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Reviews for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

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  • From ANON - Carol on December 06, 2004
    This was a really heart-breaking chapter. I want so much for both of them not to feel alone. This is a really great story. I look forward to reading more. I hope you are able to continue updating with frequency.
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  • From ANON - patrice on December 04, 2004
    how can u leave us like that *wipes away tear* hope u hurry up with your next chapter
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  • From ANON - Joey on November 21, 2004
    Excellent, excellent story! I cannot believe how amazing it is! Excellent plot, good writing, I absolutely love it. You manage to keep Snape from becoming a lovesick fool, while at the same time making him become one in very subtle ways. The character's witty thoughts/retorts lighten up the story, being completely hilarious but not stupid. And your writsing style is fantastic. It's as if you take it to a personal level, and I actually feel I'm really there when I was reading. Chapter 13 was just marvelous, and the curse Draco put on Hermione was very clever. All in all, it is an excellent story. I hope you don't end it there. ^_^
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  • From ANON - Joy on November 20, 2004
    Chapter 13 was brilliant! You're an awesome writer. There's more chapters coming, right? Please?
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  • From ANON - Sophie on November 20, 2004
    I L.OVED THIS STORY!!!!!!!! YOU MUST CONTINUE IT PLEASE!!
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  • From ANON - evileyedpirategrrl on November 11, 2004
    this is such a great story! itms sms so hard to come by a really great snape/hermione pairing, but this
    story is very effective. the characterization is dead on. too often writers try to "humanize" snape by
    making him blubberingly sweet once he a hermione do the deed, but you've avoided that, brava!
    i love an angsty, sharp edged, still slightly dangerous severus, and your writing captures that.
    can't wait for more, please update soon. xoxo
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  • From ANON - essa on November 07, 2004

    This is great, I like the pacing and the smut is superb, very hot indeed. I look forward to more in the future!
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  • From slygriff21 on November 06, 2004
    Awsome story! I love how you have Snape OOC and in character all at the same time. Please update again soon!
    Tiffany
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  • From ANON - lacey weasley on November 05, 2004
    Great Story!
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