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By : ElizabethStump
  • From ShilohDarke on October 09, 2005
    I've been watching for an update. Everyday, checking to see if the story was added to. But, I am happy to say that this latest chapter was worth the wait. I understand how real life gets in the way of always being able to update fast enough for reviewers. Been there, doing that myself... But, I won't fuss at you, cause I know you will update the story as soon as you can. I remain a loyal fan of your work!
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  • From ANON - paige on October 09, 2005
    Hi! I apologise for not reviewing for a long time. I actually stayed on the net to read instead of saving and reading later. Anyway, I'm growing frustrated with Hermione's lack of action to do anything about her marraige - update more! PLEASE!!

    Your fic does have a great deal of realism. I understand why Hermione said 'yes' when asked if she really wanted to salvage her marraige, even though she doesn't mean it. But if she's driven to physical violence, and given the way she and Ron interacted after their session, it would seem logical that she should take some action to communicate her thoughts on divorce with her husband - I'm still frustrated that she's not taking action!

    Are you going to have her have it out with Molly? It was a massive breach of trust, and any hurt daughter-in-law would confront the mother-in-law, right?

    Do you have many more chapters to go? Everything seems to be drawing to a close soon, so I'm just curious. I can't predict how this story will end. This really is a great fic. Do you have plans for a new one after this?

    I'll be looking forwrd to the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Somigliana on October 09, 2005
    Wow! Firstly, thanks for a good giggle and a lift to my mood! The passage describing Ron picking his nose had me snorting the remains of my coffee through mine! I think it highlights just how childish Ron still is - his whining didn
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  • From ANON - Siriusluv on October 09, 2005
    Yes! Another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 09, 2005
    And I really enjoy the realistic way that you portray the marriage counseling.
    I found it extrememly finny when Hermione let the counselor know that it really is
    "till death do you part." And Ron's answer to that seems a bit , how do you say,
    guilty. Like he has known all along that Herminoe didn't know the entire truth and
    possibly put his mother up to convicing Hermione to marry him? And she shouldn't have hit him
    but he did kind of deserve it. I find it interesting that Harry would notice that the only time Hermione resorts to violence is when she truly hates the individual....Draco anyone?

    Very Interesting!!


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  • From ANON - Jenn on October 09, 2005
    Yes, but the best part of all of that was when I called the house and he had his new girlfirend already living there and I erased the tape to the answering machine. Dumb ass didn't even change the code to the answer machine. And did I mention he was a musician and he had all these dates for gigs listed on his machine? MMMMUUUAAAHHHAAAWWWWWW!!! Then I called his work and pretended to be her and caried on a conversation with him for aobut fifteen minutes and finally joking said, "You are so busted.." Still he didn't get it, and I said again."No really, you are so busted." All with a laugh and lilt in the voice, and them finally I bring my voice down to a rather mean and nasty tone and say, "You are so busted you fuck."
    It was the best. You should have heard him bluster and blather on. Vindication I say! Nothing like making sure they know you caught them. Love to see guilty men squirm.

    I sure hope Ron doesn't have anything to be caught on? *evil grin* And by his attitude, I have to say that he doesn't want to be with Hermione anymore than Hermione wants to be with him. And I would find it rather ingenious if say Ron's girlfriend, and I'll say he has a girlfirend this week, becomes pregnant and has to inform Hermione of this situation during the Anniversary meal.(Yes, yes, crappy timing but Ron's is really pissing me off. Is he on Wizard Steroids?) Then it's off to have a quick, ok extremely long and drawn out, and possibly angry, or frenzied bout of sex with the sexy potions professor.

    ME,a masochist you say? I would never say that, unless you beat it out of me. Be gentle. ;)



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  • From ANON - Jana on October 09, 2005
    More! :)
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  • From ANON - angel eyes on October 09, 2005
    yay! im so glad that you updated and i love this new chapter. yours is my favorite story on this site by far. when will hermione admit her feelings for snape? when will snape admit his for her? when will he take off his mask? when will harry find out about ginny's affair? snape and hermione will meet up at the spa right? when will hermione leave ron? is ron having an affair? so many questions! :). thanks for updating!

    Angel Eyes
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  • From ANON - Keket Amunet on October 09, 2005
    I've talked to you in chat, so you know I like your story from there. I'm sorry I don't review very often.

    I enjoyed this updated chapter, and I do think you kept the marriage counselling realisitic. I'm glad you arfe taking Severus and HErmione's relationship slowly. The sexual tention building is lovely, but where I end up howling is where I want her to dump Ron. Having her punch him was fun, but that also makes her abusive on some level. She's sinking to where he is, and I think it's totally understandable, but I don't know exactly where her character is going. I know where I want her to go (out of the country with Severus (and Ginny and Draco) after announcing what a terrible husband and lover Ron has been and that he's utterly worhtless as a human being), but I'm not in charge so I'm left wondering.

    Thank you for sharing this story with the public. I look forward to your next update.

    Keket
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on October 08, 2005
    Hooray!!! an update yes! Wonderful chapter and I must say HELL YES to Hermione cracking Ron across the jaw, that was absolutely fantastic!!!! You go Mione!! He soooo had it coming lol. I really enjoyed the couciling session it was very realistic. I also liked seeing more of Severus' stubborness in coming to terms with his feelings for her, no matter how he tries to hide from it the realizations just keep coming back to hit him square in the face, the intereaction with Draco in the elevator was a very good example of that. I can't wait to see what happens when Severus and Hermione see each other again on Thursday, it should be very interesting to say the least ;) Hmm and I wonder where Ron went after St. Mungos, if he really stayed there anyway, I mean for a quidditch player thats pretty wussy to go to see a healer after being hit by your wife lol. Keep up the wonderful writing you have me anxious for the next installment as usual. :)
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  • From ANON - Jess on October 08, 2005
    Ok,Ok. It's a very well written story it has been wounderful. But can we just speed it up a bit we wanna get through the ping pongen and get to the fucking point. Thirty somethin' chapters is way to much to go through waiting for a good Hermione and Snape Fuck.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on October 08, 2005
    Woohoo, go Hermione! Just what that prat needed. Hope she broke his jaw. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - cocoachristy on October 08, 2005
    Just absolutely wonderful! I loved the counseling session! It proved that those two really are not compatable at all. And it seemed to me that Ron does not want to make his marriage work, he just does not want to get blamed for any breakup, and Hermione was just continuing because Ron did. *Sigh* I hope those two soon realize they are NOT meant to be and call it quits and get on with their lives. I also enjoed Severus and Draco's conversation. I can't wait to see if they run into each other at the spa!!!!
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  • From ANON - Neith on October 05, 2005
    I'm still around!

    Your story has me so hooked, I've taken to going away for a longer time. There's two or three chapters that way, less waiting! :D
    ...well, okay. It's just as bad to wait like that. But let's just pretend it's not that bad. XD

    I love your A.N.s after each chapter as well, with little bits of triva. ^-^!

    Ohohoh... *wriggles excitedly* Moremoremore!
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  • From ANON - D on October 01, 2005
    Excellent chapter! Very real.
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