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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - angelina on January 20, 2006
    Have been following all this long while, sometimes with frustration at the slow pace. Writing now to say how much I appreciated this chapter--not just the lemons (which you have written very beautifully and poignantly), or the pace, which you picked right the hell up, but the originality and intelligence of the action. In the typical version, Hermione would have run sobbing into the night when Severus lashed out at her, and there would have been some number of chapters of angst and alienation. Your Hermione's intelligence in assessing the situation, and guts in reaching out to him in faith that he really did care for her, was refreshing and touching and not boring. Also appreciated how sex was not brilliant and flawless the first time out, and that they didn't shag like bunnies all night long.

    Thanks very much for the lovely chapter, and your incredible investment in this story. You have given us quite a gift of entertainment.
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  • From MayM on January 17, 2006
    Hello! Well I know i have never reviewed but I've been reading your fic for a LONG time and I just love it!!!!, please continue soon I check every single day to see if you've continued, i all ready finished eating all my nails (bad habit) but im desesperated to know whats next LOL, you can call me crazy but im a HUGE fan of your both fics, please, oh please continue soon.

    Love

    May
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  • From ANON - ministrychick77 on January 16, 2006
    wow... this story's been so good my hubby's barely been able to get me off the computer!! can't wait to read the rest of the story.... great writing!! still think ron's sleeping with someone else.
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  • From ANON - Anon on January 15, 2006
    wah. update please.
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  • From ANON - Hikity on January 15, 2006
    Dear Betz, that was a very enjoyable chapter, although it is not very nice of Hermione to leave Severus alone with all his lust and love at the end. Is she playing with him?? She is a grown-up woman who should know that she hurts a man deeply by acting in such a way. How could she, being in the middle of pleasure herself ,suddenly come to "her senses" and think she would hurt him. They love each other - where is there a possible act of revenge but just the deep wish to be finally together?
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  • From ANON - Statues on January 13, 2006
    What????? Why, why would you stop there? That's not good, not good at all! Please update soon...I'm utterly addicted to this story. Good God, you're a tease.
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on January 12, 2006
    Hello Betz- Where is the next chapter. I can't stand it!
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  • From ANON - Lunajen on January 11, 2006
    Ok, I just reread this one again!!!!

    Must*wheeze* catch*wheeze* Breath!!! I have asthama you know! Getting hot and bothered isn't helping me!
    This in one of your best chapters yet all the tension and heat!!!!!
    Now, I just hope you are going to post soon!!!!!!
    PLEASE!!! THIS IS AGONY!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mynuet on January 06, 2006
    I can't decide if I want to jump up with joy or to bang my head against something. Sooooooooooo close, and yet so far.

    Thank you so much for making Christmas more fun, even if I forgot to review and had to remind myself to come back to say "Hi! Still reading! Still in love with the fic!"
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  • From ANON - paige on January 05, 2006
    I cried when Sev and Hermione kissed! It was a very intense moment. I can't wait to see what happens between them now. Is Ron going to be mature and let their divorce happen? Ch47 seemed to indicate that he realises that their marraige is over. That chapter had me in tears too - memories. I still look forward to when Hermione and Molly have it out - they are aren't they? It would be fun! Anyways, all the best for the New Year. May the Muse be with you.
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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on January 05, 2006
    Oh please don't get me wrong hun, I am in LOVE with your story. It is one of the best, well wrotten ones I have ever read. However, this waiting for updates for over a week or two gets frustrating. I forget all the subtle details from the story. I just can not continue reading this until there is more. I love it that much you see! So forgive me, I am walking away from this fic. I will retunr later. Thanks for a great story.
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  • From ANON - Miki on January 02, 2006
    You most definitely did not disappoint. Wickedly delicious lemon!
    I liked Hermione attack of conscience. Very realistic. I want there to be no doubt in her mind when she finally "sleeps" with Severus.
    I can wait if she can :) God knows I must be into torture at this rate.
    Anyway, lovely update. I'm childfree this weekend and lost at sea, but at least I have fanfic to help me through it.

    Happy Holidays and all the best for the New Year.

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  • From ANON - kimba6565 on January 02, 2006
    I love your fic! Its so cool. I've only recently discovered your fic and I only just finished chapter 30, but I love it all the same. I just wanted to say that, at this point in the story, Severus coming to grips with the fact that he loves Hermione reminds me of a Disney song. I know it's really juvinile, but please don't think I'm making fun of you. It reminds me of 'I Won't Say I'm In Love' from the movie Hercules with Severus in place of Meg and Albus and Minerva in place of the muses. Chapter 30 also reminds me a little of 'Kiss the Girl' from The Little Mermaid. I'm sorry if this is the wierdest reviw you've ever gotten, but I just had to tell you that. Luv your story, keep it up, and I award you a giant batch of cookies for what I've gotten to reading as of now.
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  • From ANON - OdoGoddess on January 01, 2006
    Ooh, *bad* place to leave it! Poor Severus! You are wicked, wicked, wicked.

    Thank you! ;)
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  • From ANON - Catpower on December 31, 2005
    What a fabulous 2 chapters! I loved the whole description of the supper club - sounding so perfect and beautiful at first and then showing how you could still have a really unpleasant time there. The desserts sounded too rich and sickly even for me - I would never have believed it possible! Ga-too indeed! (Gaffaw!).

    I'm GLAD H didn't shag Sev. It would have been wrong. She should be dressed for him alone and not be drunk and tell him properly that she wants to be with him first. Not sure he's going to see it that way immediately though.

    I am SO looking forward to the next act of your fantastic story. Thanks a lot for the entertainment so far and I'll look forward to reading your further writings in the new year (have a good one!).
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