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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Catpower on November 22, 2005
    Will Sev have Autumn Wheat eyebrows and, er... other hair too?
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  • From ANON - Catpower on November 22, 2005
    Ch. 45. OMG - a whole chapter about periods! Isn't Sev a saint, being so nice about it? LOL.
    Liked the mirror trick. Sev must have incredible willpower to resist her fantasies like that.
    Autumn Wheat? Maybe Hermione had better wear her blindfold. LMAO. Sounds promisingly hilarious.
    Keep up the good work and PLEASE - let them shag soon.
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  • From goddessnape on November 22, 2005
    I absolutely love this story! I do hope you update it frequently... I just have one question though... Will Hermione go from England with Sev? I know you probably won't tell us but it would be nice to have a happy ending (i'm such a sentimental fool! *lol*)
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  • From ANON - Jo on November 22, 2005
    Brilliant as always - I cannot wait for more!
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on November 22, 2005
    I was so thrilled to come back to the site today and find not one chapter, but two that I could sit down and read through. Real life has really had me stuck. I haven't gotten to do much reading OR writing lately, and today it was really nice to be able to just sit back and enjoy two very good chapters. I am always impressed by the amount of research you do into the chapters content. The contents for the PMS potion are all very read herbs and such. It makes the story all the more enjoyable! I wait anxiously for more.
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  • From ANON - Erin on November 22, 2005
    Wonderful, You have avery interesting plot and your describtions are amazing, it is even possible to feel their mutual atraction, and sometimes the sexual tension becomes unbearable.
    So good luck. Waiting for the next part
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on November 22, 2005
    Another truly fantastic chapter my dear! I thank merlin I get to see you play snape in RPG#1 while I wait for the next chapter! You know as soon as these to get it on I am throwing the biggest party in the Slytherin common room! lol Contemplating printing this whole story out so I can re read it at my leisure lol but that just shows you how addicted to your work I am. lol



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  • From ANON - harriet on November 22, 2005
    oh dear, another fortnight without your lovely story...

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  • From ANON - Shiv5468 on November 22, 2005
    Oh yes, I remember that day well. The hottest day of the year, and several others come to that. No one could move, and everyone was very very irritable.

    Do we get a sense that Hermione is moving to a decision? ;-)

    I'm impressed by the amount of back ground reserach you've put into something as trivial as the Potions ingredients. It gives a real sense of Severus as a Potions Master as opposed to a bloke who chops up herbs from time to time.
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on November 22, 2005
    OMG Autumn Wheat colored hair? LOL! I can't wait for that little horror OMG haha too damn funny.
    Well not too much happening in this chapter, but I think that it's our deep breathe before the plunge,
    err wait I think that was from Lord of the Rings...lol anways..... It was a nice solid chapter adding to our
    ever growing anticipation and sexual tension. I just have to say though, that charm Severus put on the
    mirror was brilliant!!! Fantastic idea, you are so damn creative I just love it. I was a new way of showing us their
    sexual tension without them actually doing anything to each other. It gives us the same effect but in a new way,
    so it keeps it different and interesting, dang girl you really know what you are doing :). I am still rather anxious
    to see the anniversary dinner, and especially since you have been planning it forever, I know it must be good.
    But since I can't have that yet I shall focus myself on the next chapter, the spa trip should be fun and I will probably
    laugh my ass off at the image of Sev's wheat colored hair HAHAHA!!!!!! Wonderful as always update soon! ~Shan~
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  • From ANON - Wicked on November 22, 2005
    Again, you utterly fail to disappoint me! hehe...Loved it! I don't know if I read it too fast or if it was short..but good!!! Can't hardly wait for the anniversary night. Look forward to more as always!!!
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on November 22, 2005
    oohhh two meetings in one chapter! It was great, Severus is being so sweet. Can't wait to find out what happens at the spa.
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  • From Lunajen on November 22, 2005
    And one more thing, NEVER SCARE ME LIKE THAT AGAIN!!!
    If Hermione had been pregnant I think I might have blown a gasket!
    That was a bit scary, but brilliant. You know that right?!




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  • From Lunajen on November 22, 2005
    I know that this one is rather tame in comparison to the others, but i did love this chapter.
    It is making the story move. I know you know that, but now so does everyone else. :)
    I do hope that was a joke, "Autumn Wheat". Severus. Perish the thought.
    I loved the way you made seeing Severus her reason for the week, in this chapter.
    How he became her shelter. Oh, how lovely!!

    Got a question for you about and idea but I don't want to put it out here.....can I email you?




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  • From ANON - Snapelover11 on November 21, 2005
    It took me a few days and countless hours, to finish readng everything you have posted thus far.Let me first tell you that you are a wonderful writer. Your use of the English language is refreshing and the pictures you paint with your words are clear and concise. I enjoy the psycological appraoch to all of your characters very much. I love that smutt id not your main goal either. It is nice to read, mind, but I love a good story as well. Being married with children myself, I can completly empathize with all of the different women's dilemmas. You have captured the ssue that we women need passion, as well as stability, perfectly. I love this story and will check often for more. Please do update often, I smply can not wait for the moment that Hermione and Severus are face to face with no mre masks. Literally and figuratively.
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