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By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on November 08, 2005
    Love it as always... Ron is a total ass. His wife tries to please him and he acts like a pig. Go figure right. Well I certainly hope we get to their anniversary soon. I hope Hermione kicks his ass to the curb. :D
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  • From ANON - bxn110 on November 08, 2005
    Ohh! Ohhh! More! I adore this story! Keep going!
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  • From ANON - Hikity on November 07, 2005
    Dear Betz, you are really a TEASE...first we had to wait for ages and now we can learn that you will play along for another four Hermione-Severus-so-called-meetings until Hermione makes up her mind - which does not necessariy mean she finally falls in his arms by your standards, :) :). Dear me, how long to do you want to tantalise us, hmmm??? In honest, this chapter is wonderful, full of lovely emotions (while reading I thought: wow, I would love to fall in love again, just to experience once more these great feelings of being insecure, of stomach flutterings etc). However, we readers and admirers of your brilliant story are at the verge to become somewhat nervous....
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  • From ANON - Levans on November 06, 2005
    In awe of your writing, I gladly review. I am thouroughly enjoying your epic. I enjoy reading your wititing. Keep up the good work.
    L
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  • From ANON - Mynuet on November 04, 2005
    Heee! Poor Severus - love is really hard on the dignity.
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on November 04, 2005
    Very good chapter. I am looking forward to more. I was glad that Hermione put forth the effort to communicate with Ron. Unfortunately, I think that is the only way she will be able to realize that he isn't going to change a damn thing for her. sad, really. But too often, that is the honest truth of failed relationships.
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on November 03, 2005
    I'm so happy, another chapter! Was starting to wonder if you were ok, Betz. Now we know it's going to be at least 4 chapters before they shag (I love that british word, sounds so much more innocent than F***). I can't believe they kept their hands to themselves, I wouldn't (guess that's why I had both my kids during college!) Well I'm rambling...so thanks alot Betz!
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  • From ANON - Summer Paige on November 03, 2005
    MOOORRRRRRRREEEEEE!! :DDD


    I have love for you!
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  • From ANON - cocoachristy on November 02, 2005
    Can the sexual tension be any thicker???? Oh, I know it can but damn! Is the heat on? LOL! Great chapter. I love how he tries so desperately to talk himself out of being in love. Stubborn man does not want to admit what is so clearly the truth. And Hermione? She knows what she really wants it seems but her intregrity is making her wait. Good for her, I say. If she does sleep with Severus after the anniversary dinner than at least she will know in her heart she gave her marriage one last chance. She will know she did all she could. Kudos for another great chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jessie Deal on November 02, 2005
    I have neglected my duty to review last time. Of course this doesn't mean I didn't read your story. In fact, while I only had text-based browser for three days all I did was "refresh" the page in hopes of a new chaper.
    All the waiting was worth it (as always). Thanks for writing such an involving story
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  • From ANON - Yabo on November 02, 2005
    I love this story! Please continue!
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  • From AKSiren on November 02, 2005
    As always, another lovely chapter. *sigh* Iffin I weren't married, I'd spend lots of time fantasizing... Lol. Siren
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on November 02, 2005
    HEHE I knew something wasn't right with Ron and the whole St. Mungo's thing anyhow. THANK GOD you updated I think I was about run completely mad lol. The last few weeks have sucked big time and it was so nice to sit down tonight and read this chapter. Damn the part in the kitchen was steamy as hell once again, I know how anxious I am so I can only image how are two lovers, or should I say potential lovers are feeling. Holy crap and we still have 3 more sessions to go, I don't know how they will manage to resist. I am very excited about the the anniversary dinner, not just because we will finally see what direction Hermione decides to go but I really want to see how it goes down with her and Ron and to see how much of an effort he will make in 'romancing' her, since his admittance of not doing so over the years.Great chapter and I really liked when Severus screwed up his words not only was it funny as hell but it shows how much he really feels for her when someone as articulate as him gets all cluster fucked HAHA, I love tha phrase. So once again you have left me on the edge of my seat wanting for more, so I can only hope that you will find it in your heart to update lightning face and put me out of my mysery ;) hehe ok no more guilt trips I will be patient......I promise. ;)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on November 01, 2005
    You know you are such a tease and I love you for it!!!!!
    I am glad to see that Serverus is concerned about Hermione's reaction
    to his revelation and what theat might in part on their relationship.
    I hope that in the next chapter we see what is to come of Ron and his
    goal for the new body, I have a feeling it isn't just for the photo shoots.
    And she defintely is turned off by Ron now. His constatnt beratement has left her
    feeling unattractive and can't even feel the right way towards him anymore.
    I know that Ron is seeing someone for sure, but thinks it is in his best interests not to
    leave his wife right now because it might be bad publicity, so this is the reason for the Anniversary
    Dinner. Of course I might be watching the "Footballer's wives" a bit too much.
    I just have a feeling that this so called new attitude is just for show and nothing more, because really doesn't
    seem to try to be any nicer or undersatanding any other time except during the counseling session
    and being around his family. And on the comment that he has never said anything degrading in public, he did.
    Harry's birthday party. Didn't he put her down in front of all of their friends before she found out it was Severus
    that she has been seeing? I could be wrong about that but I am kind of certain that he did do something insulting.
    And yes, it is nice to no longer be with a man that insults and belittles you constantly.
    Now I have one that would change a bed pan for me. That's true love.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on November 01, 2005
    Arghhhhhh, I need more, more action, more togetherness, more Severus and Hermione and LESS Ron. More soon please.
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