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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Anon on June 21, 2005
    I love the way this fic doesn't seem to lose the plot no matter how long it gets. The characters are elaborate and their interactions natural. Only the title bothers me as I would hate to see it all end in misery. These people deserve some happiness! But it is your story, and so far it has been excellent, so if you are really set on an unhappy ending I guess I shouldn't complain since a well written unhappy ending is always better than a crappy happy ending. I trust you to know what is best.

    The bit about 'gingerbread detailed Finnish saunas' in this chapter was somewhat disturbing since I have yet to see a sauna in gingerbread detail despite all of the nineteen years that I have lived in Finland. Huge communal saunas, chimneyless saunas, sauna tents, small log saunas by the lake and even saunas built in old cars, but no gingerbread details. Well, I'm sure there are those as well and some people even like them, but most would consider them tacky, tasteless and unfitting to the Finnish culture. Mostly everyone goes for the simple style nearing ascetic. Althoug I have to admit that Finnish saunas outside of Finland tend to have most curious things dubbed as 'Finnish' (I hear somewhere they even had wallpapers and sofas (*shudders*)), so in a British wizarding spa your description might not be so far off the mark :D And anyway, I'm sure every other country in the wold has the same problems as well, and if the gingerbread style does it in the wizarding world, then why not? Just wanted to let you know, even if you are not interested in the least. :)

    But yes, a great story, so I hope you'll update soon!
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 21, 2005
    That was excellent as usual. I just wished there was more, greedy little bugger aren't I ;)
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  • From ANON - ChevyBavy on June 21, 2005
    Another great chapter. I have to admit, I was hoping for a bit of smut but, it was pleasant to see a bit more of Hermione and Ginny's lives. As always, very well written :o)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 14, 2005
    So that must have been one of the Weasley Wheezes Fake Wizarding Wand! Let's try again....

    ACCIO NEW CHAPTER!! ACCIO NEW CHAPTER!! *bang*

    Crud, another haddock!!!
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  • From ANON - Jan on June 11, 2005
    please update soon
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 07, 2005
    ACCIO NEW CHAPTER! ACCIO NEW CHAPTER! :)
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  • From ANON - Jenn on June 01, 2005
    I am getting very anxious waiting for the next installment. Knee bouncing , fingers tapping.I want someo more soon. PLEASE. I hope there will be more of the Ron side story, I really want to know where Ron stayed? If he isn't seeing someone on the side, then he would have told Harry infront of Hermione and Ginny, so that leaves me wondering? *Sigh*
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  • From ANON - the_lorelei on May 26, 2005
    I love your story and respect the research you put into it... your story makes me get on AFF every day, hoping for an update... can't wait to read more, keep up the unbelievably fantastic work!
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  • From ANON - Snapesmistress on May 23, 2005
    Wow, awesome dinner. made me hungry! great job with this though. GOOD GOD I wanted them to kiss though!! that was just evil, you know that right?! now, please let ron turn into a bigger prat so that we can all hate him more and she can't feel bad for leaving him to run off with severus, drco, and ginny. oh yeah, and definately no kids anytime soon. neither ginny nor hermione can be saddled w/those guys. now, i love harry and all that, but come on, we can only take so much of "poor harry". time for the kid to grow some balls. i believe if he would just try w/ginny, he might have a chance. i wouldn't expect anything other from ron though. oh i do hope he's not home when she gets home tonight. that would stink. from you story, i can see ron as a semi-violent man. anyways, great job and can't wait to gee another!
    much love!
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  • From ANON - Starchild on May 23, 2005
    Wow, that chapter was so thick with tension I was holding my breath practically through it all. I love the way you keep the pace flowing so the characters progress but doesn't feel rushed and always leaves me wanting more! I had such a silly grin on my face while reading that chapter, it warmed my heart. *sigh* :) I hope Hermione returns sooner than next Thursday, I need more interaction between the two of them!
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  • From ANON - RachelW on May 20, 2005
    I am FINALLY getting a chance to catch up on this! Whew! Three chapters at once! The peices are falling together, slowly but steadily...but still, we don't know where Ron was at. And, now I'm wondering how quickly Hermione is going to put the peices together regarding Snape? The sexual tension between them is so strong I can feel it...oh, yes, those times...you can look but not touch, talk and smile...but go no further...and there's always that bit of doubt if it's just you or if it's mutual, but you'll never know...ohhhh. *sigh* Okay, time to stop whinging about unrequited lust now...LOL. Last three chapters were wonderful, as all the story has been.
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  • From ANON - TheDuke\'sLover on May 19, 2005
    This story is amoazing. It is well written, original, and I have become so captured in it, wondering, "will Snape be caught?" "When will Hermione find out who Calleo is?" "When will Hermione leave Ron?" I like the way you made Snape the weaker one in many ways with the probation law. Hermione is often portrayed as the submissive one. I like the even ground.
    Please write another chapter soon. I can hardly wait!
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  • From ANON - bellasol67 on May 18, 2005
    Amazing story! I love the banter between Draco and Snape...as anxious as I am for Snape to reveal himself to Hermione, I am scared that she will freak out and run away and we will all be a square one. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - Mynuet on May 18, 2005
    *swoon* The restrained tension between the two of them is just marvelous. I get the impression, with as many hints as he's dropped, that somewhere in the back of her mind, she already knows who he is; she just doesn't want to /know/ because then everything will change and she needs this reprieve from her life so badly.
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  • From ANON - Catpower on May 17, 2005
    Aaaagh! I can't believe Hermione and Severus still haven't even kissed! Let alone had sex. And we're at Chapter 25 already! Well done for keeping me interested for so long in spite of it. I bet HG is thinking, "and I wore my good underwear for nothing!" Thanks for the note re salad.
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