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Reviews for When Everything's Made To Be Broken

By : Gothic
  • From ANON - Tourniquette on February 11, 2005
    There are evil cliffhangers, and then there is Chpater 29.

    *tries very hard not to throttle the author* :)
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  • From ANON - yulia on February 11, 2005
    this is fantastic update quick cant wait to read more...
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on February 10, 2005
    Wow what a great party - How come I never had fun ones like that??? maybe not enough alcohol! Love the Severus in the head commentary that is going on. At least he can feel some love and have fun in Hermione's head. How scary that Draco is asking about Hermione's first time! Especially with the extra voice in her head!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 10, 2005
    Flame you fot that kiss? Hardly. Not only would Draco and Harry make an interesting twist to the story, maybe Draco could be inspired to help rescue Snape. of course Harry and Hermione would have to work fast.
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  • From ANON - Nique on February 10, 2005
    That was the best chapter. I can't believe Draco asked her about her first time. Please update soon
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  • From ANON - Eloradanin on February 10, 2005
    OMG !!! keep going I was laughing so hard I was crying...love the story ^__^ update very soon!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Innogen on February 10, 2005
    Ooops! How is she going to get out of this one! Glad to see the story is back! Great Chapter!
    Innogen

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  • From ANON - Aleksandra on February 01, 2005
    Excellent writing, proper development of story and all the good stuff.

    I can't wait to see more of this fanfic, it's gorgeous!

    ~Alik
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  • From ANON - NobisSolomNon on January 26, 2005
    Good chapters! I can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - yamihikari on January 25, 2005
    I love the story! ^o^=
    Please! PLEASE continue the story and tell me when u update!
    thankyou!

    You are a great writer
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  • From ANON - Sphinx on January 23, 2005
    Sheer brilliance. If it weren't for copyright laws and such I would suggest publishing this. Very impressive. The plots and subplots are well drawn, and you are nicely descriptive. The characters are taken exactly as they were from the series, a feat few can say they have accomplished. I have to commend also your creativity with various parts of the story, as well as your ability to incorporate various small tidbits from JKRs books. A job well done, and I absolutely can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 22, 2005
    update soon. it's awesome
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  • From ANON - angela on January 22, 2005
    great story. it's very fresh and exciting. jw... but where did ron go?
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  • From ANON - Shinohime on January 21, 2005
    *Evil Grin* Very nice... I can't wait for the "get together" could you just have one small drunken kiss between Harry and Draco?? PLEASE?? It would light up my day...
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  • From ANON - Bambu on January 21, 2005
    I was very happy to see you post your most recent chapters. I confess that I look for your story often.
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