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By : MistressLupin
  • From ANON - fayth on March 05, 2005
    ok, so on chapter 14, you have her wearing a white sundress at the beginning of supper and then she's wearing a blouse and black skirt. do you see the problem here? otherwise, you've done a good job.
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  • From lckarlsson on February 13, 2005
    Hey! So now I'm back from my long absense, and I thought I would return to a lot of new chapter!

    But I understand perfectly well the need to have a break, as I myself have just had one ;o)

    It's nice of you to let us know, so that we don't go thinking that you've abandoned the story.

    I'll be looking very much forward to when you return!

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - June on February 04, 2005
    Ch 23 - it's okay to step back and take a break from the story, as the break will probably help you have a fresh look at things. Just remember to come back and finish! Thanks for keeping us updated.
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  • From lckarlsson on January 13, 2005
    I'd still say that it's Lucius (I'll be very surprised if it's not). That evil man!

    I hope he won't get to hurt her too badly before Severus (hopefully) shows up to save the day!

    For a moment there I thought that she was actually going to escape. That would have been great - if she managed to get away by herself.

    Thanks for clearing up to me why Hermione/Ginny were crying.

    I wonder if Draco is just as evil as his father in you fic (still assuming that it's Lucius of course), it would be awesome if Draco felt sorry for her and maybe helped her escape again.

    Anyways - can't wait for your next chapter!

    Keep up the good work.

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - June on January 12, 2005
    Ch 22 - ack, "long blond hair" - Malfoy??? Ugh! I hope she remembers how she got away last time, and that Severus finds her soon. Thanks for the new chapter.
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  • From lckarlsson on January 11, 2005
    Oh! The suspense is killing me!

    Another amazing chapter, I think you're doing such a nice job on this story.

    I just have a little note to you about something that striked me as a bit odd in this chapter:

    I think that they are overreacting when finding out that Yuki is gone. Especially Hermione and Ginny crying.

    It's just that she has - after all - not been there for that long, and you have portrayed her as someone who keeps a lot to herself in her room. Even though she has talked a bit with Ginny/Hermione, I'm not sure if they know her well enough to even call her a friend. And do they know that she might have been held as a prisoner/slave before she showed up? If they don't know about this, they might not realize how much danger she is in.

    They would of course be worried that she's gone, but I don't think that they would be this worried (the "kids" that is, anyways - maybe the grown ups would be as worried as you describe).

    Well - this is just a little note, and something you could consider. I still love your story, you know.

    Keep up the great work :o)

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - June on January 11, 2005
    Ch 21 - ack! whoever took Yuki is NOT a nice person, and anyone helping them is also not a nice person. What was in the folded note she left on her bed at Grimmauld? Thanks for the new chapter - please update again soon!
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  • From lckarlsson on January 09, 2005
    Oh no! Yuki is in trouble now! And another cliffhanger!!

    I still think it's Lucius - though, I'm not sure about the marks on her shoulder. I don't know what the S stands for.

    Oh - it wouldn't be S for slave/servant? Would it? Malfoy's Slave/Servant? - I just can't stop guessing ;o)

    I hope to find out who this guy is soon - though. It was very nice of you to publish again this soon :o)

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - June on January 08, 2005
    Ch 20 - groan .... it's not Severus who found her, is it.... Nope, must be a bad guy. Sigh .... NOW how long do we have to wait before you tell us who caught her and how she gets out? I hope Lupin and Dumbledore find Severus ASAP to tell him she is gone! Yikes! Thanks for the chapter, I think. Sigh again.
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  • From lckarlsson on January 08, 2005
    Woa!!! So she's "running away"? What's going to happen to her?

    I'm worried for her because of the images from her past - the person who hurt her (and kept her as a slave?) might come after her. I think it's Lucius!

    I hope - if she get's into trouble - that Severus will come to rescue her. Though, that might expose him as a spy!!! Oh, dread! I hope you don't leave us waiting for too long :o)

    Keep up the good work!

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - June on January 08, 2005
    Ch 19 - yikes, Yuki actually walked out of the house!! And Severus won't find out until he gets there in the morning? Eeks! Please update again soon. Thanks for the chapter!
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  • From lckarlsson on December 29, 2004
    Hey there Lara!

    Sorry for not reviewing for a while! I've been so busy lately, but now I finally got a chance to catch up with your wonderful story ;o)

    I really enjoyed the last two chapters you've added. I'm really curious to find out what Severus saw in Yuki's mind this time! He seemed really shocked! Has he figured out what has happened to her?

    I really hope that they do figure things out somehow, I think they would be great together!

    Looking forward to your next chapter :o)

    Love Leonora.
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  • From ANON - Mischief on December 29, 2004
    Like it! Like it! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - June on December 28, 2004
    Ch 18 - thanks for the chapter. It was a nice insight into Severus' past, I just wish Sirius would quit his yapping and let Yuki make her own choices. I hope things get better for Severus and Yuki soon.
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  • From ANON - June on December 20, 2004
    Ch 17 - I'm glad Tonks is pretty understanding! Yuki really needed Tonks' relative calmness. And I'm VERY glad that Albus didn't let Severus off the case. Thanks for the chapter!
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