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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - willa on December 30, 2005
    i absoliutely LOVE your story!!! more and soon!!
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  • From pickles87 on December 28, 2005
    Woo Hoo finally found the site with the extra chapters...

    Wonderful story. When will the next update be?

    Is Ron following Hermione? Or was his "emergency" a set up to get out of dinner early? Is R the other woman? Why did Ron have to be such an ass before leaving.

    Will Hermione figuire out what type of "juice" ron is on? Will Victor already be privy to that? Has Vic and Ron discuss Vic getting Hermione so Ron can be free again?

    Wished Hermione would have went up to the private dining room.

    Will Sev forgive her quick departure?

    I thought once those to were in an embrace that the aurors would have busted in... boy oh day that would have made rita's quill curl...

    Well waiting for more...

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  • From ANON - Erin on December 28, 2005
    Oh My God, Its is un fair to stop writting at such an interesting momeny, but I still understand u. Hope u will continue writing and very soon we will enjoy a new part.
    Happy Xmass and new Year, all you wishes must come true.
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  • From ANON - BotticellisAngel on December 28, 2005
    Hello, I know I usually review at Ashwinder; but sometimes it takes them longer to put up a chapter than it does here and I didn't want to go there and log in for nothing. LOL Anyway...Finally! Hermione realizes (hopefully Ron too) that there is nothing left to salvage of thier marriage. I can't help hoping that he'll let her go easily; but I know that it's probably not going to happen. I wonder who was watching her leave? Rita perhaps? I hope not. I hope it was Draco. Hermione shouldn't have rushed off like that. She should have stayed at least long enough to explain that she didn't want to sleep with him just to spite Ron. At least the mask is gone and there are no longer games being played. I liked "seeing" Severus lose controll just because of her presence and her using his name. It shows how enthralled he really is with her. I love this story! Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Karmen on December 28, 2005
    As always you are such a tease!!! I can't..wait..till...the...next...chapter!!
    It is so interesting! And you know what I am really never ever again taking to read wip!! :o)
    I love your story! I am going to be patient just because I understand how hard it is to write such a good story and just how much time is needed...
    And there is this thing I read about you sayng that this is just the begining of the last 2/3 Woww... wait a little... WHAT?!?
    This is getting so long, and I must admit that even if it never ends I am going to be with you till the end!
    Love & Kisses,
    Karmen :o)
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on December 28, 2005
    YES YES YES! OMG I was thoroughly excited when I saw not only one
    but two chapters to read, HELL YES! Now bear with me here because
    I am serisouly exhausted so I will do my best to make some sort of
    sense lol. These last two chapters (well one really big one actually)
    were absolutely amazing. I think my recent lack of sleep will not even
    let me give you the proper praise that you deserve, I mean what can
    I say it was brilliant as usual! Holy hell I did not ecpect her to say his
    name I read it like nothing was amiss then had to stop, go back, re-read
    it and and think "wait, oh shit she has never aknowledged him as Severus"
    omg then he rips of his mask WHEW! I almost fell outta the damn chair lol.
    I loved all the other characters you brought in for these chapters, it was
    great and yes I remember who little miss blondie was, I wonder if she ever
    had her three-some with Blaise and the witch her hubby was shagging lol.
    Beautiful desciptions on everything, you have such a way with words
    that I can actually see it, I just adore the vivid pictures you paint for
    us each time. I can't even begin to tell you how anxious I am to read
    more, because you probably know already anyway lol. There's so many
    questions to be answered and I can't wait to find those answers. Update
    again soon and thanks for the wonderful christmas present of a fantastic update!!!!!
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  • From ANON - queenp on December 27, 2005
    Me thinks you have been taking Cliffie lessons from the lovely Lady (LotM)...This is downright cruel...leaving Severus unsatisfied...leaving Hermione in tears...leaving a witness to the departure (OMG, was it Harry?? Does he know now??? EEK!) leaving your readers on the edge of a big cliff, with no safety net? AARGH!! and then you add even more questions in your A/N...I didn't need any help there..I've got quite a list of questions on my own....PLEASE update this story soon...I NEED MORE!!! my habit is in need of a bit of a fix...mas, Betz, por favor...MAS!!


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  • From ANON - newfig on December 27, 2005
    Perfect! Can't wait to find out what happenes
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  • From Lunajen on December 27, 2005
    And I ddi love how you unmasked Severus in this chapter!
    Absolutely spiffing old chap!
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  • From Lunajen on December 27, 2005
    Ok.I think you just might be the antichrist of evil with this cliffie!!!
    Now he thinks he has done something wrong!!!! And her with her damn
    Gyrffindor loyalty!!!! Screw loyalty so she can screw Severus!!!!

    And your "did I forget something?" line just about had me floored!!!
    All I could think was that Ron might get lucky tonight, then maybe Alan, then maybe Victor...
    and Hermione would have gotten preggers because she had "forgotten something".
    It would have been perfect if Hermione's mind would have kept those pesky little thoughts
    out of her head and let her enjoy herself completely! And if she had "forgotten something" with Serverus;
    the better for her and for him. I think.
    I know you put those in just to mess with my head, you know.

    Hope your Christmas was good, mine is better now that you posted!! And a double to boot!!!
    So how much longer do I have to wait till Hermione divorces Ron because he is seeing some
    bimbo blond as well as having a girlfriend. I know I asked you a ways back if I could send you some ideas about a story,
    but I haven't gotten around to it. Work has been crazy with Christmas and all and I haven't had much time.
    Between that and the little one getting sick, I have been working like a mad women. I might still send you somethig soon.

    All in all, wonderful hope to see chapter fourty eight real soon.

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  • From ANON - ash on December 27, 2005
    i didn't mean my earlier remark that way is was just all that tention was getting to me. You got believe me i love this story i couldn't enjoy a a story if it didn't have a good plot. And your story has a GOOD plot and i cant wait till you next update.
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 26, 2005
    all i want for christmas is another five chapters...
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  • From ANON - Wicked on December 26, 2005
    AACCKK!!! You little tease!!!! Poor Severus...=(...I think I'll go hug him....um...yeah...just a hug...maybe....um....Anyway! WONDERFUL CHAPTER!! I just wish Hermione didn't have a conscious. Oh well. It will be perfect I'm sure when it happens... Good things come to those who wait. See ya in RPG1, love!
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  • From ANON - Claudia on December 26, 2005
    The new chapter was WONDERFUL... all the describtions of the dinner and the restaurant.. well I would love to be there. But of course not with Ron *smile*.

    I really enjoy the story and I hope you will continue.
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  • From ANON - black colour vision on December 26, 2005
    oh my goodness what a cliff hanger!!!!!!
    I can't wait for the next installment.

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