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By : ElizabethStump

From ANON - Mynuet on September 07, 2005
You know, I don't think this gets said enough: Thank you for your steady updates. Tough as it is to wait for the next chapter of a beloved story, it's truly a wonderful thing to have the wait be only a week or two, rather than months. You do an excellent job of writing both well and quickly, and that's a truly wonderful thing. Thank you. :)
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From ANON - Jenn on September 07, 2005
And I have a feeling that she has contacted Ginny to meet her, that or Lavender. Either way, one of them would be able to tip off Serverus and Draco to be prepared for the drop in visits. And I can't wait till she confronts Ginny and starts screming at her about "How could you do this to me? Lie to me about who I was seeing? I trusted you? Why?" And basicially have Ginny shut her down with, "Why are you so upset? IS it because you are in love with him?" HEHEHEHE!!! I am going to love that scene, because once Ginny figures out she loves him, then she will try everything in her power to get the two of them out of there. At least that is what I hope for..... :D

Post soon please.
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From ANON - Jenn on September 07, 2005
Ok, listen up Betas....READ AS FAST AS YOU CAN!!!!!!!!!!! CORRECT THAT BUGGE AND PUT IT UP!!!!! I have to say, that was absolutely evil, you know that! Evil I say! Leaving me hanging like that! AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!
I am actually squealing with delight and anticipation and frustration!!!!! This was an excellent chapter. So, I might be on to something with Ron and his Mummy. Maybe it is Kingsley and Ron having a go at it, or even Blaise and Ron...we won't know for a while I take though. And she should RUN with Serverus!!!!!!!!! Please make sure she and Ron are practicing safe sex!!!!! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! And out of curiousity, what if she gets pregnant with someone elses baby while married to Ron? Will it kill her or can she divorce Ron without any consequences if she remarries the real father*coughtSeveruscough*?

Please update soon!!!!
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From ANON - Jen on September 07, 2005
Fabulous!
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From ANON - Catpower on September 07, 2005
Poor Hermione - I know how she feels! Nice to know that it is normal to argue with yourself like that.

No more Snape till chapter 41! Aargh! I can't wait for the confrontation scene. At least, I hope that's what it will be.

Maybe Lav's shagging the Weasley twins - lucky ol' Lav, I say.

One line I wasn't sure about was: "It seemed like some bad plot out of a cheesy romance novel Molly might have read while hanging laundry at the Burrow..." Your fic doesn't deserve this harsh criticism - and some of us loyal readers like to think we have good taste in reading material!

I am enjoying this fic very much - please keep up the good work, Betz.
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From ANON - Epona on September 07, 2005
There is a lovely five letter word that could be applied to you for torturing your poor readers. You are certainly dragging out the chapters before Hermione meets with Snape. Lord, I am so desperate for the confrontation between Snape and Hermione I am jumping up and down in my seat! Because I know it is going to be amazing as you have such high standards for your story so it can be nothing else but amazing. I am just praying that you update before I move to Scotland. 10/10 for frustrating me even more than the boxes piled high full of belongings in my house, a feat I believed impossible.

Epona
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From ANON - Sorceress Black on September 07, 2005
Right on, excellent thought-filled chapter. I liked how her dreams were putting severus in place of Calleo, kind of letting her see how she would feel knowing it was him doing those things and meshing the two together. I liked how she was constantly putting little pieces of the puzzle together left and right is nice to see that she is finally figuring things out. I wonder who she wrote to Lavender? or Ginny probably. Whichever and I am thinking maybe its Ginny, it should be a good little meeting. With all this anger she has got she is bound to start lashing out at one of them. Man I am just itching to find out!! I cant wait to see what she does on Monday as well has her counciling session, damn I just love drama, you'd think I would be satisfied with my own but it seems I have to add fictional drama to the already mountainous pile of rubbish I have here lol. You know everytime I read a chapter I just love it more and more if that's even possible. I mean the chapters are nice and long, you update regularly, your writing is some of the BEST I have ever seen I am just astounded and it has simply been such a joy to read so far. So with all that ass kissing done I will now ask you to update immediately HAHAHA. I am crazy I know, just a wee bit tired here lol. No but seriously I mean every compliment that I give, you are the BEST! Oh and I just wanted to mention that I really loved Bills comments to Hermione, it was nice to see that someone has finally been observant and not ignoring their obvious issues and pretending everything is just peachy. That was a nice touch and it reinforces the fact even though the couple is owning up to the fact that they have issues and going to couciling it may just be that its getting worse instead of better and now that is starting to show to everyone else more that normal. And I can definitly understand her anxiety about the having kids thing, I swear if I hear one more person ask about when I am going to have kids or when they are going to get a grandchild I am going to become a raving lunatic lol. Ohhh how I do miss Calleo though, damn, see what you have done you have created a character that is so damn good that it makes us totally forget about severus, and he's the SAME PERSON! I am going nuts I swear lol. ohhh girl you.are.good! lol I need to get to bed.
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From ANON - Jana on September 07, 2005
Oops I hope that last review didn't send, I accidently hit enter while typing my email.

