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By : laceyweasley
  • From ANON - Lunar Tears on January 16, 2005
    Damn!!! That is fucking odd, good, but in so many ways,odd. I cant wait till you update. But one must wonder. . . .Will Snape actually marry her?
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  • From ANON - Mistress Garnet on January 16, 2005
    You have unique ideas here , so I give you kudos for that! Your writing style is very interesting, and pretty accurate about the way women were treated over 100 years ago.

    Now to the behavior part. Being a DOM myself, I feel obligated to make sure people understand the difference between a Dom and a Sadist. There is a HUGE difference. Please do not interchange them, they are not the same.
    A DOM and the submissive are in a loving relationship that is MUTUALLY agreed upon for both to be there. It is play, and role acting. A true DOM would never Harm their submissive, nor would they allow anyone else to.

    A sadist gets pleasure out of pain....period. There is no love, no agreement, no respect.

    I say these things because you are a darn good writer be confusing to the audience.

    With Respect,
    Mistress Garnet

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  • From ANON - ladyevilfaerie on January 16, 2005
    WOW! I just finished reading ch 16 and it is really good!!! The story is awesome!!! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! I WANT MORE! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - MoMalfoy on January 16, 2005
    oh crap...hope she's okay!! good chapter. :-) Mo
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  • From ANON - Ruby Snape on January 16, 2005
    Interesting...no doubt Sharman will get punished for his 'misbehaviour' I really don't like that boy, he is like Zarus, not to be trusted. Keep up the good work on the story.
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  • From ANON - JW on January 16, 2005
    Ch 16 - Kill Shaman! Kill Shaman! Severus should punish and read Shaman's mind completely, the snake. Severus better marry Hermione right now, 'cuz if she can't be protected by the chastity spells, she can be protected by whatever marriage fidelity spells Severus can make. Ahem....Severus is a good guy, right? He's just a spy, betraying Voldemort? And Zaraus is a faithful Death Eater? Do Shaman and his brothers know that Severus is a spy? Severus' father? Thanks for the update! When you repost, that would probably be a good time to incorporate all those rewrites you had in mind.
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  • From ANON - LariLee on January 16, 2005
    I wonder what they have done, too. But I'm glad "Z" is out of the picture!

    ~Lisa
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  • From ANON - AJH on January 16, 2005
    Poor Hermione, I hope she's okay *bites nails*
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  • From ANON - elementaldeity on January 15, 2005
    Oh no, not a cliff hanger. Ohhhh, I hate to love those. I guess that none of the sons will have a real chance now that Severus has pretty much decided that Hermione is his. I was so happy to see an update tonight.
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  • From ANON - Moi on January 15, 2005
    p.s. "Irregardless" may be a perfectly good word if one's purpose is to be redundant. It conveys a sense of insecurity in one's erudition. I would expect to see it in quotes, a word used by a character in the misguided attempt to sound more highly educated than he actually is, but I would never expect it in narrative prose. (Truthfully, I can't remember how it was used in your work; I only happened to catch it again when reading through some of your reviews. I recall that you defended your use of it at the beginning of the next chapter, and I was too engrossed in the story to go back and look at its use. Just putting in my two knuts.)
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  • From ANON - Moi on January 15, 2005
    This is such a difficult story for me to read. I hate to see Hermione reduced to a shadow, a will-less object. And yet here I am, reading the next chapter every time you post one.

    I feel like an unwilling spectator at the coliseum. Repulsed and unable to look away.

    Mechanically, you're an excellent writer, and your pace is good and your style is compelling. I'm not flaming you about content, by the way. You're doing an amazing job. I wish I weren't so fascinated.
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  • From ANON - Suni on January 15, 2005
    Excellent chapter! Thank you for deciding to post the story before correcting it. In the meantime...A CLIFFIE!?! OH THE HUMANITY!!! I do hope that Hermione ends up marrying Severus. I'm a hopeless romantic (most of the time) when it comes to those two.
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  • From ANON - Shelli on January 15, 2005
    omg review sooooon i cant belive u left it like that! evil person!!! i cant wait til u update again
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  • From ANON - n. on January 15, 2005
    no no no you can't stop there
    pleases please please continue
    i love this story
    please update more often
    this is a great story
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  • From ANON - aramis on January 15, 2005
    this is a realy great story and very interesting. I thought though that it might have been more interesting to keep hermione more childish as in the first chapters but its great nonetheless. the last two chapters (15,16) were a bit confusing in thier timeline though. if they happen before chapter 14 you should make that clearer I think because it took me till the middle of chapter 16 to make sense out of it.

    keep up the good work. can't wait to see the next chapters
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