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Reviews for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

By : Gothic
  • From ANON - Delayed Poet on July 13, 2005
    This better not be over! There's so much left! The whole Draco thing has to be resolved *with some more yummy Harry/Draco scenes, purty pwease!* and you've gotta do the Christmas Ball... Then there's Christmas --Severus and Hermione trying to find gifts for each other, how entertaining!-- and Voldy's defeat! I mean, Sev's still gotta get his! Their baby girl still has to be born --with an 'awwww' scene with Sev, I hope-- and I'm sure there's more, but my muddled mind can't think at the moment.

    In any event, I've absolutely loved this story so far. I even got so involved that I was practically screaming at the two of them for their blasted misunderstandings! The whole twist with Eleanor was wonderful, too. Also, I wonder what Sev will think when he finds out Hermione 'borrowed' that family jewel. Oh, and I really want them to be in each other's heads again... that was too entertaining!

    Anyway, I'd love it if you'd write more, please. ^_^

    Delayed Poet ~my name on here, but I'm too lazy to sign in...
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  • From ANON - Killer Angel on June 12, 2005
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  • From ANON - forgottenfraggle on June 08, 2005
    So, I have yet to actually review a single thing I have read here. I know, dispicable. This is the first story that has drawn me in, really make me believe. The fact that Snape and Granger are actually together, coupled with the fact that Harry might actually have something with Malfoy is still something I am coping with. But you have managed to make that seem, actually, right. Please continue with this story. Include the saving of Malfoy through love of Harry. Include something about Harry being stronger through love of Malfoy, but most of all, continue the passion and love that Snape and Hermione have started to feel for each other. And, for the love of God, let them actually show it to each other.

    You are a brilliant writer, finish this story and let the plot fairies feed your mind with more wondrous tails for all of us to enjoy.

    Thank you for writing something that prompts me to speak. I have been reading here for months, and you are my first...(Sheepish) :)
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  • From ANON - artemis on May 14, 2005
    Are you dead or something????
    Why wont you write more?
    It's so good.
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  • From ANON - Angel of Mercy on May 07, 2005
    This is the twelfth time that I have re-read this magnificent story in a month...

    Are you ever going to update?
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  • From ANON - lisa on April 22, 2005
    WoW
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  • From ANON - liz on April 22, 2005
    hi, please write more
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  • From ANON - Sammy on April 15, 2005
    Are you going to post an other chapter for this story? I've been waiting for quite some time now and nothing shows up... Is this chapter the last one? You didn't say it is and I hope it's not because your fic is one of the best I've ever read (if not the best). Thx for sharing your talent with us!
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  • From ANON - liz on April 11, 2005
    write more please
    And Soon if you dont mind

    It is fenominal
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  • From ANON - PippatheMouse on March 22, 2005
    Absolutly lovely! I had seen this fic for a while and was put off by the summary, thinking it would just be about Hermione, torture and dungeon cells. How happy I am that I took a look finally. Very enjoyable, I liked Snape's house, the love scene, Slytherin!Snape, every scene with Hermione-Severus dialogue, and their tentative, caring and loving relationship. As you can see I like alot of things! I'm very much looking forward to reading more, and please, an epilogue of H & S with their child/ren. Lovely. :-)
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  • From ANON - nymphadora on March 21, 2005
    I love your story so much! You are an awesome writer and you are really, really good at creating suspense - I spent all day at school today itching to come home and see what happened to Snape. But sigh, now I've finished this chapter...I really can't wait until you update again! (This isn't the end of the story, is it? Because that would make me very sad :( ) I love your descriptions of Hermione's and Severus's feelings - its not over the top, but it really captures that nervous feeling of being in love - so romantic! And I think you've really got a handle on Snape's character and motivations. Lots of people scoff at H/S pairings, but they should read your story, you make the progression seem very natural and sensible. Please update soon, I'm addicted!
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  • From lysa1 on March 11, 2005
    This is such an enjoyable story. It has got everything a story needs; suspension, love, humour...
    Good plot, I did not see the Draco/Harry pairing coming until it was too late ;-)

    When you have finished this, I sincerely hope that you
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  • From ANON - Sarah on March 10, 2005
    Love it! Love the story, really really love the chapter. So sweet... made all of the waiting for the sweetness worth it. I almost just don't need any smut. Ok, so maybe I shouldn't go thaaat far. :) But anyway, the plot is great and very interesting, too. You have done a good job managing to meld everything together into a cohesive, great story! Can't wait to read more, update soon! Please? Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 09, 2005
    such an awesome fic. i don't know what else to say. i spent most of the day avoiding hw, and reading this on break. its a great fic. i anxiously look forward to more.
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  • From ANON - Eddie the Black Maru on March 08, 2005
    That was GLORIOUS. keep it up, dear god, please keep it up!!!!!!!
    Much love
    Eddie
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