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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Elayne on July 12, 2005
    Yay! A new chapter! Good Lord, if Ron was my husband, I'd be telling him to shut up during sex, too. It sucks you're taking a break for HBP, but I guess I'll be so busy reading it that I wan't even notice. I'm telling you, this fiction you have here is becoming an addiction! I think I'll start a support group called "Betz's Fiction-addiction-anon. Hee Hee. You're awesome. Take a bow. *Throws roses and stands up, clapping madly*
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  • From ANON - EsmaKeltin on July 12, 2005
    Such wonderfully prompt updates!
    It's quite sad to see Ron and Hermione's marriage unraveling, even though separating is most likely the best for both involved. Of course, I'm absolutely miffed at Ron for being so insensitive to Hermione's sexual needs. ;)
    This is a fantastic story. I look forward to your next chapter, and hope that HBP doesn't change the... shall we say... quantity of canon characters. *gulp*
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  • From ANON - GinnyW on July 12, 2005
    Cripes! Now, I just don't see Ron and Hermione recovering enough for them to even make it to their anniversary after that display. I can totally see Hermione being too tired to even function in the morning. Poor girl! What's the lightening from? Anything important? I do that, I clean frantically when I fight w/ hubby----not typically over pent-up sexual frustration. ;-) This may seem out of the blue, but is there going to be a new Dark Lord rising to power in your story? Just curious at the references. The safety leave the country box is smart. My mother has always told me to have a secret back account, credit card, copy of ID, & passport somewhere secure in case I ever needed it. Her comment 'better safe than sorry'. Good chapter, the last bit was rather intense. I look forward to more, as always! ~Ginny
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  • From ANON - I_Ravenhurst on July 12, 2005
    Oh dear lord!. I rarely allow myself to get drawn into a fanfic this deeply, but I found it yesterday, and kept coming back to read more and more and just finished this morning!
    I ADORE it!

    Lovely work, imaginative and still able to keep the cannon core in place . And yes, I have to admit, Dancing Snape *slow yummy grin* is a natural delight for myself also. Frankly, a man with his grace HAS to be able to dance.
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  • From ANON - iluvron on July 11, 2005
    i have enjoyed this story for the most part, but i think the pace needs to be picked up a bit. i like the mysteries that are going on, and it is entertaining. but with 31 chapters so far, i feel more should have happened by now as far as plot resolution. i rarely read fics that are longer than 20 or 25 chapters (sorry, short attention span-?), but this one has an intriguing storyline, so i'm going to stick with it. i just wish it was moving a little faster. thanks for listening.
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  • From ANON - EsmaKeltin on July 11, 2005
    Ahhhh Betz, you taunt me with your sexy updates! ;) I know you're just building everyone up for what to come. And I am sure it will be ever so grand!
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  • From Neith on July 11, 2005
    Oooh. I love this story very much. Sometimes, they do seem a bit OOC... but then, I know that this situation is very different compared to the books. :D Past experiances can definatly have a huge impact on someone.

    So good job!
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  • From ANON - Catpower on July 11, 2005
    hi Betz,

    Still loving this story. The dance lesson was very romantic - SS/HG must both have extraordinary self-control to avoid shagging after falling on the floor like that.

    Miss Anne and the veg! Sev on Viagra! What can I say? I'm off to find a cucumber and a courgette :)
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  • From ANON - StormAz (not signed in) on July 11, 2005
    This has got to be one of the more bizarre stories I've read ... but it managed to keep me glued to the computer all night till I caught up with you!

    I will defenitely be back to see where you take this one! ^_~
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  • From ANON - d on July 10, 2005
    this story is so addicting! and i'm quite discriminating with fanfiction, but i love how your characters are so strongly developed, the careful planning and unfolding of a complex, multi-layer plot, your style, everything! this is a wonderful fanfiction, thank you for writing this, i can't wait to reach the end (although i'll be very sad it's over!) but then there will be future fanfics to look forward to, i hope.

    thank you!
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  • From ANON - jeslyn_nighthawk on July 10, 2005
    I've been reading this one for a while, and I just wanted to let you know how thoroughly I am enjoying it. I can never wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Wolvertique on July 10, 2005
    I always smile when I see there's more of this story. I hope there's going to be a break between Hermione and Ron soon. Both of them really need to find other, better partners.

    I also hope you aren't easily offended, but I believe it's haricot, not hartcot. French lessons. :)

    You might be amazed at how many people here are offended when someone points out a mistake or typo...I've always thought that it was helpful to point them out, helping the author improve her/his story. But you seem fairly understanding and slow to take offense, so I decided to risk it.
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  • From ANON - anon on July 10, 2005
    I really enjoy the premise of this story and think that it's really well written but can we have more plot movement please?
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  • From ANON - GinnyW on July 10, 2005
    Now, why didn't the notion of this party for Harry from Ginny as a 'last goodbye' ever hit me! I must be so incredibly dense! So---what's up next---Hermione's parents? I am curious why Hermione has been estranged from them. Has it solely been because of the demanding Weasley family, or is it more? *sigh* I want Thursday night to get here!!! You've added Mondays, but that's just more dancing---I want to see Hermione blindfolded for her 'date'! LOL! Okay, waiting for more---- Ginny
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  • From ANON - Vampire_Exotica on July 09, 2005
    Can't wait for another update!!!!! I love this story!!! It's fantastic!
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