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Reviews for Not Emotionless to Me

By : QueneArual
  • From ANON - Sampdoria on September 02, 2006
    To bad this story looks like it's abondned, I really think it could have been a great story, the two first chapters were really well written. Three women getting revenge was a new and refreshing plot. You really should think about finishing this.
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  • From ANON - Megan Consoer on July 10, 2006
    I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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  • From ANON - septentrion on November 11, 2005
    do you plan to go on with this story ? I find it interesting and want to read more.
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on October 08, 2005
    Wow! What a brilliant beginning for what is sure to be a bloody brilliant fic! I can't wait till Hermione gets her hands around that gits throat!!!! Please continue!
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  • From ANON - Joyous on October 07, 2005
    Depressing, but realistic... you have a great talent, please write more soon
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  • From ANON - lemonade on October 07, 2005
    Very sad... quite the angst fest. He couldn't kill her, eh? Well, that's something. Very little, but at least he loved her enough so that her ignorance was justifiable.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on December 17, 2004
    A few details in this chapter were slightly unclear, but I am sure that they will become clear as the story unfolds. I am glad that you updated and look forward to your next posting.
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  • From ANON - abi on November 25, 2004
    please update soon. i love it.

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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on November 15, 2004
    I like the beginning of this story. I think you should keep the narative as it is at the moment, as it works for the story. Can't wait to find out how Hermione tries to get her revenge.
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  • From ANON - Abi Donovan on November 07, 2004
    I'm adding this story to my favorites list. I hope that you update soon, as I love it, and it may just help me retain my sanit yuntil the next book comes out.
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  • From ANON - hopelsydreaming on November 05, 2004
    I normally don't go for stories in which the Light side loses, but I believe that you really have something going with this story. I think that it may be good for it to be taken out of first person or at least switch it around ... I'm looking forward to you updating ...
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  • From ANON - June on November 05, 2004
    Ch 1 - well, once you start a story in first-person, it's probably a good idea to continue. But you can switch - e.g., write Ch2 in first-person from Severus' POV.

    Story-wise, it looks like he was supposed to kill her but he didn't, so now she has to be hidden; if he hides her, it might be because he really loves her. I just can't imagine Severus unintentionally botching a killing curse. The brown-vs-black eye thing - it could be Hermione is wrong, that his eyes are brown when he is hiding his true feelings, not necessarily that he is exposing his real feelings. Perhaps he had to act the role as traitor because he could see Harry was goiing to fail. All that to say, he may or may not be a real traitor, depending on what you do next with this story.
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