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By : laceyweasley
  • From ANON - crissy on January 05, 2005
    what's he going to do to zaurus? and when does severus finally plan to decide he will be hermione's husbannd? when? i love that you've posted so much recently. great fic.
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on January 05, 2005
    It doesn't seem as if Hermione minds Severus too much.....I am wondering why he hasn't seen the problem that is one of his sons. To be honest the "wet nurse" thing does not make me uncomfortable...I do wonder what is going to happen when Hermione goes back to school.....isn't introducing breast milk at this late game and then taking it away kind of bad for the baby?
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  • From ANON - LuLing Qi on January 05, 2005
    very good i will say keep updating
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  • From ANON - LadySnape on January 05, 2005
    I think you have done an exceptional job of taking a challenge and giving it a fresh twist. Please do not let any unsavoury reviews get you down, this is really a good fic. The different points of view that you have provided of the various characters that have been introduced are great, each time you learn a little more about their personalities as well as Severus' and Hermione's. I usually nitpick on whether or not a character is canon like, but you have provided just enough of believability to project these personalities as possible. Thank you. As for one reviewer who stated that lactating mothers cannot get pregnant while, lactating...hogwash, it is not 100% positively not going to happen...if that were really true, I would never have had the little surprises in my life that call me "Momma", LOL. On another aside, I envy you if you did not experience post partem depression while nursing, (assumption from your AN about breastfeeding), I had it and nursed...I do not have the best of luck though, lol.
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  • From ANON - alicat on January 05, 2005
    I don't see why you should get any complaints, there's enough warning saying that the content will most likely be disagreeable. But you will get a few nutters that will read it any way and winge just because they can *laughs* And they're usually the ones to gutless to give thier sign in name or e-mail anyway *winks*.

    One of my all time favourite fic's is 'TYGER! TYGER!' here on affn and that fic and yours are similar in the context of a very needy & peverted Severus (just the way I like him) *sighs*

    So don't you dare stop writing this little story of yours cause I LOVE IT!!

    Alicia xox


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  • From ANON - Shan on January 05, 2005
    I am really starting to love this story! Please keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - JW on January 05, 2005
    Ch 13 - uh-oh, Zaraus needs to prove his dueling skills against Severus. I'm guessing Severus doesn't realize his own son Shaman is an even worse threat - and that Shaman can use mind control tricks like Severus does here. Poor Hermione... Does "orifice" include her mouth? Thanks for the new chapter!
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  • From ANON - sammyjo on January 05, 2005
    Who cares what people think? Really.
    I have been reading this storyfrom the get go and it has been confusing at times but it seems that you are working out minor problems others have had problems with.
    My one comment to you is...Write if you want to and I will continue reading...For those others-Stop reading if you don't like it and don't pass any judgement on others because first off, you don't know them. Secondly, who are you to pass judgement on anyone.
    I am not saying that no one has a right to review. What I am trying to say is don't let anyone get you down. I also noticed you went over a thousand hits...Congrats to you. You must be doing something right.

    Just keep writing. I like this story and can't wait to see how things go from here. It is starting to take shape and make more sense.. Yes there were a few gaps and you're covering them quite well.
    Keep typing..If you need inspiration do it for me..(Ha-Ha)
    Sammyjo
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  • From ANON - Nikki on January 05, 2005
    don't give up, this story is sooo great i read it everyday, even if you haven't updated!!!
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on January 05, 2005
    Don't give up! This is a great AU story. Maybe you should list it as so in your description, that way, readers will be better apprised. It looks to me as though Severus is a shoe-in! He's behaving extremely possessively. I think Shaman will give him a run for his money--son or not!
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  • From ANON - LariLee on January 05, 2005
    Personally, I think it's a rather hot, BDSM, male harem sort of fic and I hope you continue. Remember, it's your story to tell. Irregardless of what others might think. I want more.

    ~Lisa
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  • From ANON - ellie on January 05, 2005
    No! Please don't give up because of people's criticism. I've never been good at taking it, so I don't ask for it, lol. Anyway, I loved the new chapter. I was wondering when 'Mr. Z' would show up. :] I hope another chapter is posted soon.
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  • From ANON - jwulee on January 05, 2005
    chapter 12- Wow...I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - jwulee on January 05, 2005
    Chapter 11- Another good chapter! I never want this fic to end
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  • From ANON - jwulee on January 05, 2005
    chapter 10- Wow...I don't know what to say anymore...your work is always sa perfect as before!
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