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Reviews for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

By : Gothic
  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on February 14, 2005
    Thank you so much for updating so soon
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  • From ANON - SpiritOfLupin on February 14, 2005
    I know that before the last chapter I've been a little naughty and not reviewing (blushes), I've given myself a good kick up the arse for it and hope to make it a regular thing from now on. Anyway, I love this story, especially the little conversations between Severus and Hermione, some of them really crease me up. Sometimes I even laugh out loud and scare the bejesus out of my husband. I couldnt believe it when Hermione started shooting her mouth off at the end of the last chapter and Malfoy heard her, my jaw literally dropped. I get the distinct feeling that he doesnt really want to go through with the whole turn-Hermione-over-to-the-dark-side thing, but maybe I'm wrong, it wouldnt be the first time. Lol, crack on Sev, not only is he going to knock the evil ones out with the sleeping potion but hes making them impotent as well, nice action. Maybe you could also work into the story him giving them all a heafty kick in the knackers while they sleep. No? alright then, but its a nice thought. Looking forward to your next chapter and seeing what Malfoy has to say about Hermiones little outburst. May your muse be with you. xx
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  • From ANON - Lyndie578 on February 14, 2005
    Well you turned the worm quite nicely. I guess the cat's out of the bag now. Question is, how will Draco handle this? What's in it for Draco?
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 14, 2005
    Still enjoying this more chapters please
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  • From ANON - destiny black on February 14, 2005
    good chapter, but you were missing alot of puncuation. i was very confused about the conversations that were going on between severus and hermione.any chane of draco turning out good?
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  • From ANON - MeToo2 on February 14, 2005
    Love the stroy its got great twists and the whole premise is excelent. I don't think this has been done before and ive been reading fanfiction for over three years. Some elements are borrowed but other than that its yours. hope to see the rest can't wait to find out what happens to Malfoy and Severus and Harry for that matter, please don't make then gay ive read to many stories that went down the drain that way but if you can find a way to make it work hey, all the power to you.


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  • From ANON - Lu Ling Qi on February 13, 2005
    you are evil i hope and by hope i mean you better update soon! so help me if you don't! pls pls i beg of you UPDATE!!!
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  • From ANON - Kate McGuire on February 13, 2005
    I just ran into this fic and read all 31 chapters. It is truely surperb. I hope you update again soon. I think you do a very good job of writing Snape. Hermione also.
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  • From ANON - Eddie on February 13, 2005
    not bloody fair of ya! you is evils for doing that! that was one of the worst clifs...im laying here growling at ya in antipication for the new chapie. for the love of
    kami, update soon, put us poor unfortunate souls out of our misery. may the nine oversee thee, much love from Eddie the Black Maru
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  • From ANON - carly on February 13, 2005
    ohh cliffhanger
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  • From ANON - yulia on February 12, 2005
    love the chapter , update quick xxx
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  • From ANON - Tourniquette on February 12, 2005
    I only throttle authors when they give up or delete their fics, so you're safe...for now. Mwahahahahaaaaaa.

    I think the cheekiness between Malfoy and the others was great, and him mistaking the acronym for venereal diseases for Dvd's was fantastic.

    I was a bit confused at the end of the chapter as to the "blocking" if you will, or placement of the characters in terms of physical locations. Were Hermione and Harry in her room, alone, and she stomped out to the mattress where Draco found her, or did Draco sneak into her room and touch her on the floor while she was sobbing there?

    This is so addictive.
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  • From ANON - LunaMoon on February 12, 2005
    Gah! How dare you! evil evil person....stupid cliffhangers...Hmm, Draco in a room full of matresses..can't say that I would mind lol.
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  • From ANON - Kaye on February 12, 2005
    AAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH! You've got to be kidding me!!!! You can't just leave it there! I'm gonna go crazy wondering what the hell happens!!! Anyway, this is an amazing story and I love it! So keep up the great work and update soon! Otherwise I might go insane....;_
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  • From ANON - pinkyheather on February 12, 2005
    This story is getting so good. but I wish they'd rescue Severus already. Ohhh I hate cliffies. More soon please.
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