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By : laceyweasley
  • From ANON - Nikki on January 06, 2005
    OMG.....as a mom who breast fed i know exactly what you are talking about, and i know exactly how much a man (or wizard in this case) loves the taste of breast milk....this story is so great if you stop posting i will be very sad....and upset.....and want the story emailed directly to me......i can't wait for the next chapters!!!1
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  • From ANON - marasnape on January 06, 2005
    I realy enjoy this story. Keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - catseye on January 06, 2005
    why would i hate this chapter? its wonderful! the only thing is, it is too short for my liking. but then again. you could write plenty more, and i would still be wanting to read on and on...and then there is the fact, that you update regularly. so i hope to read the next chapter sonn.
    it's one of the few things that keep me sane while studying. bye

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  • From ANON - olka-polka on January 06, 2005
    Your Contracts is one of the best stories on AFF. I like like it and wait for updates. Thnx
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on January 06, 2005
    Well, at least he's admitted to himself that HE wants her. Looks like the boys don't have a chance! Well, I can't say as though I thought they did. Severus has coveted her for a long time.
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  • From ANON - Gannet on January 06, 2005
    Please don't stop writing, even if you keep getting bad reviews (they do mean people go on reading your stuff even if they profess not to like it, don't they?). You're very imaginative, the beginning was a little bit like RachelW's fic, but you took your distances with it pretty soon. The characters remain believeable, and Snape's sons, even non-canon, seem credible.
    I would enjoy seeing Severus "marry" her in the end - he does not seem to have much against it, does he?
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  • From ANON - ellie on January 06, 2005
    Wonderful, just wonderful! I have a good mind to do battle with these flamers. I enjoy your story so much I would hate for you not to continue it. If you ever need a beta, don't hesitate to e-mail me. :D
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  • From ANON - dryade on January 06, 2005
    oh yes! i like it! i knew he'd chose her!
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  • From ANON - Ruby Snape on January 06, 2005
    Interesting developments. I'd certainly like to read more. Severus does seem rather over protective of Hermione.
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  • From ANON - ExpectedAberrance on January 06, 2005
    Intriguing as ever, even though it was kinda short this time. No matter. I'm still looking forward to your next post, as you haven't pissed me off yet. I hope I'm not the only one, because this fic deserves more. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - drspurdue on January 06, 2005
    I like the way you used the comparison between Elizabeth and Hermione to help allow Snape to overcome his attitude about Hermione being one of his students.

    I hope I have perceived corrcetly and that Hermione is now looking at Snape as a possible bond mate and that she has realized desires for him if only sexual at this time.

    Please do not stop writing. As with any first effort, one must crawl and then walk. Some first tries I have read are awful - you have a unique storyline and beginning to provide many twists and turns. You are working out the kinks.
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  • From ANON - SiriusLives689 on January 05, 2005
    Ok, a little weird...not much, but a little. To only be 32 I have loads of jobs. During my senior year of college and the year after, I worked as a lactation consultant for the Health Department here in town. Loads of men liked the taste of breastmilk, my husband did, I breast-fed three...I am pretty sure that he would not have drained the breast but as we became more sexually active after the births of our children, let's face it, I'd leak. Especially since I fed my children for well over a year. The engorgment was a turn on to loads of dads. I had this one woman who had her husband and five children convinced that if they made her angry, her milk would "curdle" and the baby would get sick! She is also the one who breastfed her 4 year old to "get rid of the chicken pox". She was a riot. I strongly feel that breastfed babies are more intelligent and have fewer health problems. Besides the benefits to mom are excellent, lower breast cancer rates, higher rate of losing weight, feel good endorphanes that are released into the brain...just think, what could be better?


    By the way, if I had been born to work on a plantation 100 years ago, I would have been the wet nurse. All day in a chair with no other responsibilities than feeding the kid, hell yeah...sign me up...too bad there was no TV.
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  • From robin777 on January 05, 2005
    I liked this chapter. I have been enjoying your fic. Please keep updating.
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  • From ANON - thursdayschild on January 05, 2005
    DON'T STOP UPDATING!!!!

    I love this story. I'm still not quite sure what it is about it that captures my attention but I am always waiting for your updates with great excitement. Keep going with this great story. There will always be people who don't like it but rest assured that many of us really, really like it. UPDATE SOON!!! Thankyou.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 05, 2005
    please please please continue writing this fic
    so addicted
    loved the last chap
    this will tie me over until the next update
    and please update soon
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