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Reviews for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

By : Gothic
  • From ANON - Moi on March 08, 2005
    It's taken me most of the day to read it, what with all the interruptions of life and family; and I almost didn't start reading it at all. I must confess the title and summary put me off at first. Not into the torture, all that much. But the fact that I've spent all day reading it should tell you how much I liked it. Good on ya, mate! I laughed, I cried, it was great, and Draco got redeemed, and Snape was saved, and he has his Hermione. Of course, if I read this chapter correctly, you're going to deal with the Christmas Ball, right? And you've promised us a "proper first time" as well. So I'm looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on March 07, 2005
    That was such a beautiful, sweet chapter. Severus being so conciderate to Hermione. Hermione being so restrained... If it was me, I would have taken him on the desk no matter what he said ;o) Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Bambu on March 07, 2005
    I like your boyfriend's plan... I may just have to have a little chat with my husband, as well. Thanks for the great idea AND the fluffy little bathtime fun. I wish that Severus would actually believe Hermione when she says that she loves him. Dense Slytherin!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on March 07, 2005
    I just started reading this, it is surprisingly very good.. you've handled the story very well!!! Go you!!! :D I'm still chuckling about the "lemon-drop addict" comment!!!
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  • From ANON - Kristen on March 06, 2005
    Please write more. ^.^ I love your f.f. and I've read it all in one day it was so good.. i need more! please? you wouldn't deny me good reading material, would you? *goodness i hope you don't do well with guilt* lol sorry
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  • From ANON - FinalPhoenix on March 06, 2005
    I love your way of writing, it is absolutely astounding of how well you can desicribe what everyone feels in the chapter not just Hermione or Snape
    I also adore how you decided to make Snape still a Death Eater, I hate how everyone thinks everyone's favorite Potion's Master just wakes up one morning and says
    "Hey I see the light!"
    Also, making Draco see the light by tourture was delicious.

    You are a goddess of writing! Truely I cannot wait for more
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  • From ANON - Eddie the Black Maru on March 05, 2005
    SQUEALS IN HAPPINESS!!!! ---never a dull moment!!!!! I loved it!! it gets better and better as time goes on!!!!!!!! I so love to read this story!!! its my favorite Her/Sev. fanfic!!! The nine have surely blessed thy!!!!!
    Much Love.......UPDATE ASAP!!!!!
    and Nine love ya,
    Eddie
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on March 04, 2005
    Damned school bell! Just when it was starting to get interesting ;o) And 'His Baby', that paragraph was so sweet. If you add the small bits of Draco/Harry interaction, this chapter was excellent. How many hours to theend of the school day??? ;o) Can't wait for the next chapter :o)
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  • From ANON - guenevere1592 on March 04, 2005
    I love this fic!!! I hope you write like ten more that are just as good.... Although, finishing this one eventually is probably more of a priority. I cant beleive how hot Snape and Hermione are!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - klomystr on March 04, 2005
    Severus' return in this chapter somehow rang more true to me than many such "reunion" scenes I've read in this pairing's many stories. The restrained passion was fantastic, and the Draco/Harry touch at the end was just right to keep us readers off-kilter. Keep it up!
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  • From ANON - Bambu on March 04, 2005
    So he's back, and he's going to make sure she takes care of herself, isn't he. Now it seems to me that Draco and Harry now know that Hermione's parents aren't dead, but they can't mention it to anyone really because wouldn't they have to reveal how they found out? The lead in to their kiss was beautifully done... so much desire and restraint that it was almost tangible. A lovely, lovely chapter.
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  • From ANON - Killer Angel on March 03, 2005
    What a nice surprise! I was actually rereading this story... and suddenly there was another chapter!

    yay.

    thanks so much! can't wait until the next update...

    but I gues I'll have to. ;-)
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  • From ANON - Sabine on March 03, 2005
    OMG! Your write some of the most erotic scenes I have ever read! Please update soon!
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  • From ANON - auror853 on March 03, 2005
    Great story! Can't wait for the next update! Keep up the great writing!
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  • From ANON - Killer Angel on March 03, 2005
    This story really is so incredible. When I started to read it when you first posted it, I didn't think it was going to have much of a plot. I thought it was going to be one of those "let's throw Hermione and Severus into close quarters and have them go at it" plotless ones... don't get me wrong, those can be great too ;-)... but this has such a good plot. It's very well developed and wonderfully written. I love this story so much. I can't wait for the next update.

    (P.S....I love that song too! I have the CD. lol. :) yay for the goo goo dolls.)
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