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By : laceyweasley
  • From ANON - dryade on January 03, 2005
    ooooooooooh! i've been waiting for you to update for sooo long. but it was worth it. great story. i lOVE the world you created!
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  • From ANON - kishkitten36 on January 03, 2005
    In reference to a reviewer above.....me, women can and do get pregnant all the time while lactating. You have either been seriously misinformed or you've never had children yourself, or both. Lactating is not the perfect contraception and it's one of the first things your OBGYN will warn you about after having a baby.

    Question: Why is Hermione a redhead in this story? Remember canon brown hair and brown eyes? Does she look like Ginny Weasley or Lily Potter or like Hermione with red hair? I'm always curious when I read stories where her hair color is changed because I can't understand the point -- why is it so important not to be brown? In stories, it's always, honey blond this and auburn that and honey streaked with red hightlights. LOL. Just curious.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 03, 2005
    Um, why do you sometimes refer to Hermione as Ermine? O_o'

    Otherwise... meh. Your story's okay. A bit squicky, but well-written with some original ideas. ^_^
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  • From ANON - JW on January 03, 2005
    Ch 10 - wait, so his first wife was only 12 or 13 years old when they got married and she quit school and had her first baby???? Where did she live while he was a student at Hogwarts? Don't tell me she had to live with her jerk father-in-law who got her pregnant!
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  • From ANON - me on January 03, 2005
    yes he is a little,
    oh yeah and if snapes wife lactated from the birth of her first son she would have only had one. did u not know that lactating women dont get pregnant? They say that lactation is the perfect contraception
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  • From ANON - JW on January 03, 2005
    Ch 10-11 - Severus loved his first wife, right? Eventually? Now I really don't understand why he invited Lupin to the binding ceremony for Hermione! So Severus didn't get any punishment shocks for what he did to Hermione (shocks from the protective spells he put on her)? I think Severus better make up his mind quickly - I don't trust his first son at all. As for who Hermione should wed, if not Zaraus the smiley cousin, then Severus, but he needs to change and be nicer to Hermione. So Severus' sons don't know that he was a former Death Eater? Does he hide his Dark Mark from them? Thanks for the updates!
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  • From ANON - Nat on December 29, 2004
    I cannot wait for more interaction with Snapes sons and Hr should so get with Professor Snape.
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  • From ANON - Jen on December 29, 2004
    I just wanted to review your story. Also, just in case you were wondering, Contracts is my new fave story. hehehe. Thanks for writing it and I hope you update soon.

    Thanks,
    Jen
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  • From ANON - scifigurl on December 29, 2004
    I just wanted to post an enocuragement to write another installment to this story.
    The story concept is original and believable. I hope you will continue to write it.

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  • From ANON - ashley on December 28, 2004
    wow...i love it. its different than any other snape hermione fic ive read before. update as much as possible, svp. i cant wait for the next chap.
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  • From ANON - ScifiGurl on December 20, 2004
    I really like this story. The concept is original and Professor Snape's character is true to Slytherin.
    I could see him plotting to get the best witch to marry into his family. I am interested to see
    Hermione interacting with the Snape boys and their nightly scheduled touching time.
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  • From ANON - Amaryllis on December 15, 2004
    I really like this story; it is refreshingly different from most other HG/SS stories. I can hardly wait for more.

    P.S.-- I hope Severus takes her for himself. ;)
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  • From ANON - Michelle on December 15, 2004
    I love your story, I was a little doubtful in the beginning but the premise caught my attention and now I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - daisymae on December 14, 2004
    The story is great. Can't wait to read more. You do need to work on your spelling and punctuation.Perhaps a little more attention to details. You throw things in and the reader has no idea of how an event came about or how someone came to possess a certain knowledge of something.

    Again, the story is good. Get a great beta.

    daisymae
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  • From ANON - Jess on December 13, 2004
    Just don't allow her to end up with Severus. This is a very well written and original story and I don't want it to turn out like the rest. She doesn't have to marry Shanair (even though I've taken a personal liking to him).... but she can't end up with Severus. PLEASE! OH!!! Let her marry one of the other Snapes... and she can see Severus on the side.. or he could be in a fit of jealous rage and.. I don't know... you're the awesome writer here..update soon!
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