Anyway, you simply must post the next chapter ASAP, and it had better not be a blah blah blah Kingsley Malfoy boring yawn thing. I want Hermione and Snape. I trust your writing skills, but I want to know what happens! Blah. It's so frustrating waiting for the next chapter.

From now on, I'm only reading stories that are finished. Works in progress are so frustrating. hehe
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From ANON - Happilyjaded on September 05, 2005
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love you and this story, but I am dying here. Poor Hermione. Alas, I cannot review properly. Please allow one more:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I think I'll be fine, so long as you don't leave me hanging too long. Thanks Madam Stump, you never fail to disappoint.
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From ANON - youniquekarma on September 03, 2005
please right more... this is one of my favorite fanfics to read i am lost without more chapters your killing me here... please right more
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From ANON - Kim on September 03, 2005
Oh, I am so addicted to this story. I love everything about it... the tension, the anticipation. It's delicious. Thank you for writing; I appreciate all of the thought and detail you've put into this story, and I adore how you include interesting information in the A/N section. I have high standards when it comes to reading fan fiction, and I must say that you've raised the bar. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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From ANON - Juliet on September 02, 2005
Wahoo!!!! Kill Molly Weasley, the interferring old cow. Burn her, BURN HER I SAY!! Poor, poor Hermione. Poor Snape? Gosh, so excited cannot write coherent sentences. And now to the old cry - UPDATE SOON!!!
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From ANON - D on September 02, 2005
You're right, of course, Betz: Hermione probably won't just bonk him next time. If Snape were Lucy, he'd have some 'splaining to do to Ricky (aka Hermione? Ok, so 'I love Lucy' parallels don't work here).

Anyway, I like that she has a coniption when it finally dawns on her. I just hope she's able to look past *her* old predjudices just like Snape did when he first learned he'd have to deal with her as a 'client'.

I can't wait for the showdown! (which nicely parallels to your little cowboy theme party... ahh, foreshadowing! intentional or coincidental, it's fab).
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From ANON - Jenn on September 02, 2005
YESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYESYES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!She knows!!!!!! Well, with all that occured that evening, I would have had a meltdown as well!!! And though she does seem to mind that it is Severus, she still finds herself attracted to him, right? And having her think that there is more to this than just her seeing him is quite astute, even for not noticing who he was. ;) She knows he wants something other than her.I do think that her find out like she did was a bit of a shock as well and she might cool off, or will she pick up steam and get even angier? You do like to put Hermione through the paces though don't you.? Poor girl. As for Ron, you are making him very ambiguous, aren't you?
Can't tell if he is cheating or not, but he deffinately is not happy with the marriage. It is almost like he he only did it to make his mother happy and what was expected of him. Maybe, he is gay and is afraid to tell his family. I don't know I can't tell anymore with him. I do know for sure, the two of them are miserable. And Molly should have been in Slytherin. What a cuniving B****! To manipulate Ginny and Hermione to suit her own needs is awful!!!!!! She setup Ginny and Harry into this farce of a marriage. And not telling Hermione of the consequences is just horrid. She knew Hermione didn't know a thing about the vows and the consequences of divorce!!! OOHHHH! that really angreed me!! Get Hermione out and get her out now!!!!!!! If Hermione doesn't see (after this last bit of information), that Molly will interfere and run her life, for the entire length of her marriage, then she is dumber than a box of rocks. RUN!!! HERMIONE! RUN!!! RUN WHILE YOU CAN!!!

This was a great chapter by the way!!!! Loved it.
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From ANON - mugglegirl0908 on September 02, 2005
Hey, Betz! I finally discovered the little "secret" of how to read your chapters a few days early. :-D This was a truly amazing chapter. Just... wow. I REALLY can't wait til "Calleo" and Hermione have a confrontation. I hope the next chapter is forthcoming soon! Thanks for a wonderfrul chapter! :-D
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