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By : laceyweasley
  • From ANON - pinky on December 13, 2004
    I just absolutely love this story. I'm glad you updated it. Hee, broke Shanairs nose. Poor him but go Hermione!! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - JTBJAB on December 13, 2004
    Shanair should not be taken out of the running! He will actually appreciate Hermione, I mean you can't be too cruel to her! Please please please please dont take him out of the running! As you can probably tell from my begging I really enjoy this story and I can't wait for you to update again! It is excellant and one of the best marriage law type stories. Absolutely brilliant! I had a hunch that Sarah would like her, and I hope that you have many ideas yet for your story!
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  • From ANON - SiriusLives689 on December 13, 2004
    Bravo! I was terribly pleased to see that you had updated. I love the broken nose! I realize that it is more fun to have the bad guy get the girl, however, give Shaniar another chance even if it does fail, she can be love-lorn and confused! Love the story, please update as soon as possible and tell the critics to bugger off!
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  • From ANON - Maela on December 13, 2004
    Fun chapter! Indeed...what WILL she do to the other sons? Methinks all the sons will all be eliminated from the running and Severus will be the only one who can handle her. :P Despite the couple of bobbles at the beginning, I'm really enjoying this story. I do hope you'll continue with it. :)
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  • From ANON - GeekGoddess on December 13, 2004
    thank you thank you thank you for this chapter.....it felt like they were not understanding Hermione or where she is coming from....to finally have someone in your fic mention that she needs time was fantastic......I loved your very in character Hermione in this chapter....would love more interaction with Hermione and the baby....and a none violent Severus would be nice too....I look forward to see what happens next
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  • From ANON - JW on December 13, 2004
    Ch 9 - Well, for me, Shaman (the eldest son and mind-control baddie) has never been in the running. If Shanair (#2) is also out, and #3 son is too young, that leaves cousin Zaraus (the smiley one who seems nice) or Severus himself (but he better shape up! and he should then Obliviate the boys of any memories they shouldn't have about their stepmother's body). I am VERY glad that Hermione has finally had a chance to be with baby Sarah, who needs attention. Also glad that you've moved the timeline so this is after OoTP and Hermione has proven herself in the Dept of Mysteries battle. With the year she spent in the past (in your story) plus Time-Turner use, she's probably 18 now. BTW, you still haven't addressed the issue of Severus being a Death Eater spy for the Order; I'm curious if his sons know about it, and if Voldemort knows Severus has children.
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  • From ANON - Mr. Moosey on December 09, 2004
    Hmmm, I've never read a fanfic quite like this one. Good job, it's very original. Please update soon, this story is intoxicating!
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  • From ANON - ZoloftPrincess on December 08, 2004
    Ohmygoose. You have to finish this story. It's amazing.
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  • From ANON - RomanticBetty on December 05, 2004
    I know that writing takes time and patience for it to be good, but please continue this. I would like to see more chapters online in the next two weeks, if possible.

    Will Professor Snape be Hermonie's chaperone? I would like to see more interaction between Hermonie and Snape. Also, if you could, post some history on Sarah.
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  • From ANON - Palmira on December 02, 2004
    Your wizard world is a scary scary place for women....its a wonder that you haven't have a massive group of young women killing themselves before they find themselves contracted. What kind of world is worth living in if this is what you have to look forward too? This is why everyone hates the Talaban in Afghanistan....your world is just as bad except its more perverted and dirty. I have nothing else to say other than I am truly sorry that such a new creative idea for a story could be turned into a perverse thing. I am reminded of that sicko story that was written earlier in the year of the actors that play Hermione and Snape getting involved by him doing things to the underage bratty actress. Its such a sad thing to read in fanfiction.
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  • From ANON - aleena on December 02, 2004
    wow this is just plain terrifying.. i dont really find snape to be appealing or attractive here, its just frightening.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2004
    i like a lot but arg!!!!!! your grammer is not the best, Irregardless is not a word, simply and homestly it is not a word it does not exsist use speel check thats what a computer is for, then send it to your beta and if your beta fails to pick up such a trival mistake, Get Rid Of Them

    Nevertheless i absoluetly adore your story, please continue

    ^____^
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  • From ANON - RomanticBetty on November 29, 2004
    I love this. I just wish it was Snape that Hermonie ends up choosing. Or, him choosing her. Please continue writing this.
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  • From ANON - Melissa on November 28, 2004
    Ive been reading this stroy all weekend and I really love it. Though it strange that I want hermoine to end up with the blue eyed cousin. O well I guess I am not a HG/SS puritan. But I fing this story really great since their are so many ways this story can go. I cant wait For more.
    Melissa
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  • From ANON - Kat1441 on November 28, 2004
    I have to say I'm completely confused. This story is way too full of contradiction. The idea/concept is great but .... you really need to work things out a edit better.
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