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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - kishkitten36 on June 27, 2005
    Hi there. I have been reading this fic from the very beginning and I love it. I always look forward to the next chapter the second I finish the last.
    Well, I've been suspicious since very early one, probably within the first few chapters that Ron is cheating on Hermione. In fact, in one argument, he said something (of which I cannot remeber) that was practically like an admission to infidelity. Since he left after that fight, I thought he was staying with a woman, not a teammate. Rosmerta knew something in this one; either she knows that what Ron told Hermione about the pub crawl was a lie or she saw him with someone during the pub crawl. I have suspected all along it's Lavender. And that explains why Lav is so intent on "helping" Hermione find another man to fulfill her needs. If all goes well, she'll get the guy she wants and be rid Severus in one go. She's almost done with her use of him and is starting to become a liability I suppose.
    So I'm guessing Severus will find out, tell Hermione at the same time he reveals himself, begs her to help him and run away with him to start a new life somewhere where she won't be discriminated against. The only thing that will throw the plan is Hermione's love and devotion to her best friend, who will be an innocent victim and the Weasley's will blame her despite the fact that the two people who caused all the problems and drama in the first place are their two youngest kids. Poor Hermione. Maybe she can convince Harry to what? help them so that his wife can runaway from his schoolboy arch enemy? Not likely. And can you blame him? Poor Harry. Unless of course, he's shagging someone on the side too which means it's all good, LOL.
    I love this story! Keep up the updates A.S.A.P.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 27, 2005
    I see that everyone is smarter than the average bear. So, what I want to know was Ron on a date with the Lavendar earlier at the Leaky Cauldron or was that rowdy crowd at the bar his quidditch team there without him? ANd where s Ron getting all the money, because he obviously isn't playing frist string keeper for the Cannons. is he a test subject for a comestic company? And did LAvendar set this up all in advance at the first meeting with Hermione? Just curious?
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  • From ANON - Maela on June 26, 2005
    Oh. My. God! Do not even tell me that Lavender and Ron were going at it?! Rosmerta definitely knew something...like maybe that Ron had been there earlier that evening. I so want him to get caught, so Hermione can move on. Thanks for the lovely long chapter! Update soon.
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  • From ANON - cold_1 on June 26, 2005
    ^_^ mmhhh.... I hope Ron is cheating on Hermione... That way she will have an excuse to leave him.
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  • From ANON - Mynuet on June 26, 2005
    Er, Lavender, not Pansy. Sorry for the mis-type. *^^*
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  • From ANON - Mynuet on June 26, 2005
    Pansy's totally fucking Ron, isn't she?
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  • From ANON - lemonade on June 26, 2005
    Okay, it's got to be Ron and Lavendar. Makes sense as to why she approached Hermione to begin with. Nice chapter.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 26, 2005
    So, you've tipped your hand....Thank You! I guess I know who Lavender is sleepig with....nice way to tie the whole story together. I promise no telling to the reivewers....;) But , thankyou, thank you, thank you.
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  • From ANON - Jo on June 24, 2005
    Want more NOW! (lots of pretty pleases too ;) )
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  • From ANON - ShilohDarke on June 23, 2005
    Oh!!! PLEASE update soon! I am so ready for another chapter. I love this story. it is awesome! I have neglected working on my own for the last two days, cause I was too busy hanging on every word of yours!!!!
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  • From ANON - Snapesmistress on June 22, 2005
    finally! just kidding. actually i was wondering about this fic just yesterday and was hoping nothing had happened to you. but it's your beta and that just as bad. i hope everything turns out ok. as for the chapter, i love the whole hermione and severus getting off together, thinking baout each other and not even realizing it! just makes it all the more sexy. so a belly dancing ginny? i can honestly say that it not what i was expecting when ginny said "can i tell you a secret?" kinda funny though if you think about it. anywho, good chapter! can't wait to see the next!
    much love!
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  • From ANON - lemonade on June 21, 2005
    This chapter makes me wonder about Ron... and Harry to be frank. I have some guesses, have to wait and see if they are right. Can't wait to see when Hermione and Calleo decide to be honest to each other. Hermione is still on that judging thing, though.

    Thanks, always enjoy updates to this story!
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  • From ANON - Strawberryblush on June 21, 2005
    Am enjoying this very much! Also entertaining suspitions that that 'friend' Ron stayed with during their Arguement means he's cheating on Hermione, when she's been so valiently trying not to - looking forward to the bitch-slapping from both girls if that's the case.

    On a side note, re: the counsellor's address, while it is pronounced 'Redding' it's actually spelt 'Reading' - this is of course assuming you're referring to the city about an hour north of London, and not a suburb I've never heard of.

    looking forward to more!

    ~S.b.
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  • From ANON - azulkan2 on June 21, 2005
    Great story, great chapter. More soon please.
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  • From ANON - Josh Cohen on June 21, 2005
    Y'know, I just know that this story is going to end well. The tension is being drawn out beautifully in each chapter.

    However, wouldn't it be amusing if there was a "blooper reel" when it was all over, where we saw an alternate version of Snape & Hermione's eventual sex scene, where everything went wrong?

    Okay, maybe I'm just a morbidly-curious wacko. I don't know. But _I_ think it would be amusing.

    Keep up the excellent work. If you need another (or a fill-in) grammatical/usage beta, drop me a line.
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