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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Jenn on August 11, 2005
    Bravisima!!! Ok, I am so loving the in depth feelings you have for these characters. Much better than most novels.
    One question....It's Blaise isn't it?
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  • From ANON - Anijade on August 11, 2005
    Well that is very powerful stuff. The mental anguish is tangible and you just want to see these marriages buried and done rather than see the participants continue this half life. Well done
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on August 11, 2005
    I've been checking several times a day for an update on this fic! I just can't seem to get enough. And I'm so glad to see what was in Lavender's memories. Gruesome, but neccesary. I hope the next chapter is in the works. Back to waiting, lol.
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  • From ANON - Hikity on August 07, 2005
    Hi there, Dear,
    tks for your nice reply and YES, Hermione wants to know it's Severus - quite soon, I hope. She has already been asking about him. May be she meets him somewhere, then eventually starts mixing up the "two" in her mind...Ron and her do not fit together -it's just not possible. I wonder sometimes why people marry in the first place just to have a divorce later, but - sad as it is - it's "normal". And adultery, well, I have a (female) friend who has always had 2 lovers and her husband at the same time ...and I know only few people who are (hopefully) faithful.
    You mentioned chapter 34 and 35, but I can't find it?
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  • From ANON - Hanna Delacour on July 29, 2005
    I know I don't review enough. But I thought I should tell you that I love the footnotes at the end of each chapter. You have such an original fic here and it always makes me feel as though I'm living it. The details are so rich that the world you create just envelopes the reader. I cannot lavish enough praise upon it. I check daily to see if you have updated. Always a moment of joy in my otherwise dreary life. Thank you...
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  • From ANON - Sorceress Black on July 28, 2005
    Omg why does this not have a 1,000 reviews? This is possibly one of the BEST fic I have ever read! The plot is chaulked full of delicious material. It is so well planned out with every bit of detail covered, and so beautifully written. I am just amazed at your talent. As I am sure many have commented this has so much realism I feel like I am reading a biography or an Auto Biography for that matter. I am dealing with all this crap (well except for the Gigolo part)as we speak so I am finding TONS similarities to Hermiones character right now. And your Severus is absolutely edible. I have only gotten to chapter erm 26? I believe and I started hmm two days ago some I will probably finish the rest tonight but I just had to stop and review and tell you what a fabulous job you have done with this fic, it has been very touching and has appealed to me in so many ways. I feel like I do not have the right words to compliment you so I will just say thanks for the wonderful read and I am seriously jumping to go and read more. ;)
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  • From ANON - Snapesmistress on July 27, 2005
    Ok yeah, evil cliffie! but still a great chapter. were you as disppointed in HBP as i was? i don't know, i guess i expected more from snape. but we shall see i suppose. anyway, i can't wait to read 34 and see what happened to lavendar (AND WHO IS SHE SHAGGING?!?!?!?!) ok i'm better. can't wait to see how hermione takes it when severus is revealed. and she has to go with them, even though the opportunities snape's been arranging are tempting. he brought up a good point, he could assist her in the apprenticeship. anyways, can't wait to see the next chapters. keep it up!
    Much Love!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on July 27, 2005
    Sorry for the spoiler...I just didn't think about it. I forgot that most people don't plow through a book like Ron does dinner. Please forgive me if this has gotten to anyone that hasn't finished reading.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on July 27, 2005
    Yes, Let's all ignore the new canon about Snape!!! I still have hope he is still faithfull, don't ask me how, but let's say DD kew and begged him to save Draco the only way he knew how.

    Ok, onto the story!! MORE!!!! EVIL CLIFFIE INDEED!!!!!!! Frist I get Snape kills DD and then this....not right I tell you!!! I am so curious as to find out how did Lavender findout about Snape and all, did a little red head whisper it during sex, at Hogwarts?
    Friend indeed! Who is this supposed friend anyway? LAvender, a froupie, a players wife, Trevor? I mean we never did rule out if Ron is gay or not? IS HE? Could it be a player? Now that would be interesting!!!!!!!
    This is getting more intriguing by the chapter!!! And good luck on the contest!!! I have a feeling you are going to win!
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  • From ANON - D on July 26, 2005
    Ooh second chapter without Hermione's visit to Calleo. To quote Willy Wonka - "The suspense is terrible - I hope it lasts!" (Because this anticipation will make the moment so much sweeter, I believe).

    Well, I'm still hooked and checking back much too frequently haha. I love the glimpses into Severus's mind in this chapter: his growing conflict over Hermione and his admittances to himself about how he feels about her. Can't wait to see what comes next, AU or not!

    (Truth be told I haven't read HBP yet... I bought it the day it came out, then promptly left on vacation the next day, and figured it wasn't the most practical thing to pack, what with me already bringing some summer work I've got for school; I was envious of the other people I saw who did have it handy, though. I've only just returned, and will start it pronto - that is, after I finish skimming through Phoenix, which I desperately need recapped for the details haha. But anyway, I was grateful for you not spilling any beans in your introductory author's note - but I must say, my curiousity is getting even more peaked than before, if possible ^_^).

    Cheers!
    -Dani
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  • From ANON - GinnyW on July 26, 2005
    Ahhh, I loved the chapter. It's really nice to see what Ginny is thinking. Glad that she's seeing Ron for the PRAT that he is in this story. Also nice to see Severus trying to analyze his feelings and making sure that Hermione gets a cut of the profits---very nice indeed. ;-) Please get us more ASAP! ~Gin
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  • From ANON - Mo on July 26, 2005
    OH HOLY CRAP!

    yup thats all I have to say....I NEVER IN A MILLION YEARS WOULD HAVE PICTURED SNAPE AS A GIGOLO! NIIIIICE!

    I like, too, that your sticking with the original plot after HBP! KUDOS!

    Hope to read mo soon!

    Maureen

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  • From ANON - Elayne on July 26, 2005
    When I saw you posted a new chapter, I almost broke into song. The excitement is overwhelming. Hope you win an award!
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on July 26, 2005
    Once again I bow down and worship your awesome intellect and fantastic creativity!! Never want this story to end and I can't wait to read more of Severus and Hermione together! If you don
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  • From ANON - Catpower on July 26, 2005
    LMAO - my salad was fine, except that I got the respective uses of the cucumber and the courgette the wrong way round and never got Severus to finish the job off. TeeHee.

    This was a really interesting chapter - plenty of Severus's clever schemes for sorting out Hermione, his boss and his potion-master friend. Sevvie seems to be becoming very mellow - not much snark or glaring going on. I guess that's what 8 orgasms does for a man, LOL. No wonder Ginny dared to kiss him on the forehead (bet she wouldn't have done that at Hogwarts).

    The muggle savant idea is interesting - are there any other fields, besides music, where they are used by your wizarding world and do the savants fully understand the role/job they are doing? I will wait and see.

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