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By : ElizabethStump

From ANON - odogoddess on February 04, 2006
Absolutely absolved. This chapter was *perfect*. I tried to leave feedback for this chapter at Ashwinder (where I happened to read it first), but my browser was having fits. My comments were basically that this was so well mixed - the right amount of tension, guilt, angst, smut and surrender. I loved it. :)
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From ANON - Miki on January 30, 2006
Oh...I forgot to ask. Does this mean that Molly discovers Severus and Hermione in bed...in flagrante dilecto?
Omigod, just the thought has me rolling off my seat.

Wow, reading the reviews I realized that "Wicked" and I share the same sentiment re: your lemon.

WE LOVED IT...AND YOU!:)

Oh, and then the divorce can be Molly's fault, since she will of course tell Ron about his unfaithful wife.
At which point I would love if Hermione becomes the ultimate bitch and tells on Ginny. But she won't.
I know I'm a bit of a puritan, but Ginny's cheating on Harry for so long really pisses me off!
Tell the truth!!! Oh well, I suppose she's afraid to tell him. I just want a clean break.

Looking for your updates. Happy Valentines!

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From ANON - Miki on January 30, 2006
I love you, love you, love you, love you, love you, love you... (Sighing in happiness - face wreathed in smiles)
LEMONADE for me! Oh wait...that was for Hermione. I'm so jealous.

If I haven't said it before, let me say it now - You are terrific!

So, I'm expecting the dump Ronald chappie...without his stupid stubborness.

Hermione's inability to climax was a brilliant point. I'm so glad you didn't make it an easy thing accomplished. All the more sweeter for it.

I know it won't be easy for them from here on, but at least they know that they love each other.

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From ANON - tigersue on January 27, 2006
Wow! What can I say? That was well worth waiting for - not just my favourite fanfic but that was one of the best sex scenes I have ever read anywhere! Congratulations Betz, I will look forward to the next chapters and re-read this one a few times! Many thanks, Tigersue x
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From ANON - applekissis on January 27, 2006
I have to say...I absolutly adore this story.....I have not laughed and cried so much from reading in a long time....its beautiful....bravo to u Betz..Please keep it coming and I will keep reveiwing...lol

Applekissis@yahoo.com
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From ANON - Dee on January 27, 2006
WOW! A great start to the new section. I was getting worried for poor Severus. I can't wait for more! Again you are utterly fabulous!!!
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From ANON - Moonshadow on January 25, 2006
this is an amazingly detailed fic. i love your characterization of Lavander and i think that harry and ron's attitudes are very realistic for their situations. i didn't expect to enjoy this challenge so much but your fic got me hooked. brava
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From ANON - Sorceress Black on January 25, 2006
WOOOOOHOOOO hell yes FINALLY Hermione gets some Severus action!!!!
Absolutely BRILLIANT chapter, not only the fact that our two finally got thier shit together
and hit shag highway but the touch of sweetness there at the end was lovely. All the emotions
in this chapter were so good, love, anger, desperation, relief and realization it was just amazing
and you had me glued to my seat as usual. Yay! I am so excited about her agreeing to help
him by getting the potions ingredients, I mean I expected she would but I think this will be awesome
to read as the events unfold. Worrying about getting caught, whether she will finally talk to Ginny about
all this since she is now part of the conspiracy, oh and we can't forget about the main question WILL SHE GO
WITH HIM???? LOL I can't wait seriously, I just can't ;) I am also anxious to see what will happen with Ron now ohhhhh you are so damn brilliant we finally have what we want yet there is still so much more for the wanting lol. I will be back as usual checking for updates and hope to see one soon hint hint lol, you rock.
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From ANON - Pearle on January 24, 2006
Oh wow, where to begin? Wonderful chapter. In answer, yes, I'm happy now. However, I really do understand the need to build tension (I've taken enough flack for both A Knock at the Door and Dances because they didn't jump into bed by chapter two).Severus losing control and destroying his flat is a great image - it really shows how much she affects him. And the line from Mr Mom -

"Gin?"

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From ANON - levans on January 23, 2006
Just thought to tell you how much this story is pleasing to read, I love the way you develop your plot, and your tantalizing clues leave me wondering what next...
Keep writing, I'd babysit if it made you write any faster...
Just kidding
L
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From ANON - BotticellisAngel on January 23, 2006
Wow! Great chapter! Is it hot in here, or is it the fic? LOL Well, well, Molly Weasely huh? I bet she's going to have some right interesting things to say to Severus isn't she? I hope she doesn't ruin everything for them. Ron wasn't being such a prat in this chapter. Maybe he's realized that there's really nothing much else to fight about. Well, nothing that he knows about. LOL Anyway, eagerly anticipating more!
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From ANON - Hanna Delacour on January 22, 2006
Fabulous chapter! I'm glad to see them finally purge a bit of their desire :D Anyways it looks like nothing but drama ahead for the couple. Hermione nicking ingredients. Molly Weasley pouring out her heart to Severus, I look forward to that encounter immensely. Draco's temper on the line. With all that coming up you are going to be a very busy author, and I a very busy reader and reviewer! I can't wait for the next chapter. Molly Weasley, this is going to be brilliant. Snape will not let her oversights go uncorrected, one way or another, at least I wouldn't think. :D
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From ANON - Hikity on January 22, 2006
Hi Betz, very enjoyable chapter - thanks a lot for it. Very much like real life (and sex for that matter) if you know what I mean. Whatever comes please let them have a really happy ending....I am fed up of bad endings, :) :) :)
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From ANON - ash on January 22, 2006
finally and i really loved this story now i cant wait till they exscape and i am still wondering wether or not ron is having an affiar and who with if he is
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From ANON - bxn110 on January 21, 2006
Another scandalously brilliant chapter. That is one of the best sex scenes I've read in a long time. Fabulous work!
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