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Reviews for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

By : Gothic
  • From ANON - SpiritOfLupin on February 25, 2005
    He's alive. (I love you.) And what a sneeky bugger he is too, stopping her from having her caffine fix. lol. I don't suppose she minds though, now that she's got him back. (I know I wouldn't. Sigh.) Something tells me that Hermione aint gonna give him a moments peace. lol. She'd better be gentle with him though, having just come out of hospital. Nudge nudge wink wink. lol. Excellent chapter. xxx
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on February 22, 2005
    Nice wrap on Severus' rescue--I just hope he'll be OK--Dumbledore seemed to prophesize that he would be. Is Narcissa going to harm Draco? I hope not! I cannot believe that Hermione and Severus' secret (that they are together) as stayed under wraps! Somebody has to be the wiser! Anyway, I cannot wait to see what happens with Harry/Draco as well as Hermione/Severus! I'm patiently waiting for your next update. Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ANON - ChevyBaby on February 22, 2005
    Nooooooooo! What a place to leave it. Another 2 wonderful chapters. Again, fabulously written, as i've come to expect from reading this story. More lovely Harry/Draco interaction and (if Severus survives) we've gotta be very close to some Hermione/Severus action ;o) It's all coming together so nicely :o)
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  • From ANON - Eddie on February 21, 2005
    AAHHHH *she wails* its so close.....no!!! its so beautiful you must not stop!!!! keep going!!!! keep producing this WONDERFUL WONDERFUL work!!!!!! the nine have graced. much love and sincere squeals from, Eddie the Black Maru
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  • From ANON - Drake on February 21, 2005
    Bloody awesome. Interesting about Harry and Draco. I wonder if there relationship will work out, since both apparently want kids. Eh, maybe they can adopt. Or help raise Snape Jr.
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  • From ANON - NobisSolomNon on February 21, 2005
    Great chapter, update soon.
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  • From ANON - Lydia on February 21, 2005
    I'm so glad you finally updated. I keep checking , I just love this story. Please keep updating, it is great.
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  • From ANON - MJ on February 21, 2005
    MOREMOREMORE! Well it was worth a try anyway. I love this story and I check every day for updates so make me happy and update soon. lol. So is Draco's mom good? Who hurt the headmaster? Harry and Draco are so cute together and I can't wait to see more. Why did Hermione and Snape lose their connection and please don't let him die. Anyway, as you can tell I am eagerly anticipating more.

    Love always,
    MJ
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  • From SphinxFantasy on February 21, 2005
    Eee! *tackles* That was great! I KNEW Harry and Draco were going to go back for seconds. teehee Oh gosh, poor Severus. *cuddles* I hope he'll manage. Hermione couldn't possibly LIVE without him. *sobs* I can only imagine how angry old Voldy is gonna be. *laughs* Not too pleased I suppose, but that's whatcha get when you are a baaad baaad wizard. *nods earnestly* Nicely done (as always), and I look forward to seeing the effects of Draco's actions. Thanks for updating so soon!
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  • From ANON - kailgoddess on February 18, 2005
    Please keep writing! I'm so involved in this story! Does Harry and Draco get together? Will Severus get out? Oh please!
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  • From ANON - Maela on February 17, 2005
    Wow! Excellent story! I just read 33 chapters in one sitting. Do update soon. :)
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  • From ANON - Em Conway on February 17, 2005
    I was reading your story for the first time tonight. I read the following passage and soda came out my nose. roflmao
    "Him and his bloody lemon drops. Severus wondered briefly what would happen if they suddenly stopped manufacturing them. Albus would probably become frail, weak and powerless. They were very probably the source of all his powers."

    Enjoying you story greatly,
    Em
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  • From ANON - Avery on February 16, 2005
    MORE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE OH PLEASE OH PLEASE!!!
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  • From ANON - MJ on February 16, 2005
    I love this story. It's funny actually because I have NEVER liked the Hermione/Snape pairing before. I always found it gross and a little disturbing but this one drew me in from the start. I have to read more. The cliff-hangers are killer. I understand them because I am also a writer and I understand the need for them but I still hate them and chapter 33 was the worst one yet. Is something happening between Harry and Draco? That kiss was interesting. Also I have to know that they save Snape. The baby girl needs her daddy, Hermione needs Snape and he needs to feel like he is needed and useful. Please update soon before I go crazy!

    Love always,
    MJ
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  • From ANON - Wicked Loki on February 16, 2005
    Good grief! I started reading your story today, all 33 chapters in one go, and I just have to say that you left off in a horrible cliffhanger! Evil, very evil. Excellent story.
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