he was in the closet.

    Well - it's just meant as constructive critisism. I don't mean to bring your story down, I really like it.

    And I'm very curious about how Lucius is going to react to her spying on him. He will be hurt and very angry probably! Can't wait for it. :o)

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on November 08, 2004
    Hey there!

    I hope you have nicip tip to France! I will keep an eye out for you next chapter.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - snorky50 on November 08, 2004
    chapter 9 to be printed for you all know now :-)

    It's much much much better!!! I LIKE THIS STORY!!! But the brother and harry can both go to hell :-(

    ooh!! Note for the author : you're half french? Et bien si j'avais su, j'aurai mis mes commentaires depuis le d
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  • From lckarlsson on November 05, 2004
    Hey, that was some chapter there!

    Very delicious indeed :o)

    I wonder what is going to happen when her brother finds out that she's still seeing Lucius, even if she has finished the job. I see some trouble ahead!

    I'm very happy to hear that you're going to add some more chapters to flesh it out, I think it is a good idea. I will be looking forward to your next chapter!

    Love Leonora.
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  • From MidnightLilly on November 04, 2004
    That damn brother of hers and Harry need to mind their own damn business, if she has to break up with Lucius then her brother should break up with Nina its only fair. I wouldn't let no man tell me what to do.
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  • From ANON - snorky50 on November 04, 2004
    Great!!! Long chapters!!! I love when I have enough pages to read during my coffee break :-) et for those chapters I read yesterdI agI agree the fact that the relationship have to be more developped. Nothing like a soap opera where you see one action during several episodes, but it could be good to relate more conversations between the two love birds or to detail more dates.

    Now it's time for coffee break and enjoy these two new chapters :-)
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  • From lckarlsson on November 04, 2004
    Hey there!

    I can't believe you added an extra chapter just me! me! Thank you! I loved it, I thought it was very romantic.

    Now... oh dread, when she has to tell her brother that she's seriously dating Lucius she's gonna be in trouble. And I wonder what Lucius would do if he found out that she had been spying on him.

    I think you're doing a really great job on the story, and I'll be looking very much forward to your next chapter.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - snorky50 on November 03, 2004
    i've copied the last three chapters to be read during my coffee break, and i'll get back to give a good review. But I noticed the chapters are too short :-(
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  • From lckarlsson on November 01, 2004
    Hi again!

    How nice of you to put two chaptout out already! I find your story really fascinating, though I wouldn't have minded some more chapters about the dates they went on. I would have like to see more about how things developed between them... and... I would have liked to see Lucius comforting her about her bruised wrist, I would have expected him to be more persistant in making her tell what really happened.

    Well... I still love your story, and I will be looking forward to see what happens when she finishes the job.

    Keep up the good work.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From lckarlsson on October 29, 2004
    Hey again!

    Still liking your story. I'm looking forward to see how things develop between Lucius and Adrienne.

    Keep up the writing, it's good!

    Leonora.
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