Reviews for And They Didn\'t Live Happily Ever AfterBy : ElizabethStump |
I just discovered this epic fanfic a couple of days ago and have enjoyed reading it straight through to this most recent 84th chapter. You've created an elaborate plot that I'm eager to read more of. Your whimsical yet erudite disclaimers are a delight and the recipes are an added treat.
Dear Betz,
Chapter 84. And so the life goes on...
The last vial-memory viewed at last, but it was quite sad, heartbreaking almost.
The last memory of the chapter...something else entirely ;-) I believe, you couldn't stop yourself from including a little lemon. Thank you ; -) I needed that too.
But as much as I appreciate some good sex, it brings us nowhere near to any solutions? Does it? I don't mean to whine, but I'm so curious and impatient...
Thank you
Fox xx
I'm back! Sorry! But anyways on to the review, -whines- but Sev does miss her, dammit all. I'm kinda sad that you killrd off Blaise but he wasn't doing much other than helping Lav (I'm still partial to her.) But anyway. WAHHHH SO CLOSE YET SO FAR -sobs- please continue
I could almost taste the cassoulet and the Amarone wine! I want a bottle of that haunting cologne! This story is a feast for the senses for any reader with a good imagination. The lingering oppression and pettiness of Dolores Umbridge, even after her death keeping Hermione's brilliance shackled in a tedious, low-level job is starting to make me seethe. And Ron? Well, good riddance to him and his oafish, self-centeredness.I hope Hermione comes to her senses and leaves him as well as that repetitive job....As you can probably tell from my comments, I find this to be a great story that has me fully invested in the characters and their lives. Continuing my binge-read now.
--Victoria
Dear Betz,
Chapter 83. Great to see another update so soon; -) I appreciate your writing regime, you're far more disciplined than I could ever be.
The chapter is great. I also thought, the letter was from Severus, damn you fooled me. Severus could really get his act together and write few words to ease her existence, honestly men can be so useless sometimes...
And of course I'm glad to see Hermione is thinking of lemons, I just hope she'll find more time to research the mistery.
Lavender/Draco's (your) idea of new office is of course brilliant.
I enjoyed this chapter far more than previous two. It gave me hope. I'm looking forward to more.
Thank you
Fox xx
I've just caught upon reading this epic from the start, ready for the latest chapter!
I have to admit, I'm intriguiged by the lemons (fruit) and the appearance of two manifestations for Hermione as there was for Severus; is there any significance? I'd like to know just what is going on with Moody, as there is definitely something very odd. Hopefully things will become clearer, with Severus and Draco getting justice, once the election is run (barring the unthinkable, and Fudge getting another term).
The only other thing to mention is I thought you were talking about real snipe in this chapter (http://www.rspb.org.uk/discoverandenjoynature/discoverandlearn/birdguide/name/s/snipe/index.aspx) and so it took me a while to catch on to the joke :D
Love the story, I hope there's a reunion soon, and the Hermione figures that those lemons and it hopefully will have something do with clearing Snape/Draco's name. I think it would be a great twist if Moody was a closet death eater. Keep up the great work!!
Dear Betz,
Chapter 82. It's lovely to read another chapter from you. I always try to check this story every few days :-)
It's coming along very nicely. It was funny when Hermione told her family, she's a witch :-)
And of course poor, poor Blaze. But if it's the same person, then they should already know, as it's known, who Pansy's killer was. Moody should be gotten rid of, vindictive old bastard.
Hermione get your arse to work! Betz don't distract her.
Thanks, Fox xx
Hi Betz,
Chapter 81. Great chapter, I enjoyed especially potions masters "socialising" event :)
It's very sad, what happened at the end of the chapter, very scary too.
Please let Hermione start proper investigation already, before they both go mad without each other.
Thank you
Fox xx
Betz,
Chapter 80.
I'm glad to find Hermione is beginning to discover things at last. I was very anxious to see the story moving forward.
It's good to see Severus settled and doing well despite sexual frustration...poor Severus. I would gladly help ; -)
Thank you
Waiting for more
Your Fox xx
I love love love LOVE this story. Even if you posted a new chapter everyday, it still wouldn't be fast enough. Keep up the great work!
Dear Betz,
Thank you for the update, I was away for some days and it's nice to come back to it.
It's very nice to see Severus' business working well. Birthday thing (Hermione's cake) was a bit sad and Harry thing (marriage), well...crazy, but good :-)
I wish Hermione would find the pensieve and start the investigation already, I'm bit impatient now and it seems as if the story isn't moving forward much. Please hurry up Betz, I need some action.
Your Fox
xx
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