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Reviews for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

By : Gothic
  • From ANON - Carol on December 30, 2004
    Gack! How can you stop there?! I feel like throwing my computer. I want to run after Severus myself, but for obvious reasons don't know where to reach him at the moment to explain the misunderstanding which is currently driving me crazy and preventing sleep. Okay, maybe I'm over-reacting a little, but I do hope you update really, really soon. Thanks for writing, as always.
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  • From ANON - pinky on December 30, 2004
    You're about to make me cry. In fact my eyes are watering. *Sniff* damn harry for being there. I want more please.
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  • From ANON - LuLingQi on December 29, 2004
    You can not leave it like that, are you mad, write the next chapter before i go insane! Oh God it just ends like that! I know i am being over critical but still.....
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  • From ANON - Bambu on December 29, 2004
    This is an excellent cliffhanger when Severus says goodbye to Hermione. Utterly heartbreaking. You've balanced the lightheartedness of Hermione's day with the utter despair of Severus' to very, very good effect. I will look for your next chapter eagerly.
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  • From ANON - Bubsdragon on December 21, 2004
    Wow! This story is amazing. I laughed my head of a the Dirty Dancing part because I was listening to the soundtrack. Lol. I really love how this is, both of them have been kept in character. Although I would like to smack them both sometimes. Snape jealous. Not suprised really. Heck Ron was also jealous of Harry, so I should have seen that coming. Great Job
    Update soon please, my sanity depends on it
    Bubsdragon
    aka Bubs
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  • From ANON - Carol on December 20, 2004
    I've really liked this story so far, but was really disappointed with this chapter. I hoped that Hermione and Severus would explain their assumptions to each other. I hope they will soon. But mostly I couldn't believe he treated her like that or that even part of her felt that it was okay. I can understand her physically reacting to it, but it sounded as though she was emotionally fighting to think that it was bad. I hope I am wrong. Keep writing though. I look forward to an update.
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  • From Bambu on December 19, 2004
    I'm very pleased to see that you haven't elected to take the 'happiness and light' road with this story. Severus inability to communicate clearly when his emotions are involved is fairly well documented in canon, and you've extrapolated it to good purpose here. Hermione's reacting with all the understandable emotionally-charged lack of experience we know that she has -- despite being quite bright. And your Draco... well done. Let's hope there's a little room for his eventual improvement.
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  • From ANON - Alex on December 19, 2004
    Great! He's so possesive. I like him that way.
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  • From ANON - Nobis_Solum_Non on December 19, 2004
    Good story, pelase update quickly for me!

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  • From ANON - Evil Arachnead on December 11, 2004
    Luvin' it! Keep going!!
    ~Evil^^
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  • From jessicalynch on December 10, 2004
    yay, another chappie!loving it.keep it up
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  • From ANON - Beth Ashkevron on December 08, 2004
    _Please_ tell me when this is being updated! _Please?_
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  • From ANON - Evil Arachnead on December 08, 2004
    *pokes* so whens the next update? this is good!
    ~Evil ^^
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  • From ANON - jessica on December 08, 2004
    oh please don't leave us hanging like that. ugh, why can't they be together?keep it going, all right!
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  • From ANON - LU Ling Qi on December 06, 2004
    i absolutly love this story, i want more updates whenever you can.
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