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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From Lunajen on December 01, 2005
    And they shall call you Queen of the Tease!!!! You are completely evil!! You know that right! :)
    Leaving it like that!!!!!!! Can't wait till the Anniversary Dinner. If this was a weekly show, I can hear the announcer now..
    "Watch and see Ron make a right prat of himself during dinner!!! Will he chase her into another's arms?
    Will Serverus snake his way into Hermione 's heart? Tune in next week, Same time. Same greasy bat channel."

    Glad to see you did go into the whole
    "Steroids" and Ron issue. Very interesting that he doesn't even think to question
    his coaches or trainers. Heck, he might not even care. Just fame and glory for Ron eh? Trying to get that last
    bit of glory that he didn't get in the fight? Maybe? We can deffintely say Roid rage.

    And to your friend who helped with the toys names; The Junior Assistant was perfect...or is that prefect?
    Yeah, yeah I am sooooo puny.

    And Ron is so sleeping someone......just who?

    Ok, can wait till the next chapter but I have my Lemonade ready for a quickie if need be though.

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  • From ANON - Miki on November 30, 2005
    Yay! Here comes the sex, here comes the sex, here comes the sex... Whoohoo!! Okay, musn't get too excited, or I'll pass out before it happens.

    Hope Ron's steroid potion doesn't make him collapse. Hermione should have told him he owed her for all the friggin' years she had to penny pinch. Ron's an ass that just love to hate in this fic. Hope his hand gave him his money's worth. Jerkasaurus!

    Hold on Severus...payday is coming. (smirk)

    Don't worry take your time writing. (I've two children myself) I have grown rather partial to your fic - so as long as you eventually finish.

    I've started searching for whatever else you've written as well.
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  • From ANON - lilith on November 30, 2005
    Ron is going to have a heart attack (literally), I can just see it coming... Are these potions he takes legal? Doesn't seem so.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 30, 2005
    Need More!!!!! Can't wait till the anniv dinner! I hope she has another dress like the one the other night that makes ron feel like an arse, or one he hates so hermione goes to snape. I cant handle the suspence.
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  • From ANON - Sev's Girl on November 29, 2005
    When is Hermione going to realize she needs to divorce Ron,
    and get knocked up by Sexy Sev? I'm reading as fast as I can,
    and I'm getting very impatient. WHEN IS HE GOING TO REMOVE
    HIS MASK? So many ?s, but no answers. Great fic by the way!
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  • From odogoddess on November 29, 2005
    I don't read wips, I made a vow not to read wips... until yours. Now I have two. This wicked, lovely, tempting, frustrating, fascinating, engrossing and highly romantic story of yours, and "The Mirror of Maybe". The tension is driving me quite mad. Still, sanity is overrated and the smut is better here. ;-) Thank you for continuing to post and may your Muse continue to bless you.
    -- (-|-)* Judith -aka- OdoGoddess
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  • From ANON - BewitchedWicked on November 28, 2005
    Oh my gods. I love this. HOnestly I can't even give a proper review at the moment. I just spent the past three days obessed with reading your fic. So now, I patiently await the next chapter, with much, much anticipation. I love how you are writing Severus. No wait, I take that back. I lurve it. I can't wait for more. Thanks!

    ~Bewitched Wicked
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  • From ANON - Claudia on November 28, 2005
    Hi ! I just noticed your story right now and read right to chapter 14 in two evenings. It is one of the best fanfictions I have read so far. One of my favorite HP persons is Ginny and I really like the idea of her beeing married to Harry but not loving him. It is really great to read about Harry not-beeing-the-golden-boy. I am looking forward for the next chapters and again - this is one of the best and most intresting fan fictions I ever read.

    I hope you understand my review - english is not my mother language, so keep my mistakes *g*
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on November 28, 2005
    do, do do, do do I sing a little tune
    while I wish that Betz would update soon
    All this waiting is making me sick
    for this, my all time favorite Fanfic.

    la, lala, lala I'm still singing this stupid song
    Hoping that it won't be too long
    If only I knew Legilimency,
    Then there'd be no waiting for ME. *evil grin*

    I can't believe I'm writing this crap
    perhaps I shall just go take a nap
    where dreams of new chapters dance in my head
    and Severus FINALLY takes Hermione to bed.

    HAHAHAHA Yes I have truly gone mad. Or either serisouly bored. Maybe I should get some work done
    *does a disgruntled sneer, worthy of a Malfoy* lol Update soon girly!!!

    ~*~*~*~Shan~*~*~*~


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  • From ANON - sevs_lover on November 27, 2005
    Hello! It's me again. I just wanted to tell you that when I first started
    to read this fic, I thought it was going to be a piece of shit, but I love
    the way it's filled out. Oh, and I have two questions:
    1. Where are the lemons?
    2. Is Ron shagging Lavender? Just a guess.
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  • From ANON - sevs_lover on November 27, 2005
    Hey Betz, when is Hermione gonna get divorced with that doornob Ron and get together with the very, VERY sexy Calleo/Sev? I'm waiting!!! I love Hermione/Snape fics, so I need some Snape and Hermione!!!
    TTYL!
    (Just to inform you: TTYL stands for talk to you later. My 12 year old daughter uses it in emails and... well,whatever else 12 year olds use. I know, motherhood can be confusing!)
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  • From ANON - Larissa on November 25, 2005
    I LOVED this chapter! keep them coming! one of my favorite parts was the mirror. That was brilliant! I can't wait for the next update. patiently waiting for more, even though i'm never patient. i can't wait until he takes off his mask. i want to see what their reations will be. i think he should walk up to her at the spa when ginny is off with draco, but that's just me. anyway, keep up the good work, and update quickly!
    ~Larissa
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  • From ANON - Kris on November 25, 2005
    Please update! This is brilliant, and I live for stories written by authors like you! :D
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  • From ANON - Jana on November 24, 2005
    Suspense! More soon please!
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  • From ANON - Pearle on November 23, 2005
    I am always so happy to find your update to this story. They mesh so well together. I would imagine there will be a major confrontation coming between Ron and Hermione. With any luck she will come to her senses and leave him. Nice touch almost making us think she was pregnant (evil really, but it was a nice touch).


    Will Hermione help cerate and share in the profits for the new potion that Severus is panning to develop? Will this finally allow her to leave Ron (notice a theme here)? One more meeting - does that mean one more chapter, and then a chapter about their anniversary or do we get to see Hermione's decision in the next chapter (Yes, I know I should wait patiently and find out, but I really am curious)? Ginny and Draco - I'm assuming they end up together in America?


    I won't push with - please, please,please, update soon - I know how RL can get in the way and how difficult finding time can be. Just wanted to let you know how much I'm enjoying the story.


    Until next time, take care,


    Pearle
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