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Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever After

By : ElizabethStump
  • From ANON - Jenn on May 16, 2005
    Ok, this has sated me for all of oh...fifteen minutes...MORE!! Am I becoming peptulant? I apologize, but your story is one of my favorite to date. This was an excellent chapter. I truly loved the Dunderhead reference, superb. I atill want to see Ron be the cheater first and not Hermione, that she leaves him then turns to Calleo, but it's your baby I am mearly the eager fan.
    Bravisimo!!
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  • From ANON - June W on May 16, 2005
    Ch 25 - Oh, I so hope that Ron bombs with the counseling! Get rid of the weasel!! Hey, Severus didn't send her home with leftover cassoulet.... that would've helped her think of him more often. I like the way he is slowly leaving her clues about his real identity; very Slytherin of him. When will you tell us more about the first Mrs Snape? BTW, is there room in the oubliette for Calpurnia Fudge? And Trevor? You're very good at creating characters that incite us to hiss and boo! Thanks for the new chapter.
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  • From ANON - GinnyW on May 16, 2005
    Of course I loved it! And just as I told you, I'm very anxiously awaiting their next "date"...because what else can you call it? Poor Severus...it really is a 'date'. ;-) You have created such an incredible amount of sexual tension here, that I am looking forward to each meeting. It is wonderful. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, very anxiously awaiting more! (Yes, I know you've supplied me with 3 chapters in a week, but I'm terribly greedy!) More, more, more, I beg of you, MORE! Oh, and it would really help if you can tell which chapter # I should be begging for now.... LOL! ~Gin
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  • From ANON - lovethelab on May 16, 2005
    Great chapter as usual! I think that the idea of Hermione being Snape's weakness is wonderful. I love that he always is wanting to touch her, but does not because he will be unable to controll himself! I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings!
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  • From ANON - Susan on May 16, 2005
    I liked this chapter very much. These two seem to be wound very tight. I hope they get to kiss soon, but you did say this was going to run in 3 parts so I will wait patiently. Thanks so much for the quick updates :)
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  • From ANON - Nina Willows on May 16, 2005
    Happy Birthday to them both! And still I love this story. I enjoy how you've gone beyond what the books have said {obviously having too since your story takes place four years after the fall of Voldemort}. You, however, have gone further than other stories I've read. It makes it a comfortable and delightful read. Please continue. And a hand to your Betas {I believe that's correct, if not I apologize to them} for making sure your story is the best it can be! {That's what they do right?} Again, Happy Birthday to both your children and stay well yourself!
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  • From ANON - Miari on May 16, 2005
    THANK you for this update! Simply brilliant. Eagerly awaiting more:)
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  • From ANON - Nina Willows on May 15, 2005
    I still love it. Please post/write more soon. I hope that she's not too demanding! ;-) How old is she? I have a neice who's five at the moment and she's STILL a handful. Anyway, I LOVE this story. It's creative, interesting, and makes the reader want more. Please continue! ^_^
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  • From ANON - LoveSpell on May 14, 2005
    Oh, believe me I know how how challenging it is to write this stuff. I have three smalll children and a bigger one called a husband that distracts me. But hey, your story is good, keep it up.
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  • From ANON - Lexie on May 14, 2005
    I just thought you might want to know this:
    J.K.Rowling just updated on her website and said that there were ways a wizard could use Occlumency to block the effects of Veritaserum.

    http://www.jkrowling.com/textonly/faq_view.cfm?id=105

    I also wanted to commend you on a fantastic story. It is unlike any other fan fiction story that I've read.
    Please update ASAP!
    Happy Writing!
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  • From ANON - Miki on May 14, 2005
    AGGH - supposed to be "they're" not "their" - typing too fast!!
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  • From ANON - Miki on May 14, 2005
    Poor Hermione. I almost feel like shouting to her "Go! Just leave. It's not worth it!!!" Alas, every person has to discover their own route to happiness alone.

    I like seeing Severus nervous. Quite endearing. I like how their are slowly progressing emotionally before they are involved physically. Great buildup of tension.

    BTW....where did you say you lived? That salad sounds tasty! I might try it out on my kids - they're my guinea pigs :)
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  • From ANON - Catpower on May 14, 2005
    That last review was by me, Catpower, BTW. I forgot to fill in the name field.
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 14, 2005
    Hmmm. Good underwear obviously means Hermione would like to progress things with Severus. Her life is so miserable - of course she'd like a good shag! I suspect Ron may find Calleo's note and be suspicious. Spawn is vile (but a very interesting creation BTW), and if Hermione has to work with him she would have to hand her notice in, wouldn't she? Especially if Spawn gets the position ABOVE Hermione! I enjoy trying to guess what's going to happen in this story because you do set things up interestingly, leaving little clues. Some of the things I've guessed I'm not putting here, in case I'm right and that spoils the story for others. However, many of my guesses have been wrong, which adds to the fascination.

    Thanks for linking to the cassoulet recipe - I don't want to make it but I was interested enough to read the recipe after all this talk of "cassoulet snobbery". I like the look of your rasperry dressing though. White vinegar? Do you mean distilled malt vinegar or white wine vinegar? I don't know what Canola oil is - can you recommend a substitute? Many thanks.
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  • From ANON - Jenn on May 14, 2005
    Such a tease of a chapter? I loved it though...but patience is not one of my more endearing virtues.
    I still have a feeling that Ron is cheating.....time will reveal all secrets.
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