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By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Suzett on September 18, 2005
    I truly love your story. I hope to see more soon.
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  • From ANON - Irene on September 18, 2005
    Oooo...I'm loving this story...when is there gonna be another chapter?? It's practically the only reason i even come to Adultfanfiction.net anymore. at the risk of being annoying "Pleaseee write some more soon"
    thanks,
    Irene
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  • From ANON - D on September 14, 2005
    Sorry this review is a little late! I'm a bit swamped with school and applying to college and all that -er- *fun* (cough cough) stuff lol.

    But I loved the chapter - the denial, the anger, the defeat - very realistic! Even if their next meeting isn't a showdown, I'm sure it'll still be fascinating :)

    I'm rooting for Snape!
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  • From ANON - Esmine on September 10, 2005
    I am so pleased with how this is turning out. I was at first opposed to reading long fictions. My short attention span starts to kick in after awhile. But this is absolutely amazing. I'm anxious to see the confrontation between Hermoine and Snape. My imagination leads me to think that it will be highly dramatic and very passionate to the point where they both just give into the deepest feelings. I'm so glad there was another linking site for the story because I found out Ashwinder hasn't posted it just yet.

    Thank you so much for you work, it's been a wonderful read!
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  • From ANON - pickles on September 09, 2005
    hello Betz dear,

    Glad to see an update. great chapter on the workings of hermione's mind. glad she hasn't given up on the professor yet. is she meeting ginny? no can't be ron's with her and harry. kingsley? maybe. or might it be master draco? waiting for more. P
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  • From ANON - Happilyjaded on September 08, 2005
    Yeah, I called 911. They said call back when you are really dying, you big fraud, that will be three hundred dollars. Not so cool, but your story - very cool. I will hold off my hypochondria for a few more chapters. I'm sure they will be well worth the wait. Always a pleasure, ~ElizabethJade
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  • From ANON - Hikity on September 08, 2005
    Betz, it's such a wonderful story and Hermione will deeply fall in love with Sev and vice versa. Now, honestly, I can't wait to "see" them kissing and much more. Go on, don't let us wait till the next millenium, :) :)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on September 07, 2005
    Please ignore the impish and immature review of JENN(about ten reviews above)demanding for new updates.
    She is my evil twin Jess, who was terribly deprived of chocolate for about five minutes.
    Please Betas, take your time and do the wonderful and fantastic job that you always do.
    I too enjoy and love this story and want to thank Betz for the timely
    updates. Thank You.
    Sincerly, the real Jenn.
    No. Jess... I am typinggg owwww, HEY I WANT MORE!!

    See, that is what I am talking about, soooo sorry.....
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on September 07, 2005
    I very much liked this update. So now she knows. Now she can get over the initial shock. But I have a sneaking suspicion that she won't cheat on Ron until she discovers he is already cheating, himself. She still has feelings for him, even if they aren't love. Part of me hates that Ron would turn into that kind of a person, but being in an unhappy marriage makes people do things they would never think themselves capable of... Excellent Chapter. Update as soon as you can. Thanks!
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  • From ANON - Pearle on September 07, 2005
    Betz,

    I usually read and review at Ashwinder, but happily I found the new chapter posted here first, instead. Excellent, as usual. I had held off reading (health, issues in RL, etc) when you first posted. I love all your work and knew once I started, I would have to keep reading. This method has the added bonus that there is more than one chapter to read at a time.

    I printed (a few doc apts and time to actually read something for pleasure and not work) up to chapter 34 (all you had posted at the time) and started reading. Continuously. I was not disappointed other than there is no more to read (you knew that was coming - grin). I have thoroughly enjoyed the story and characters you've created. You version of Snape is unbelievably sexy! I love it/him.

    They don't meet up again until chapter 41?!? I would cheerfully wring your neck but then I wouldn't get to read the next chapter or 41 would I? I assume Hermione is currently waiting for Lavender, partially to warn her and then to lambaste her for setting her up.

    Have pity, since I can't seem to coerce JKR into letting me see the last book's notes, let alone that much touted last chapter that's written, tell me they argue and then get together, in Chapter 41 or does Hermione get mad, stalk off, only to return again at a later time - prodded on by her mind, Ron's attitude, and...Ginny, who I'm sure will stick her two knuts in. My email is listed, all responses, pseudo-owls, and alike will find me.

    Pearle
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  • From ANON - Snapesmistress on September 07, 2005
    another fabulous chapter! i love the torment that hermione is in right now. not that it's a good thing or anything, but the way you describe it is awesome. she has to go back but the question is will she let on that she knows? hmm can't wait to see! i can't imagine who she would be inviting to the three brooksticks though. seems kinda odd. ok, you tease, lavendar has to be shagging kingsley! grrr, i'm rooting for the man! woohoo! anywho good job, can't wait to see the next!
    Much Love!
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  • From ANON - Jana on September 07, 2005
    I was so happy to see that the day after my review last night there was a new chapter. I know you're going as fast as you can, but it's still frustrating. Kind of like waiting for the next HP book. You know the story is there, and that somewhere, in someones mind, it's done, and only they know the ending and you just really want to know. That's why spoilers are so tempting before you read the book.

    Anyway, I'm very happy to hear the next chapter is in the beta que. You know if you need an extra beta, I'm not very good, but I'd love to get the chapters ahead of time. Hehe just kidding.
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  • From ANON - Sue Bridehead on September 07, 2005
    Wow, this is really good! Very intriguing. I loved Hermione's mental arguments. And hurrah for Bill Weasley - sexy *and* sensitive (Fleur is sooo lucky)! Great chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on September 07, 2005
    Another fantastic chapter my dear as always! I really can't wait to see the next meeting between Hermione and Snape. I know its horrible but I really hope Ron is having an affair so Hermione doesn't have to break his heart or feel guilty about falling for Snape. Maybe they could simply agree they don't work well together and go their seperate ways? lol I know which ever directon you go in, it will still be a fantastic story and it keeps getting better and better and better. Can't wait for the next update....but then when can I ever. lol
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  • From ANON - siriusluv on September 07, 2005
    I love it! It always makes my day when you update.
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